【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 es because we should be kind to someone in ，既使短文層次清晰，又豐富了習(xí)作內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。點(diǎn)睛：書(shū)面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。5．書(shū)面表達(dá)你即將升入高中，面臨寄宿（a boarding school）和走讀（a day school）兩類(lèi)學(xué)校的選擇。請(qǐng)你以“A boarding school or a day school”為題。寫(xiě)一篇短文，內(nèi)容須包括：讀寄宿學(xué)校的利和弊；讀走讀學(xué)校的利和弊；你的選擇和理由（不得與上述兩點(diǎn)內(nèi)容重復(fù)）。注意：1. 詞數(shù)。100詞左右（文章開(kāi)頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名等信息；3. 文章必須包含提示中的所有信息，并按要求適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。A hoarding school or a day schoolWe are going to graduate from our middle school, __________________________________【答案】We are going to graduate from our middle schools, and we will make a choice to enter a boarding school or a day school. Both kinds of school have their advantages and disadvantages.If we choose a boarding school, we will save time to study. However, we may have less time to stay with our family. If we choose a day school, parents can know more about our studies. At the same time puter games and TV plays may make a bad influence on us. As for me, I prefer a boarding school. We should pay attention to our studies to get good grades in the high school.【解析】【分析】整體分析：這是一篇給材料作文?？梢苑秩螌?xiě)。第一段要寫(xiě)總體交代你即將升入高中，面臨寄宿（a boarding school）和走讀（a day school）兩類(lèi)學(xué)校的選擇。第二段要寫(xiě)詳細(xì)敘述讀寄宿學(xué)校的利弊；讀走讀學(xué)校的利弊。第三段要表述作者自己的選擇和理由。【詳解】，看看有哪些要求？哪些時(shí)態(tài)？人稱(chēng)？，記敘文？說(shuō)明文？議論文？看圖？還是應(yīng)用文？，單一還是混合。、短語(yǔ)、句型。，并運(yùn)用適當(dāng)?shù)木湫秃瓦^(guò)渡詞銜接。寫(xiě)完后反復(fù)閱讀修改推敲潤(rùn)色，人稱(chēng)、時(shí)態(tài)、單復(fù)數(shù)一致等。運(yùn)用自然過(guò)渡法和自然銜接法來(lái)是文章更為地道、通順、純正。用的短語(yǔ)、句型：both kinds of、If we choose a boarding school、At the same time、As for me, I prefer a boarding school、pay attention to、來(lái)增加了文章的亮點(diǎn)?！军c(diǎn)睛】這類(lèi)作文的寫(xiě)作方法要注意認(rèn)真審題，注意過(guò)渡性語(yǔ)言的使用。做到：要點(diǎn)要全，表達(dá)要清晰明確，使用短語(yǔ)，句型要準(zhǔn)確，注意避免拼寫(xiě)和語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。6．臨近畢業(yè)，學(xué)校在學(xué)習(xí)小組內(nèi)開(kāi)展了初中階段自評(píng)和組評(píng)活動(dòng)，假設(shè)你是 Moonlight 小組 的組長(zhǎng)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面表格中的信息和提示，為你的組員 Tommy 進(jìn)行綜合素質(zhì)的評(píng)價(jià)，寫(xiě)一 份素質(zhì)報(bào)告．NameTommyCharacteristics聰明、大方（各舉一例）Hobbies喜歡看書(shū)，認(rèn)為看書(shū)有很多好處（請(qǐng)列舉2個(gè)好處）Honour他在家?guī)椭黾覄?wù)。在學(xué)校和同學(xué)相處融洽。上學(xué)途中遵守交通規(guī)則（舉一例）。今年，學(xué)校授予了他優(yōu)秀學(xué)生獎(jiǎng)（Award for Best Student）Problems面臨考試，遭受壓力痛苦，他沒(méi)有充足的睡眠．Your suggestions（根據(jù)實(shí)際情況提2點(diǎn)建議）…要求：表達(dá)清楚、語(yǔ)法正確、上下文連貫；要點(diǎn)必須包括所有相關(guān)信息，并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；詞數(shù)：100 詞左右；不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名等Tommy is a member of my team called Moonlight.【答案】Tommy is a member of my team called Moonlight. He is clever and he is good at all his lessons. He is so generous that he shares everything with his likes reading because he thinks he can get much knowledge and learn more about the world by reading. And reading has a good effect on children’s growth. At home, he can help his parents do some housework. At school, he gets on well with his classmates. On the way to school, he obeys the traffic rules. He crosses the road when the light is green. Our school presented him with Award for Best Student this year. However, Tommy is stressed when the exam es. And he doesn’t have enough sleep. I think he should go over what he has learned before exams. It’s better for him to manage his time wisely so that he can have enough time to rest.【解析】這篇作文要求我們按照表格里的內(nèi)容介紹一下Tommy的情況，為T(mén)ommy寫(xiě)一篇綜合素質(zhì)的評(píng)價(jià)報(bào)告。在表格中有非常詳細(xì)的關(guān)于Tommy各方面的內(nèi)容，我們需要用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容有條理的表達(dá)出來(lái)。表格中涉及的內(nèi)容較多，寫(xiě)作時(shí)要注意表達(dá)的條理性。這篇作文應(yīng)主要使用第三人稱(chēng)來(lái)寫(xiě)。在最后要給Tommy提一些建議，這一部分應(yīng)該用第一人稱(chēng)。同時(shí)注意表達(dá)的準(zhǔn)確性，尤其是表格中的第五項(xiàng)和第六項(xiàng)內(nèi)容。【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這是一篇比較優(yōu)秀的范文。這篇作文內(nèi)容完整，包含了表格中的所有內(nèi)容，沒(méi)有遺漏要點(diǎn)。表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，注意了被動(dòng)形式的使用，如He was rewarded by our school this year.。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意了條理性，使文章具有層次感，條理清楚。短文注意到了長(zhǎng)短句的結(jié)合，并恰當(dāng)?shù)氖褂昧艘恍┻B詞，使文章表達(dá)的連貫。如He is always ready to help others.、He not only likes reading detective novels but also likes watching programs about sports news.、He is good at running. He won the first place in our school sports meeting this 。 7．　　近年來(lái)霧霾天氣在中國(guó)許多城市頻頻發(fā)生。霧霾天氣引起大家極大的關(guān)注。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇有關(guān)霧霾的短文向校刊“英語(yǔ)角”投稿,內(nèi)容包括：1. 霧霾的危害 2. 霧霾產(chǎn)生的原因（2個(gè)） 3. 應(yīng)對(duì)霧霾的措施（3個(gè)）提示：霧霾 smog poisonous 有毒的注意：1. 詞數(shù)110左右； 2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫； 3. 開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好（不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。In recent years, many cities in China have been hit by smog frequently, which has aroused great concern among people. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________