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out going out. Secondly, reading is a good way to improve reading and writing skills. Finally, reading can broaden our knowledge and horizon, which is important to job hunting in the future. Therefore, start to reading, no matter how old you are and what you are doing. So I’m here again to call on all of us to read more books and read good books. Li Hua【解析】【詳解】題干解讀:該題目屬于應(yīng)用文寫作,但寫作時(shí)要按照應(yīng)用文格式寫,寫作時(shí)承接短文開頭,寫出對(duì)學(xué)生的倡議。例文點(diǎn)評(píng):例文采用的是一段式,寫的是閱讀的好處,時(shí)態(tài)采用的是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),描述倡議時(shí),描寫細(xì)致,條理清晰。高分亮點(diǎn):短語(yǔ):Firstly;Secondly;Finally;a good way to do sth;broaden our knowledge and horizon。句型:reading is a good way to improve reading and writing skills;reading can broaden our knowledge and horizon, which is important to job hunting in the future。5.書面表達(dá)根據(jù)下表用英語(yǔ)寫一篇80詞左右的短文,內(nèi)容須包括:對(duì)下表中關(guān)于(City A和City B)的全部信息進(jìn)行比較,分析利弊,確定其中一個(gè)城市作為你的暑假旅游目的地。City ACity BFlying2 hours4 hoursTemperature30℃18℃Hotel★★★★★★Things to do★★★★★★Food★★★★★★In my opinion, is he better place to spend my summer holiday.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文In my opinion, City A is the better place to spend my summer holiday. Although the temperature there is higher, the hotel is less fortable, and even the food is not as delicious as that in City B, I still choose City A. The most important reason is that I can have a lot of things to do in City A . I can enjoy more beautiful scenery and do more activities. Besides, it takes us only two hours to fly there, which saves us a lot of time. I hope the holiday will be an unforgettable experience.【解析】【詳解】試題分析:本題給出了兩個(gè)城市的飛行時(shí)常、氣溫、旅館情況。食物等相關(guān)信息,要求考生對(duì)每個(gè)信息進(jìn)行比較,選擇自己要去的暑假旅游目的地。雖然字?jǐn)?shù)要求不多,但可以很好地考查考生英語(yǔ)寫作的基本功,需要考生對(duì)常用的英語(yǔ)句型熟練掌握。熟悉英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)方式。避免漢語(yǔ)式英語(yǔ)。句型不要都用簡(jiǎn)單句。另外,一定要注意題目要求,把每一個(gè)信息都進(jìn)行比較,不要有漏掉。寫作亮點(diǎn):本篇作文按照題目要求選擇了城市A作為自己暑假旅游的目的地。對(duì)于城市A的缺點(diǎn),作者用了“Although”盡管一詞輕輕帶過(guò)。對(duì)于優(yōu)點(diǎn)則重點(diǎn)突出,因?yàn)樵诔鞘蠥可以做很多事情,作者在這里用了詞組“a lot of ”。在比較的時(shí)候,作者用了多種方式,使句子不單調(diào),比如在比較溫度時(shí),直接用比較級(jí)“higher”在說(shuō)旅館時(shí)用了“l(fā)ess fortable ”,比較食物時(shí),用了“as…as”等。在說(shuō)選擇城市A的原因時(shí),用了that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句。本文大部分都是復(fù)雜句,顯示了作者比較熟練的英語(yǔ)寫作水平。6.目前,許多中學(xué)生不重視課外閱讀。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表內(nèi)容寫一篇短文,對(duì)這一現(xiàn)狀進(jìn)行分析并提出建議。要點(diǎn): 不重視課外閱讀的原因1. 作業(yè)太多2. 沒有讀書習(xí)慣3. 時(shí)間花在電腦或網(wǎng)絡(luò)上課外閱讀的好處1. 更多地了解世界2. 學(xué)會(huì)如何思考3. 生活更加豐富多彩對(duì)學(xué)校或同學(xué)的建議……(至少一點(diǎn))注意:1. 詞數(shù): 80個(gè)左右(開頭已給出的內(nèi)容不記入總詞數(shù));2. 內(nèi)容必須包括上表中的要點(diǎn),可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,但不要逐字翻譯;3. 條理清楚、語(yǔ)句連貫;4.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的地名、校名和人名。 At present only a few students do some reading after class. Here are several reasons. ▲ ▲ ▲ ▲ ▲ ▲ 【答案】At present only a few students do some reading after class. Here are several reasons. First of all, quite a lot of students are burdened with too much homework. Still others haven’t formed a habit of reading. They would rather spend their spare time on TV or on the Internet. However, reading has many benefits. Through reading we can learn more about the world. Besides, it can help us think better. Last but not least, reading can make our life more colourful. Here are my suggestions. For one thing, teachers are supposed to limit the amount of our homework so that we can have more time to read. For another, it’s a good idea to form reading clubs and learn from each other.【解析】 略7.你是一位九年級(jí)的學(xué)生李明,你用英語(yǔ)寫一封郵件給你的筆友Amy,感謝她對(duì)你關(guān)心,并告訴她目前你在全力以赴為中考而學(xué)習(xí),并與她交流一下目前的學(xué)習(xí)和生活情況。要點(diǎn)如下: (1). 雖然你大部分功課你都學(xué)得比較好,但是你對(duì)自己不滿意。你認(rèn)為自己學(xué)習(xí)上還要多花工夫。 (2). 你的父母對(duì)你嚴(yán)格要求,但是也很關(guān)心你。(舉例說(shuō)明,適當(dāng)發(fā)揮2—