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_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Best wishes,Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Peppa,Thank you for your last letter asking about our discussion on lowcarbon lifestyle. Here is something about it.We can do a lot in our daily life to achieve the goal of low carbon life. First, we’d better turn off lights if possible and spend less time watching TV or surfing the Internet. Saving water also matters much. Besides, we should sort out the rubbish, hoping that we might recycle some, which will surely benefit us a great deal. In addition, we suggest using handkerchiefs instead of tissues so that we can prevent more trees from being cut down. More importantly, when we go out, walking, riding bikes or taking buses should be our first choice, which contributes to a cleaner world.Best wishes,Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】這是一篇給材料作文,向我的英國朋友Peppa寫信,介紹我們班就低碳生活方式進(jìn)行的討論情況?!驹斀狻拷Y(jié)合所給材料,可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài),人稱為第一,三人稱,注意主謂一致問題,句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu),注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用,比如:We can do……,we’d better……,we suggest……,which contributes to……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運用代詞,注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序,符合邏輯關(guān)系。【點睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,語言簡練。開頭我要介紹我們班就低碳生活方式進(jìn)行了討論,接下來介紹我們?yōu)榈吞忌羁梢宰龅氖隆4颂巃sk about, turn off, sort out, in addition, instead of, contribute to等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。5.(題文) 書面表達(dá)在中學(xué)生機(jī)器人大賽上,出現(xiàn)了一種專門照顧老人的新型家用智能機(jī)器人,它的主要功能有:1. 定時做飯、洗衣服; 2. 陪老人聊天、下棋、做運動;3. 處理緊急情況(如:撥打120)假如你是該機(jī)器人的發(fā)明者,請你介紹這個產(chǎn)品,并談?wù)勀愕奈磥碓O(shè)想。要求:1. 意思連貫,語句通順;2. 詞數(shù)80詞左右;短文的開頭已給出(不計入總詞數(shù)) 3. 參考詞匯: at a fixed time 定時emergency 緊急情況 cpany sb. 陪伴某人Ladies and gentlemen,Thank you for attending our robot show. Now I’d like to introduce my new invention to all of you. 【答案】Ladies and gentlemen,Thank you for attending our robot show. Now I’d like to introduce my new invention to all of you.I invented the new robot mainly to help the elderly at home. It can cook meals and do some washing at a fixed time. When old people feel alone, it can also acpany them by having a chat, playing chess or doing exercise. What’s more, it can deal with some emergencies. For example, if an old man falls ill suddenly, the robot will call doctors immediately for help.I’m sure my new invention will be a great help to the elderly. I think in the future people will live a more fortable life with the help of new robots.【解析】亮點說明:這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰,內(nèi)容飽滿,表達(dá)流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語,例如thank you for doing,I’d like to do,introduce sb. to,all of you,at home,do some washing,at a fixed time,have a chat,play chess,do exercise,deal with,a great help,in the future等。而Thank you for attending our robot show./ I invented the new robot mainly to help the elderly at home. / I think in the future people will live a more fortable life with the help of new ,豐富了習(xí)作內(nèi)容,使表達(dá)多樣化,是本文的最大亮點。點睛:書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英,也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維,考查運用所學(xué)英語知識準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以,考生不能遺漏要點,要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式,盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。6.馬上要初中畢業(yè)了,大家都是依依不舍的。班主任決定在下周舉辦一場“My Life At School” 主題 班會 , 邀請全班同學(xué)參加。請你根據(jù)以下提示,寫一篇發(fā)言稿。美好的回憶; ;; 。不開心的事情; 。未來展望1. 升上理想的學(xué)校;2. 能結(jié)識更多朋友;3. 請你補(bǔ)充(至少兩點)My Life At SchoolHow time flies! It39。s unbelievable that I39。m going to graduate from my beloved school. 【答案】My Life At SchoolHow time flies! It’s unbelievable that I’m going to graduate from my beloved school. There are many things to remember. In the junior school, I got along well with my classmates. The teachers are very friendly and they are ready to help me. The most unforgettable thing is that I got a chance of being an exchange students and spent two months in Australia. I learned a lot from the experience. I also remember I served as volunt