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注意連句成篇,保持文章的連貫性,要層次清楚,要點(diǎn)分明,中心突出?!军c(diǎn)睛】首先認(rèn)真審題,看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn);然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容,列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá);然后緊扣要點(diǎn),動筆寫作,在寫作過程中,要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡,必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞,使文章過渡平穩(wěn),自然流暢;同時(shí)注意語句要通順,詞匯書寫無誤,不要出現(xiàn)語法錯誤。為感受母愛情深,弘揚(yáng)知恩圖報(bào),要求以Myt have much money.She sent me from piano lessons to dancing lessons at the weekend.She cooked delicious and healthy food for me.When I grow up,I will do what I can to make my mother happy.I will find a good job after I graduate from college.I39。mostlove.ThealsomysMother為主題的征文活動,請根據(jù)下列思維導(dǎo)圖所提供的信息,寫一篇短文,介紹你的母親和你之間的故事。在寫作時(shí),注意連句成篇,保持文章的連貫性,要層次清楚,要點(diǎn)分明,中心突出。請你根據(jù)下面的提示,寫一篇不少于80詞的英語短文,談一談你對智能手機(jī)的看法,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。修改潤色。初寫短文。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求,抓住要點(diǎn),詞數(shù)符合要求?!玖咙c(diǎn)說明】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文,很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù),語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣,準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致,特別適用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句,如convenient,disadvantage,in good quality,figure out,have the chance to do,be attacked by,of course,take care of等。 商品 goods。8.隨著網(wǎng)絡(luò)的發(fā)展、人們消費(fèi)觀念的轉(zhuǎn)變, 購物方式也在悄然的發(fā)生變化。最后對家鄉(xiāng)的未來表達(dá)了自己的愿望。語句之間注意使用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分,使文意連貫。審題可知,作文的基本框架和大概內(nèi)容都有了,需要注意的是在描寫過去的時(shí)候,需要適當(dāng)發(fā)揮一到兩點(diǎn);還有對將來的希望也需要學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮。be in use(投入使用);旅游:每年有成千上萬來自各地的游客。......(適當(dāng)發(fā)揮一至兩點(diǎn))現(xiàn)在環(huán)境:政府采取措施來改善污染,城市變得越來越整潔。7.書面表達(dá)某英文報(bào)舉辦“家鄉(xiāng)的變化”主題征文活動。其次要注意使用正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱,通過分析可知,這篇短文應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài),謂語動詞用原形,特別要注意謂語動詞形式要變化,這是一個(gè)寫作的難點(diǎn)。霧霾天氣引起大家極大的關(guān)注。也使用了并列句和復(fù)合句的結(jié)構(gòu),如賓語從句、狀語從句等?!军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文,短文作者根據(jù)題目要求,談了自己對同學(xué)們普遍感到壓力大這種現(xiàn)象的看法,并分享了自己的經(jīng)歷。文章應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí),注意根據(jù)表達(dá)的需要使用正確的時(shí)態(tài),并變化謂語動詞的正確形式。Less pressure makes better life. Thank you.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們針對現(xiàn)在同學(xué)們普遍感到壓力大這種現(xiàn)象,以Less Pressure Makes Life Better為題,談?wù)勛约旱目捶?,和同學(xué)們分享一下自己的經(jīng)驗(yàn)。Less Pressure Makes Better LifeHello, everyone!Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world. Most students in our class are under too much pressure. _________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Hello, my classmates! Pressure is a serious problem in today39?!军c(diǎn)睛】文章使用了很好的短語和句子:In order to make good use of the lucky money, I think we can do the following things. First, we should save part of the money for our study instead of wasting it on video 。同學(xué)們該如何管理自己的錢,讓自己的錢用得更有意義?這是一篇給材料作文,本題所給材料比較詳細(xì),寫作中注意將所給內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來,不能逐字翻譯。同學(xué)們該如何管理自己的錢,讓自己的錢用得更有意義?請結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際寫一篇文章,詞數(shù) 80 詞以上,文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)校名和人名。t talk too much, but always keeps a smile on his face.、If I need any help for my math exercises, he is always the one that can help me out.、He also does well in many sports, such as badminton and pingpang.、He is my idol and I wish I could be a student as good as he 。各部分內(nèi)容安排合理,主次分明。為提升文章檔次,應(yīng)使用高級詞匯以及復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)。寫作時(shí)應(yīng)注意:首先要符合題目要求,包括題目中要求的所有信息,不能遺漏要點(diǎn),可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,注意上下文的銜接。s pingpang petition.You can see the good personality and the spirit of persistence in this small body. He is my idol and I wish I could be a student as good as he is.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以The person who inspired me為題,介紹一個(gè)曾經(jīng)激勵過你的人。要點(diǎn): 1. What kind of person is he/ she?2. How did he/ she inspire you?要求: 1. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和校名。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維,考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。s start reading now!【解析】亮點(diǎn)說明:這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰,內(nèi)容飽滿,表達(dá)流暢。短文的開頭已為你寫好,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);2. 短文須包括所有要點(diǎn),不要逐詞翻譯,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,使短文連貫、通順;3. 短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。所以,考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn),要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式,盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。而To begin with,/ Moreover,/ Last but not least,等短語的運(yùn)用,既豐富了短文內(nèi)容,使表達(dá)多樣化,更使短文很有條理,是本文的亮點(diǎn)。2. 短文中不能出現(xiàn)正式姓名,校名。你馬上就要畢業(yè)了,在初中的學(xué)習(xí)和生活中你一定有很多收獲,請給學(xué)弟學(xué)妹們提幾點(diǎn)建議吧!要求:1. 內(nèi)容完整,語言流暢,書寫規(guī)范清晰。m going to graduate from junior high school. As your senior, I have some suggestions to the young.As old saying goes, all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. To begin