【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 o we did the survey on the activity of “Grabbing red packets” among students.About 75% of them think it is a popular form of entertainment, bring them more fun. It can bring people closer , they can make more friends .Grabbing red packets has been part of people’s lives. About 25% of them say some people spend too much time grabbing red packets. They don’t have enough munication with their family members .They may feel a little lonelyPersonally, there39。s no doubt that not only does it bring people happiness, but also send blessings to people in a special form. Also, it39。s obvious that it is more convenient. However, as a saying goes, each coin has two sides. It is not an exception, it also has some bad effects. If people can39。t grab the red packets, people may feel sad or illtempered ,even break their cell phones. What39。s worse, it may lead to the crime.【解析】這篇作文要求我們對(duì)學(xué)校進(jìn)行的關(guān)于春節(jié)搶紅包這件事的調(diào)查結(jié)果進(jìn)行總結(jié)，并談?wù)勛约簩?duì)這件事情的看法。題目中給出了一個(gè)表格，里面包括了支持搶紅包這個(gè)游戲的人們的觀點(diǎn)以及反對(duì)這個(gè)游戲的人們的觀點(diǎn)和理由，只給了一些短語(yǔ)，我們需要組織語(yǔ)言，將這些要點(diǎn)用正確的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)出來(lái)，并使文章內(nèi)容更加豐富、完整。最后還要加上自己的看法。因此文章的內(nèi)容應(yīng)主要包括三部分：支持的人們的理由；反對(duì)者們的理由；自己的看法，可以分成兩段或者三段來(lái)敘述，這樣可以使文章結(jié)構(gòu)清楚，有層次。寫(xiě)作時(shí)，應(yīng)注意英語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)的不同，不要逐詞翻譯，應(yīng)從句子整體結(jié)構(gòu)出發(fā)，以簡(jiǎn)單句為主，穿插并列句和復(fù)合句。為提升文章檔次，還應(yīng)注意使用高級(jí)句型和較復(fù)雜的句式。語(yǔ)句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文章整體意思連貫、表達(dá)流暢。點(diǎn)睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。首先短文內(nèi)容完整、結(jié)構(gòu)清晰。文章分為三段，第一段是題目中已經(jīng)給出的，因此了文章的話題。第二段中作者表述了支持和反對(duì)玩這個(gè)游戲的人們各自的理由；第三段中作者發(fā)表了自己的看法。其次短文中語(yǔ)言得體，句式準(zhǔn)確，符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。文章以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)為主，特別注意了謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的正確形式，語(yǔ)法規(guī)范、準(zhǔn)確。短文中使用了較豐富的句型，如About 75% of them think it is a popular form of entertainment, bring them more fun.、Grabbing red packets has been part of people’s lives、About 25% of them say some people spend too much time grabbing red packets、Personally, there39。s no doubt that not only does it bring people happiness, but also send blessings to people in a special form.、If people can39。t grab the red packets, people may feel sad or illtempered ,even break their cell 。文章中也出現(xiàn)了一些語(yǔ)法上的小錯(cuò)誤，總的來(lái)說(shuō)，不影響整篇文章的質(zhì)量。5．書(shū)面表達(dá)假設(shè)你將代表你校2009屆畢業(yè)生在學(xué)校畢業(yè)典禮上發(fā)言，請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇發(fā)言稿，發(fā)言稿的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：回顧美麗的校園、生動(dòng)有趣的教學(xué)、三年來(lái)的收獲；感謝老師的培養(yǎng)、父母的支持、同學(xué)的幫助；祝愿（考生自擬，至少兩點(diǎn)）。注意：1. 90詞左右。發(fā)言稿的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2. 發(fā)言稿須包括所有要點(diǎn)，不要逐詞翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連貫、通順；發(fā)言稿不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen, my dear teachers and fellow graduates. It is a great honour for me to make a speech on behalf of the graduating class of 2009. Thank you for listening!【答案】Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen, my dear teachers and fellow graduates. It is a great honour for me to make a speech on behalf of the graduating class of 2009.It has been three great years for us to study in this beautiful school. Our teachers always try to make their lessons lively and interesting. We have learned a lot over these years, but we could hardly succeed without our teachers39。 efforts, our parents39。 support and our classmates39。 help. At this moment, I would like to thank all of you for what you have done for us.I wish our school more beautiful and all of us a wonderful future!Goodbye, our beautiful school, our dear teachers and our friends.Thank you for listening!【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，根據(jù)所給提示用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇發(fā)言稿，內(nèi)容包括回顧美麗的校園、生動(dòng)有趣的教學(xué)、三年來(lái)的收獲；感謝老師的培養(yǎng)、父母的支持、同學(xué)的幫助；祝愿，在寫(xiě)作中適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，語(yǔ)句通順，符合邏輯，符合發(fā)言稿的格式，沒(méi)有出現(xiàn)自己的真實(shí)姓名。6．環(huán)境保護(hù)人人有責(zé)， 如果我們每一個(gè)人都能珍愛(ài)美麗地球 保護(hù)自然資源，相信我們的家園會(huì)越來(lái)越美好。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開(kāi)展以“Going Green”為主題的征文活動(dòng)。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文投稿，談?wù)勎覀兠媾R的主要環(huán)境問(wèn)題是什么，為改善環(huán)境我們能做什么，以及你的期望。提示詞語(yǔ)： pollution, protect, save, recycle, take action提示問(wèn)題：● What are the main environmental problems we have?● What can we do in our daily life? ● What’s your wish?Now there are many environmental 【答案】例文Now there are many environmental problems. Such as air pollution, water pollution and so on.I believe that there are many things we can do in our daily life, we can save energy by go to school by bike or on foot. We can use less water by turning off the tap while we brush our teeth, and taking shorter showers. When we see litter on the ground, we must pick it up and put it into different bins. I hope everyone can take action. Although each one of us may only do a little, together we can make a big difference. Let’s work together to make a better place to live.【解析】【詳解】題干解讀：該題目屬于說(shuō)明文寫(xiě)作，寫(xiě)作時(shí)要把我們面臨的主要環(huán)境問(wèn)題是什么，為改善環(huán)境我們能做什么，以及你的期望全部包括。例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：例文采用的是三段式；用第一人稱(chēng)來(lái)敘述為改善環(huán)境我們能做什么；時(shí)態(tài)采用的是一般