【文章內容簡介】 f eating Zongzi and racing dragonboat on the Dragon Boat Festival.China is a nation of etiquette （禮儀）. Chinese people can respect, trust and help each other. We all learn and grow together. Everyone in my school should protect the whole public environment. Climbing the trees, picking the flowers and throwing garbage at random are not allowed there.I hope you can e to China someday to experience the ancient culture of China. Look forward to hearing from you soon.All the best.Li Hua【解析】【分析】本文要求給你的印度朋友Danny寫一篇關于華夏文明的回信?！驹斀狻课恼滦枰榻B下中國的文化。表格中列舉了三個要點，寫作時注意不要漏寫。平時注意多多積累句型、短語。細心檢查避免疏漏。以圖表展示的作文要以“讀”為主，首先要認真讀懂圖表中的要求，對所給信息加以分析、推斷、篩選、概括，去粗取精；在寫作時目的要明確，要注意內容的準確性和嚴肅性。【點睛】寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關系，上下文之間可以適當使用連接詞。如but, so, then等。可以適當使用高分句子。本篇文章寫的好的句子有：Chinese civilization is one of the oldest and longest civilizations in the world．中華文明是世界上最古老、最悠久的文明之一。China is a nation of etiquette（禮儀），中國是一個禮儀之邦。6．書面表達初中畢業(yè)在即, 回顧三年的學習生活, 你一定有成功的體驗, 如一次考試, 一次比賽, 一次表演...... 請你以Believe Myself, and I Will Win為題寫一篇演講稿。提示：（1）What was the event?（2）How did you make it?（3）What’s your feeling?要求：（1）發(fā)言稿中須包括所有提示內容, 可適當發(fā)揮。（2）發(fā)言稿中不得出現真實的人名、校名和地名。（3）詞數80個左右（開頭和結尾已給出, 不計入總詞數）。Believe Myself, and I Will WinHello, everyone!___________________________________________________________________________Thank you for your listening.【答案】Believe Myself, and I will winHello, everyone! As an old saying goes, where there is a will, there is a way. There always are difficulties in our life and we have to face them.When I was in the seventh grade, I always had difficulty in learning English. I just couldn’t understand it. I even wanted to give it up. Then my parents told me that where there is a will, there is a way. They also told me that I should be confident. My English teacher encouraged me to continue to study and told me some good ways to study it. I had the confidence again. I found when I put my heart into it, English didn’t’ seem that difficult. I made great progress. My parents and teachers were happy for me. I felt pleased and proud for myself, too. To be confident means I should believe myself. Believe myself, there are hopes in my life. In the future, I won39。t be afraid of the difficulties in my life and I39。m sure that nothing can beat me and I will win! Believe myself, a beautiful future is waiting for me.Thank you for your listening.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以Believe Myself and I will win為題，寫一篇演講稿。題目中用問題的形式給出了提示，審題可知，文章應包括以下內容：首先敘述你生活中遇到的一件困難的事；然后介紹你是如何克服了這個困難，最后取得成功的；最后說一下你自己的感受。寫作時學生們應根據這幾個內容提要，發(fā)揮自己的想象力，將這些內容補充完整，用正確的英語表達出來。短文應以一般現在時和一般過去時為主，注意謂語動詞的正確形式。寫作時應注意：首先要保證發(fā)言稿中包括了所有提示的內容，不能遺漏要點，可以根據表達需要適當發(fā)揮，但要與上下文意銜接起來。其次要注意英語的表達習慣和漢語是不同的，不能按照漢語思維，逐詞翻譯。應從句子的整體結構出發(fā)，選擇適當句型、短語、詞匯進行表達。句式結構可以簡單句為主，穿插并列句或復合句。為提升文章檔次，應注意銜接詞以及高級句式或復雜結構的使用。【點睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據題目要求，寫了一篇演講稿。文章有以下幾個優(yōu)點：首先短文內容完整，包括了題目中要求的所有內容，沒有遺漏要點。各部分內容安排合理，層次清晰。短文主要分成三段，每一段主題都很明確，敘述詳細、清楚。其次短文使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，短文主要使用了一般現在時和一般過去時，動詞形式變化準確，尤其注意了不規(guī)則動詞的過去式形式，語法規(guī)范，用詞準確。文章中句式變化豐富，有簡單句、并列句、復合句，長短句結合，增強了文章的表現力。短文中使用了較豐富的句型，如When I was in the seventh grade, I always had difficulty in learning English.、My English teacher encouraged me to continue to study and told me some good ways to study it.、I found when I put my heart into it, English didn’t’ seem that difficult、In the future, I won39。t be afraid of the difficulties in my life and I39。m sure that nothing can beat me and I will win!等等。7．假設你是來自中國的中學生李華,打算參加當地組織的國外冬令營,看完了這個網頁后,你打算給Liz Payne留言,表達你在冬令營期間想去London Canal Museum參觀的愿望。內容包括：；（包含冬令營的時間,聽Liz Payne的講座）；。作文要求：；不得在作文中出現學校真實的名稱和學生的真實姓名；,詞數80個左右。作文的開頭和結尾已經給出,不計入總詞數,也不必抄寫在答題卡上。Dear Liz Payne,I’m Li Hua,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Liz Payne,I’m Li Hua, a middle school student learning in Grade 3 in China. I’m writing to tell you that our city will have a