【文章內容簡介】 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Hello, my classmates! Pressure is a serious problem in today39。s world. Most students in our class are under too much pressure. Some students can39。t get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams too much.I was always under pressure, too. My parents wanted me to be the top student in my class. They always sent me to all kinds of afterclasses on weekends. I had a talk with my parents and told them I had done my best. Finally, they understood me. In this way, I feel less stressed out so that I can concentrate more on my studies.Less pressure makes better life. Thank you.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們針對現在同學們普遍感到壓力大這種現象，以Less Pressure Makes Life Better為題，談談自己的看法，和同學們分享一下自己的經驗。審題可知，文章中應主要包括以下幾個內容：首先介紹同學們普遍感到壓力這種現象；然后講述自己過去曾面對的壓力；最后介紹自己如何成功緩解壓力。題目中只給出了大概的提綱，其中具體的內容應由學生們自己發(fā)揮想象力來補充，并用正確的英語表達出來。學生們可以從自身的經歷和體會出發(fā)，選取生活中常見的場景進行介紹。文章應使用一般現在時和一般過去時，注意根據表達的需要使用正確的時態(tài)，并變化謂語動詞的正確形式。句式結構可以簡單句結構為主，這樣的句式表達簡潔、明了，易于掌握。但為提升作文檔次，應穿插使用并列句和復合句，或使用一些復雜結構，如非謂語動詞、被動語態(tài)等。語句之間使用恰當的連接成分，使文意連貫?！军c睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據題目要求，談了自己對同學們普遍感到壓力大這種現象的看法，并分享了自己的經歷。短文有如下幾個優(yōu)點：首先短文內容完整，包含了題目中要求的所有信息，且層次清晰，文章分成了四段，每一段的中心話題也很明確。其次短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，文章主要使用了一般現在時和一般過去時，謂語動詞形式準確。句式結構以簡單句為主，敘述清晰、簡潔。也使用了并列句和復合句的結構，如賓語從句、狀語從句等。短文中使用了豐富的句式，如Some students can39。t get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams too much.、My parents wanted me to be the top student in my class、In this way, I feel less stressed out so that I can concentrate more on my studies等等。6．　　近年來霧霾天氣在中國許多城市頻頻發(fā)生。霧霾天氣引起大家極大的關注。請你用英語寫一篇有關霧霾的短文向?？坝⒄Z角”投稿,內容包括：1. 霧霾的危害 2. 霧霾產生的原因（2個） 3. 應對霧霾的措施（3個）提示：霧霾 smog poisonous 有毒的注意：1. 詞數110左右； 2. 可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫； 3. 開頭語已為你寫好（不計入總詞數）。In recent years, many cities in China have been hit by smog frequently, which has aroused great concern among people. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】　　In recent years, many cities in China have been hit by smog frequently, which has aroused great concern among people.　　Smog has a bad effect on people’s health. Many people, children and the old in particular, suffer from illnesses caused by smog. Consequently, citizens are warned not to go out without wearing masks. 　　How does it e about? Scientists have found that it is human activity that has caused this. The poisonous matters in the air mainly e as a result of people’s burning coal, driving cars, industry production and so on.　　What should we do to stop the situation from worsening? First, cleaner fuels for cars and stricter emission standards for factories are of vital importance. Second, for us individuals, living a green life like