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的家鄉(xiāng)旅游,并介紹了家鄉(xiāng)的景點(diǎn)和文化。短文有如下幾個(gè)特點(diǎn):首先文章內(nèi)容完整,包含了題目中要求的所有內(nèi)容,并對(duì)細(xì)節(jié)進(jìn)行補(bǔ)充和修飾,使內(nèi)容更加充實(shí)、豐富。短文先對(duì)Dave發(fā)出邀請(qǐng),然后具體介紹了家鄉(xiāng)的位置、景點(diǎn)、文化等,并提出了建議。全文敘述清晰,層次清楚,主次分明。第二,短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱,語(yǔ)法規(guī)范,用詞準(zhǔn)確,句式結(jié)構(gòu)完整,符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。短文以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)來敘述,注意了謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞第三人稱單數(shù)形式的變化。句式結(jié)構(gòu)以簡(jiǎn)單句為主,也使用了并列句、賓語(yǔ)從句、狀語(yǔ)從句等復(fù)合句,還有一些好的句型,如The best time to e here is in autumn, because it’s really cool and you can just take some light coats、Besides, Anhui is also famous for ancient villages such as Xidi, Hongcun and so on.、What’s more, e and watch Huangmei Opera. It’s easy to understand and won’t let you down!、I’m looking forward to seeing you here!等。5.環(huán)保話題是人們最關(guān)心的話題之一,請(qǐng)以Change for a better China為主題,結(jié)合自己家鄉(xiāng)的變化寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文。注意事項(xiàng):,條理清楚,作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。,詞數(shù)不少于80。 狀況水污染,大氣污染...... 應(yīng)對(duì)措施立即阻止此類活動(dòng),治理環(huán)境(至少兩條)...... 感想建議環(huán)境能夠變得更好......Change for a better China________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】We all know it is being more and more important to protect our environment well. But some people don’t care about it .They throw litter into the river and even worse factories also put waste into the river, the river is full of rubbish. The air is badly polluted because there are more cars on the road these days. Factories that burn coal also pollute the air with a lot of black smoke. We hardly ever see blue skies anymore.I think everyone in our hometown should play a part in cleaning it up. We should write to the government ,they should close down the factories. Trees are very helpful and important for the environment .We can plant more trees and more trees in order to live better and more healthy .Now, Our hometown has started to face the problem, I believe we can make our country a better place if we keep trying.【解析】【詳解】環(huán)保話題是人們最關(guān)心的話題之一,請(qǐng)以Change for a better China為主題,結(jié)合自己家鄉(xiāng)的變化寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文。要求中已經(jīng)給出了部分提示,動(dòng)筆先應(yīng)先認(rèn)真閱讀提示,確定寫作內(nèi)容。寫作中注意表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)時(shí)的常用句式,注意在表達(dá)不同觀點(diǎn)時(shí),連詞的使用。內(nèi)容上應(yīng)注意描述的全面性;語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu),造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣?!军c(diǎn)睛】本文緊扣要求對(duì)家鄉(xiāng)做了簡(jiǎn)單介紹,內(nèi)容完整,用了表格中的信息。2.句式豐富。表述靈活。銜接自然,順暢。文中用到了一些好的句型:The air is badly polluted because there are more cars on the road these days.;We can plant more trees and more trees in order to live better and more 。6. 書面表達(dá)請(qǐng)將短文寫在答題卡相應(yīng)的位置上。一直以來,同學(xué)們對(duì)作業(yè)持有不同的觀點(diǎn)。在你班的主題班會(huì)上,同學(xué)們進(jìn)行了“Is daily homework necessary?”的討論,請(qǐng)你根據(jù)提示和要求,并結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際經(jīng)驗(yàn),發(fā)表你的觀點(diǎn)。YesNoHelp us understand what we have learned;Practice makes prefect;...Take up too much time;Make us less interested in studying;...Your opinion:要求:1.80詞以上。2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名。【答案】Dear students,I39。m glad to give a report about my ideas on daily homework. I think it39。s necessary for us to do daily homework.Doing daily homework can help us understand what we have learned in class. For me, I always have some difficulties in mastering all of what I have learned in class. Through daily homework, I review the knowledge and think over the difficulties. Little by little, I have a better understanding. So I always believe “Practice makes perfect”.In my opinion, daily homework is necessary for us students. But it shouldn39。t be too much. It can improve our skills. Daily homework should be different and colorful. It might be some extensive reading, a paper or even just a game. We should be left enough free time so that we can do things we really like to do.That39。s all. Thanks.【解析】寫作分析:審題之后能明白寫作任務(wù)是要寫出一篇小論文,討論每日的作業(yè)到底是不是必要的。首先需要陳述正反兩方面的觀點(diǎn),其次結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際經(jīng)驗(yàn)