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s to borrow books from the library.We must spend more time reading some useful books.As a result,we can have a better future. Let39。s start reading now!【解析】亮點說明:這篇習作的層次清晰,內容飽滿,表達流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語,例如first of all,all kinds of books,help to do,be good for,more and further,so much,spend too much time doing,search the Internet,in my opinion,as a result等。同時First of all,/ Second,/ Third等時間副詞和However/ Moreover / As a result等結構副詞的運用,既使文章的思路清晰、層次分明,還豐富了習作內容,使表達多樣,是本文的最大亮點。點睛:書面表達題既不是漢譯英,也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內容經整理后展開思維,考查運用所學英語知識準確表達意思的能力。所以,考生不能遺漏要點,要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式,盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復雜的句式結構以便得到較高的分數(shù)。5.(題文) 書面表達在中學生機器人大賽上,出現(xiàn)了一種專門照顧老人的新型家用智能機器人,它的主要功能有:1. 定時做飯、洗衣服; 2. 陪老人聊天、下棋、做運動;3. 處理緊急情況(如:撥打120)假如你是該機器人的發(fā)明者,請你介紹這個產品,并談談你的未來設想。要求:1. 意思連貫,語句通順;2. 詞數(shù)80詞左右;短文的開頭已給出(不計入總詞數(shù)) 3. 參考詞匯: at a fixed time 定時emergency 緊急情況 cpany sb. 陪伴某人Ladies and gentlemen,Thank you for attending our robot show. Now I’d like to introduce my new invention to all of you. 【答案】Ladies and gentlemen,Thank you for attending our robot show. Now I’d like to introduce my new invention to all of you.I invented the new robot mainly to help the elderly at home. It can cook meals and do some washing at a fixed time. When old people feel alone, it can also acpany them by having a chat, playing chess or doing exercise. What’s more, it can deal with some emergencies. For example, if an old man falls ill suddenly, the robot will call doctors immediately for help.I’m sure my new invention will be a great help to the elderly. I think in the future people will live a more fortable life with the help of new robots.【解析】亮點說明:這篇習作的層次清晰,內容飽滿,表達流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語,例如thank you for doing,I’d like to do,introduce sb. to,all of you,at home,do some washing,at a fixed time,have a chat,play chess,do exercise,deal with,a great help,in the future等。而Thank you for attending our robot show./ I invented the new robot mainly to help the elderly at home. / I think in the future people will live a more fortable life with the help of new ,豐富了習作內容,使表達多樣化,是本文的最大亮點。點睛:書面表達題既不是漢譯英,也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內容經整理后展開思維,考查運用所學英語知識準確表達意思的能力。所以,考生不能遺漏要點,要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式,盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復雜的句式結構以便得到較高的分數(shù)。6.書面表達“小手拉大手,同做文明人。”自創(chuàng)建文明城市文明鄉(xiāng)村以來,淄博人民萬眾一心,眾 志成城,讓人點贊的行為隨處可見。作為中學生,我們也做出了自己的努力。請根據(jù)以下所 給要點,寫一篇 100 詞左右的英語短文。;;;;(自主發(fā)揮,至少兩點)參考詞匯: civilized 文明的 make joint efforts 共同努力 obey 遵守【答案】Since creating the civilized city and countryside, all the people in Zibo have made joint efforts(共同努力). Their good behavior can be seen everywhere.As junior students, we have also made some contributions to the civilized Zibo. Forexample, to protect our environment, we plant flowers and trees. Also, for our own and others’ safety, we obey the traffic rules and never run red light. In addition(此外), we no longer talk or laugh loudly in 39。s more, when on a bus, we actively give our seats to the people in need.Besides, we have formed a good habit of throwing rubbish into a dustbin, never littering anywhere. Furthermore(而且), we are accustomed to (習慣于)queuing up (排隊) for a ticket or something else. All in all, we will try our best to do what we can to make ourselves and Zibo city more civilized【解析】亮點說明:這篇習作的層次清晰,內容飽滿,表達流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語,例如make joint efforts,as junior students,for example,obey the traffic rules,run red light,in addition,no longer,in public,and so on,what39。s more,on a bus,in need,be accustomed to,queue up,all in all等。而to protect