【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 l, is celebrated on the fifth day of the fifth month according to the Chinese calendar. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.【答案】Dear fellows, The Dragon Boat Festival, also called the Duanwu Festival, is celebrated on the fifth day of the fifth month according to the Chinese celebrate the holiday on June18 this year . People hold the dragonboat races in memory of Qu Yuan,one of the greatest poets in China. We can watch the dragonboat races and eat a kind of Chinese food named Zongzi during the Dragon boat Festival. People always hang Calamus and Moxa on the wele to experience this traditional festival with friends from all over the world.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，向來(lái)自不同國(guó)家的同學(xué)介紹中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日——端午節(jié)。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，比如：People celebrate……，People hold……，We can watch……，We wele to……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫(xiě)作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。點(diǎn)睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開(kāi)頭介紹了今年端午節(jié)慶祝時(shí)間，接下來(lái)介紹端午節(jié)的由來(lái)以及慶?；顒?dòng)，最后歡迎大家一起體驗(yàn)這個(gè)傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日。此處according to, in memory of, a kind of, on the day, wele to do sth, all over the world等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。6．書(shū)面表達(dá)某英文報(bào)舉辦“家鄉(xiāng)的變化”主題征文活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表提示，以“The Changes in My Hometown”為題，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇100詞左右的短文，不必逐字逐句翻譯。過(guò)去生活條件差，道路狹窄，房屋破舊。污染嚴(yán)重，垃圾遍地。......（適當(dāng)發(fā)揮一至兩點(diǎn)）現(xiàn)在環(huán)境：政府采取措施來(lái)改善污染，城市變得越來(lái)越整潔。生活：住房寬敞明亮；許多人搬進(jìn)了新公寓。越來(lái)越多的人有自己的汽車；生活舒適。交通：新的飛機(jī)場(chǎng)已投入使用多年。be in use（投入使用）；旅游：每年有成千上萬(wàn)來(lái)自各地的游客。將來(lái)希望……（兩點(diǎn)）要求：1. 短文的開(kāi)頭已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2. 短文必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連貫通順；3. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名、地名等相關(guān)信息。Changes my hometownMy hometown has changed a lot over the years.In the past, _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】My hometown has changed a lot over the years.In the past, my hometown was very poor and the streets were very narrow. Houses were small and old. Rubbish was everywhere. Few people would like to e to my hometown. Now the government takes measures to improve the pollution and the city bees cleaner and cleaner. The houses are big and bright. Many people have moved into new apartments. More and more people have their own cars and live a fortable life. The new airport has been in use for two years. There are thousands of tourists from all over the country every hope my hometown is being more and more beautiful.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以The Changes in My Hometown為題，介紹一下自己的家鄉(xiāng)這些年來(lái)發(fā)生的變化。題目中用表格的形式，給我們對(duì)比的家鄉(xiāng)的過(guò)去和現(xiàn)在，我們應(yīng)用正確的英語(yǔ)將這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)，并對(duì)將來(lái)提出兩點(diǎn)希望。審題可知，作文的基本框架和大概內(nèi)容都有了，需要注意的是在描寫(xiě)過(guò)去的時(shí)候，需要適當(dāng)發(fā)揮一到兩點(diǎn)；還有對(duì)將來(lái)的希望也需要學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮。這兩個(gè)地方需要學(xué)生們展開(kāi)想象，合理發(fā)揮，注意要與文章的其他部分能夠很好的結(jié)合起來(lái)，內(nèi)容也要統(tǒng)一，符合題目要求，合情合理。表達(dá)時(shí)，需要注意英語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)是不同的，不能逐詞翻譯表格中的語(yǔ)句，而應(yīng)從句子的整體考慮，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯、短語(yǔ)和句型來(lái)表達(dá)。注意句式的多變，長(zhǎng)短句結(jié)合、簡(jiǎn)單句、并列句或復(fù)合句穿插使用，提升文章的檔次。語(yǔ)句之間注意使用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫?！军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者按照題目要求，介紹了自己的家鄉(xiāng)這些年來(lái)的變化。文章是按照時(shí)間的順序，先介紹了家鄉(xiāng)過(guò)去的面貌，這一部分使用了過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞都變成了過(guò)去式，形式準(zhǔn)確。然后是家鄉(xiāng)現(xiàn)在的樣子，這里主要以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)為主。最后對(duì)家鄉(xiāng)的未來(lái)表達(dá)了自己的愿望。整篇文章內(nèi)容充實(shí)、完整，敘述清晰、條理，結(jié)構(gòu)合理。文章中語(yǔ)言得體，語(yǔ)句通順，句式表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)的習(xí)慣，語(yǔ)法規(guī)范、準(zhǔn)確。短文里還使用了一些較好的短語(yǔ)和句型，如In the past, my hometown was very poor and the streets were very narrow.、Now the government takes measures to improve the pollut