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eyesight from being nearsighted.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇材料作文,根據(jù)表格中的相關(guān)信息介紹一下如何保護視力。所提供的表格中列舉了近視的原因和建議。主要從原因和建議兩個方面去介紹。時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時。注意作文中必須包含表格上的所有信息,并適當發(fā)揮。寫作時,避免使用漢語式的英語,盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語。語法要正確,表達要符合英語習(xí)慣,注意時態(tài)、時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中要注意使用祈使句,使上下文聯(lián)系緊密,符合邏輯關(guān)系,表達具有條理性?!靖叻志湫鸵弧縎o it is important for everyone to keep good eyesight. 所以保持良好的視力對每個人都很重要。本題運用句型:It is +形容詞+for sb. to so sth. 【高分句型二】And when you read you should keep the book away from your eyes for about a foot. 當你讀這本書的時候,你應(yīng)該把它從你的眼睛里移開一英尺。when you read是由when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句。5. 寫作假定你是李華,在一位名叫Tiger Mom的學(xué)生家長的博客上,你看到以下內(nèi)容。 請你根據(jù)博客內(nèi)容,寫作要點和要求,給這位家長回復(fù)。 I’m the mother of a fourteenyear –old . I have a rule for my daughter :be among the top of 5 students or get punished in one way or another . She has been doing very well in school ,but some of my friends keep telling me that I put too much pressure on her .Am I wrong ? 寫作要點:1. 表明自己的看法。 2. 陳述自己的理由。3. 提出至少2條建議?!敬鸢浮縃i,TigerMom,What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in idea is that it is not quiteright for you to do so.Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and for their future university admission,development in wisdom,emotion,health,and life attitude should never be ignored. There are many examples around us. Some allA students in school have turned out not to be as successful insociety as they were expected. The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities. Furthermore,punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up mentally and physically.So I suggest that you take your friends39。 advice. More importantly,let her live like a lovely girl;let herhave more friends and social activities;and let her make mistakes of her own as the teenagers often do.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文,對學(xué)生家長的博客進行回復(fù)。結(jié)合所給材料,可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài),人稱為第一,三人稱,注意主謂一致問題,句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu),注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用,比如:My idea is that……,There are……,Some allA students in school have…….,The reason is……,So I suggest that……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運用代詞,注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序,符合邏輯關(guān)系。點睛:本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,語言簡練。開頭表明自己的看法,接下來陳述自己的理由,最后介紹自己的建議。此處turn out , by no means, help sb do sth, grow up, let sb do sth, make mistakes, of one’s own等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。6.Life is just like a mirror, you smile at it, and it smiles at you, too. 請你以“Learn to Smile”為題,根據(jù)下表所列的要點寫一篇100詞左右的文章(文章開頭已給出)。學(xué)會對自己微笑面對困難與煩惱學(xué)會微笑(考試失利、被別人誤解等)。使你自信,擊敗你的人有時就是你自己。有益于身心健康。學(xué)會對他人微笑便于與他人之間的交流。給別人帶來快樂,自己也快樂。微笑是一種語言人人都能懂,傳遞友誼,拉近距離。參考詞匯: 對某人微笑 smile at sb. 誤解 misunderstand短文必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點,不要逐字翻譯,可適當發(fā)揮,使短文連貫通順。 Learn to SmileI remember a song by Westlife, the first sentence of it is “Just a smile and the rain is gone.” Do you like smiling? I think you should learn to smile ._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Learn to SmileI remember a song by Westlife, the first sentence of it is “Just a smile and the rain is gone.”Do you like smiling? I think you should learn to smile .First, learn to smile at yourself when something unpleasant happens in your life. If you fail an exam or you are misunderstood by your friends, don’t be sad. Just smile at yourself . Smiling at yourself brings back your confidence . Sometime