【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 跟以前比較發(fā)生了一些變化，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)所給提示以“The Changes in Class”為題目，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇100詞左右的文章，談?wù)勀愕母惺芎拖敕?，開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出（不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。 結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱(chēng)為單數(shù)第一人稱(chēng)，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫(xiě)作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系?！军c(diǎn)睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練文中運(yùn)用了一些好的句型：We can study and think by ourselves .We can discuss in groups and show ourselves. We can get more knowledge in this 。5． “美麗的瓊海我的家，人人都要保護(hù)她”。自雙創(chuàng)以來(lái)，我們的生活環(huán)境得到了很大的改觀(guān)，人人積極參與雙創(chuàng)活動(dòng)，讓人點(diǎn)贊的文明行為隨處可見(jiàn)。作為一名中學(xué)生，請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一篇短文號(hào)召大家加入到雙創(chuàng)活動(dòng)中來(lái)。要求：，意思連貫，語(yǔ)法正確，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范；，并做適當(dāng)?shù)耐卣梗?. 行文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)人名、校名或地名；4. 詞數(shù)80左右，（短文的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；Since the government created the civilized and healthy city, our living environment has improved a lot. Everyone plays an important role in building our city, so good behaviors can be seen everywhere.As junior high students,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Let’s take action now. Our actions can make a difference and lead to a more beautiful city.【答案】Since the government created civilized and healthy city, our living environment has improved a lot. Everyone plays an important role in building our city, so good behaviors can be seen everywhere.As junior high students, on the one hand, there are a lot of things we can do. We should be polite to others and try to behave well. It’s kind of you to help people in need. Meanwhile, We can help clean up our city in order to make it clearer and tidier. Also, we can plant more trees and keep off grass. On the other hand, there are many things we shouldn’t do. We shouldn’t make a lot of noise loudly in the public. We can’t spit anywhere and we shouldn’t throw rubbish everywhere. At the same time, we shouldn’t break traffic rules.Let’s take action now. Our actions can make a difference and lead to a more beautiful city.【解析】【詳解】瓊海正在進(jìn)行“雙創(chuàng)”活動(dòng)，即創(chuàng)建文明城市、創(chuàng)建健康城市，城市的生活環(huán)境有了很大的改變。這篇作文要求我們用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文，號(hào)召中學(xué)生們都參加到“雙創(chuàng)”活動(dòng)中來(lái)。題目中并沒(méi)有規(guī)定具體的寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容，而是用圖表的形式，列出了寫(xiě)作的提綱。通過(guò)審題可知，這篇短文我們應(yīng)從兩個(gè)方面來(lái)敘述：即應(yīng)該做什么；不應(yīng)該做什么。根據(jù)這個(gè)內(nèi)容，寫(xiě)作時(shí)，把短文分成兩個(gè)層次，這樣可以使文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰、條理。整篇短文應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，第一人稱(chēng)we來(lái)敘述。寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)注意：首先英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)是不同的，不能逐詞翻譯，寫(xiě)漢語(yǔ)式的英語(yǔ)，而應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)考慮，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯、短語(yǔ)和句型，以常見(jiàn)的主謂賓或者主系表構(gòu)成的簡(jiǎn)單句為主，穿插使用并列句或者復(fù)合句，改變文章節(jié)奏，提升文章檔次。語(yǔ)句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫、流暢?！军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求，向中學(xué)生們發(fā)出號(hào)召，共同參與到城市“雙創(chuàng)”活動(dòng)中來(lái)。首先短文的內(nèi)容完整，文章根據(jù)題目中列出的圖表，補(bǔ)充了具體的寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容，從應(yīng)該做的和不應(yīng)該做的兩個(gè)方面，對(duì)中學(xué)生的日常行為提出了要求。文章條理清晰，有層次。其次短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱(chēng)，語(yǔ)法規(guī)范，語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確，語(yǔ)句通順，符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。短文中句子結(jié)構(gòu)以簡(jiǎn)單句為主，也使用了并列句和復(fù)合句以及一些較復(fù)雜的高級(jí)句式，語(yǔ)句之間也使用了較好的連接成分，如We should be polite to others and try to behave well. 、It’s kind of you to help people in need. 、Meanwhile, We can help clean up our city in order to make it clearer and tidier.、We can’t spit anywhere and we shouldn’t throw rubbish everywhere. At the same time, we shouldn’t break traffic 。6． 假如你是李華，你的英國(guó)筆友 Jack 給你寫(xiě)郵件表達(dá)了想?yún)⒓幽阈Ｊ钇跒橥鈬?guó)學(xué)生舉辦的漢語(yǔ)夏令營(yíng)的愿望，希望你告知活動(dòng)舉辦的具體時(shí)間地點(diǎn)，活動(dòng)安排以及你的建議。提示詞語(yǔ)： Chinese classes, learn, attend, culture, prepare提示問(wèn)題： ● When and where will the Chinese Summer Camp be held?● What activities will be held at the Chinese Summer Camp?● What is your advice for Jack?Dear Jack,I am very glad to know that you are interested in the Chinese Summer Camp in ourschool this summer holiday . .Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Jack,I am very glad to know that you are interested in the Chinese Summer Camp in our school this summer holiday.The Chinese Summer Camp will be held in our school from July 10th to July 30th this summer. The activities of this Chinese Summer Camp are as follows:First, you will attend Chinese classes, learning the meaning of Ch