【文章內容簡介】 mall thin boy with two big black eyes.、He doesn39。t talk too much, but always keeps a smile on his face.、If I need any help for my math exercises, he is always the one that can help me out.、He also does well in many sports, such as badminton and pingpang.、He is my idol and I wish I could be a student as good as he 。5． “美麗的瓊海我的家，人人都要保護她”。自雙創(chuàng)以來，我們的生活環(huán)境得到了很大的改觀，人人積極參與雙創(chuàng)活動，讓人點贊的文明行為隨處可見。作為一名中學生，請你寫一篇短文號召大家加入到雙創(chuàng)活動中來。要求：，意思連貫，語法正確，書寫規(guī)范；，并做適當?shù)耐卣梗?. 行文中不得出現(xiàn)真實人名、校名或地名；4. 詞數(shù)80左右，（短文的開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）；Since the government created the civilized and healthy city, our living environment has improved a lot. Everyone plays an important role in building our city, so good behaviors can be seen everywhere.As junior high students,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Let’s take action now. Our actions can make a difference and lead to a more beautiful city.【答案】Since the government created civilized and healthy city, our living environment has improved a lot. Everyone plays an important role in building our city, so good behaviors can be seen everywhere.As junior high students, on the one hand, there are a lot of things we can do. We should be polite to others and try to behave well. It’s kind of you to help people in need. Meanwhile, We can help clean up our city in order to make it clearer and tidier. Also, we can plant more trees and keep off grass. On the other hand, there are many things we shouldn’t do. We shouldn’t make a lot of noise loudly in the public. We can’t spit anywhere and we shouldn’t throw rubbish everywhere. At the same time, we shouldn’t break traffic rules.Let’s take action now. Our actions can make a difference and lead to a more beautiful city.【解析】【詳解】瓊海正在進行“雙創(chuàng)”活動，即創(chuàng)建文明城市、創(chuàng)建健康城市，城市的生活環(huán)境有了很大的改變。這篇作文要求我們用英語寫一篇短文，號召中學生們都參加到“雙創(chuàng)”活動中來。題目中并沒有規(guī)定具體的寫作內容，而是用圖表的形式，列出了寫作的提綱。通過審題可知，這篇短文我們應從兩個方面來敘述：即應該做什么；不應該做什么。根據(jù)這個內容，寫作時，把短文分成兩個層次，這樣可以使文章結構清晰、條理。整篇短文應使用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，第一人稱we來敘述。寫作時應注意：首先英語的表達習慣和漢語是不同的，不能逐詞翻譯，寫漢語式的英語，而應從句子的整體結構考慮，使用恰當?shù)脑~匯、短語和句型，以常見的主謂賓或者主系表構成的簡單句為主，穿插使用并列句或者復合句，改變文章節(jié)奏，提升文章檔次。語句之間使用恰當?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫、流暢?！军c睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求，向中學生們發(fā)出號召，共同參與到城市“雙創(chuàng)”活動中來。首先短文的內容完整，文章根據(jù)題目中列出的圖表，補充了具體的寫作內容，從應該做的和不應該做的兩個方面，對中學生的日常行為提出了要求。文章條理清晰，有層次。其次短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，語法規(guī)范，語言準確，語句通順，符合英語的表達習慣。短文中句子結構以簡單句為主，也使用了并列句和復合句以及一些較復雜的高級句式，語句之間也使用了較好的連接成分，如We should be polite to others and try to behave well. 、It’s kind of you to help people in need. 、Meanwhile, We can help clean up our city in order to make it clearer and tidier.、We can’t spit anywhere and we shouldn’t throw rubbish everywhere. At the same time, we shouldn’t break traffic 。6．寫作81. 春天，許多人都喜歡參加各種戶外活動。為了倡導中學生接近大自然，某中學生英文報舉辦了一次征文活動，請你根據(jù)以下問題，用英語寫一篇短文參加征文。提示：1）What’s the benefit （好處） of outdoor activities? （12 opinions）2）Which is your favourite outdoor activity? How and why? （12 examples）3）What do we need to pay attention to when we do outdoor activities? （At least 1 suggestion）要求：1）表達清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫；2）必須包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求適當發(fā)揮；3）詞數(shù)：100詞左右，開頭已給出，不計入詞數(shù)；4）不得使用真實姓名、校名和地名等。It’s spring now. Many people like to go out for some activities. I think it’s great to get close to nature.