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it, English didn’t’ seem that difficult、In the future, I won39。t be afraid of the difficulties in my life and I39。m sure that nothing can beat me and I will win!等等。5.書面表達根據(jù)要求完成短文寫作,請將作文寫在答題卡指定的位置上。每年春節(jié),每個孩子都能收到來自長輩的壓歲錢(lucky money)。隨著生活水平的提高,大部分孩子得到越來越多的壓歲錢,有些甚至通過微信(WeChat)或支付寶(Alipay)收壓歲錢。同學們該如何管理自己的錢,讓自己的錢用得更有意義?請結(jié)合自己的實際寫一篇文章,詞數(shù) 80 詞以上,文中不能出現(xiàn)真實校名和人名。內(nèi)容包括如下:1. 你的壓歲錢的來源和用途;2. 對合理使用壓歲錢的建議(至少 3 點);3. 呼吁大家節(jié)約用錢,把自己的壓歲錢用在最需要、最有意義的地方?!敬鸢浮縀very Spring Festival I receive a lot of lucky money from my parents and relatives. Now I even get it through WeChat or Alipay. I usually buy some of my favorite books, school things and some fancy clothes. Sometimes I also buy some gifts for my parents.In order to make good use of the lucky money, I think we can do the following things. First, we should save part of the money for our study instead of wasting it on video games. Second, it is a good idea to buy something useful for our parents or teachers so that we can show our love to them. What is more, why not donate our lucky money to the poor kids in need? Helping others makes us happy.All in all, let us manage our lucky money properly. We should use our money in a meaningful way.【解析】【詳解】每年春節(jié),每個孩子都能收到來自長輩的壓歲錢(luckymoney)。隨著生活水平的提高,大部分孩子得到越來越多的壓歲錢,有些甚至通過微信(WeChat)或支付寶(Alipay)收壓歲錢。同學們該如何管理自己的錢,讓自己的錢用得更有意義?這是一篇給材料作文,本題所給材料比較詳細,寫作中注意將所給內(nèi)容表達出來,不能逐字翻譯。通過閱讀材料可知這篇短文主要使用的人稱就是第一人稱,時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài),注意謂語動詞的變化。動筆前可以按照材料內(nèi)容列出簡單提綱,寫作中注意語義通順,符合邏輯關(guān)系。上下文之間可以適當使用連接詞?!军c睛】文章使用了很好的短語和句子:In order to make good use of the lucky money, I think we can do the following things. First, we should save part of the money for our study instead of wasting it on video 。6.書面表達某英文報舉辦“家鄉(xiāng)的變化”主題征文活動。請根據(jù)下表提示,以“The Changes in My Hometown”為題,用英語寫一篇100詞左右的短文,不必逐字逐句翻譯。過去生活條件差,道路狹窄,房屋破舊。污染嚴重,垃圾遍地。......(適當發(fā)揮一至兩點)現(xiàn)在環(huán)境:政府采取措施來改善污染,城市變得越來越整潔。生活:住房寬敞明亮;許多人搬進了新公寓。越來越多的人有自己的汽車;生活舒適。交通:新的飛機場已投入使用多年。be in use(投入使用);旅游:每年有成千上萬來自各地的游客。將來希望……(兩點)要求:1. 短文的開頭已為你寫好,不計入總詞數(shù);2. 短文必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點,并適當發(fā)揮,使短文連貫通順;3. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名、地名等相關(guān)信息。Changes my hometownMy hometown has changed a lot over the years.In the past, _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】My hometown has changed a lot over the years.In the past, my hometown was very poor and the streets were very narrow. Houses were small and old. Rubbish was everywhere. Few people would like to e to my hometown. Now the government takes measures to improve the pollution and the city bees cleaner and cleaner. The houses are big and bright. Many people have moved into new apartments. More and more people have their own cars and live a fortable life. The new airport has been in use for two years. There are thousands of tourists from all over the country every hope my hometown is being more and more beautiful.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以The Changes in My Hometown為題,介紹一下自己的家鄉(xiāng)這些年來發(fā)生的變化。題目中用表格的形式,給我們對比的家鄉(xiāng)的過去和現(xiàn)在,我們應用正確的英語將這些內(nèi)容表達出來,并對將來提出兩點希望。審題可知,作文的基本框架和大概內(nèi)容都有了,需要注意的是在描寫過去的時候,需要適當發(fā)揮一到兩點;還有對將來的希望也需要學生自己發(fā)揮。這兩個地方需要學生們展開想象,合理發(fā)揮,注意要與文章的其他部分能夠很好的結(jié)合起來,內(nèi)容也要統(tǒng)一,符合題目要求,合情合理。表達時,需要注意英語表達習慣和漢語是不同的,不能逐詞翻譯表格中的語句,而應從句子的整體考慮,使用恰當?shù)脑~匯、短語和句型來表達。注意句式的多變,長短句結(jié)合、簡單句、并列句或復合句穿插使用,提升文章的檔次。語句之間注意使用適當?shù)倪B接成分,使文意連貫?!军c睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文,短文作者按照題目要求,介紹了自己的家鄉(xiāng)這些年來的變化。文章是按照時間的順序,先介紹了家鄉(xiāng)過去的面貌,這一部分