【文章內容簡介】 mobile phones. At the same time, parents and teachers should do something to help students. Only in this way can mobile phones be of help to their studies.【解析】【詳解】本篇寫作需注意要求中所提供的要點，不可遺漏。需在平時積累相關的詞匯，寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關系，上下文之間可以適當使用連接詞。如but, so, then等?？梢赃m當使用高分句型?！军c睛】高分句型：I think it is helpful for students to use mobile phones in a right way．我認為正確的方式使用手機對學生是有幫助的。I think+賓語從句。It is+形容詞 for sb to do sth做某事對某人來說是…的。6．假設你是來自中國的中學生李華,打算參加當?shù)亟M織的國外冬令營,看完了這個網(wǎng)頁后,你打算給Liz Payne留言,表達你在冬令營期間想去London Canal Museum參觀的愿望。內容包括：；（包含冬令營的時間,聽Liz Payne的講座）；。作文要求：；不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學校真實的名稱和學生的真實姓名；,詞數(shù)80個左右。作文的開頭和結尾已經(jīng)給出,不計入總詞數(shù),也不必抄寫在答題卡上。Dear Liz Payne,I’m Li Hua,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Liz Payne,I’m Li Hua, a middle school student learning in Grade 3 in China. I’m writing to tell you that our city will have a Winter Camp during this winter vacation. I hope to have a chance to visit London Canal Museum. From , I know you will have a report “An Update on the Cotswold Canals”February 6th, which will happen during the same period of our Winter Camp. And I also hope to listen to your talk so that I can know more about the Stroudwater Canal, the Thames and Severn Canal. What’s more, I hope to learn more about London Canal Museum and even more about the UK.I’m looking forward to your reply!Yours,Li Hua【解析】這篇作文要求我們以中學生李華的身份，給Liz Payne寫一個留言。文章內容主要包括三個部分：首先是介紹自己的身份；然后寫留言的目的，包括冬令營的時間、想要去參觀London Canal Museum以及聽Liz Payne的講座；最后簡單介紹一下你的預期的收獲。寫作時，應根據(jù)題目的這些要求，組織語言，串聯(lián)成一篇短文。通過分析可知，這篇短文應使用第一人稱I來敘述，時態(tài)應以一般將來時態(tài)和一般現(xiàn)在時為主。注意英語句子的表達和漢語習慣是不同的，不能逐詞翻譯，而應從句子的整體考慮，使用正確的句式結構以及適當?shù)脑~匯、短語和句型，保證句子的準確性和語言的地道。另外還應注意語句之間使用恰當?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫。穿插一些高級詞匯和復雜句式，提升文章檔次和水平，使表達更加流暢。點睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。首先短文內容完整，包含了題目要求的所有信息，沒有遺漏要點。作者主要從三個方面敘述：首先介紹了自己的身份和寫留言的目的；接下來詳細介紹了自己參加這次冬令營的愿望；最后是一個簡單的結尾。如果分段敘述效果則會更好，那樣會使文章的層次更加清晰。其次短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，文章以第一人稱、一般將來時和一般現(xiàn)在時為主，謂語動詞形式準發(fā)，語法規(guī)范，符合英語句子的表達習慣。短文以簡單句結構為主，也使用了一些復合句和較高級的句型，如I’m writing to tell you that our city will have a Winter Camp during this winter ；From , I know you will have a report “An Update on the Cotswold Canals” February 6th, which will happen during the same period of our Winter ；And I also hope to listen to your talk so that I can know more about the Stroudwater Canal, the Thames and Severn 。整篇文章語句通順、意思連貫、表達流暢。7．書面表達假如你是華,你的英國筆友對中國文化很感興趣,想到中國旅行感受中國文化。你想請他來你的家鄉(xiāng)一安徴一游,請你根據(jù)以下提示用英文給他寫一封電子郵件。1位置:中國東部,安做省南部: :春暖花開,秋季涼爽:山和古村落: :茶、黃梅戲提示詞:黃梅戲 Huangmei Opera注意:,使行文連貫。,不計入總詞數(shù)Dear DaveI know that you are interested in Chinese culture and Im glad you are planning a trip to China. Why not e to Anhui, my home town, to have fun?【答案】Dear Dave，I know you are interested in Chinese culture and I’m glad you are planning a trip to China. Why not e to Anhui, my hometown, to have some fun.Anhui Province lies in the east of China. The best time to e here is in autumn, because it’s really cool and you can just take some light coats. There are many famous places to see. For example, Mt. Huangshan, where you will see wonderful plants and special rocks. Besides, Anhui is also famous for ancient vill