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s meet at……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞,注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序,符合邏輯關(guān)系。點(diǎn)睛:本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,語言簡練。開頭介紹了我想要邀請你去老舍茶館,接下來介紹我們?nèi)ツ抢镒鍪裁?,最后指出我們要在何時(shí)何地見面。此處want to do sth, invite sb to, let sb do sth, at the gate of等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。5.書面表達(dá)為了配合“足球進(jìn)校園”活動(dòng),你們班開展了一次主題班會(huì)。請你以足球迷的身份,根據(jù)下列表格中的要點(diǎn)提示,用英語向同學(xué)們介紹足球這項(xiàng)運(yùn)動(dòng)并談?wù)勛约旱膲粝?。?識(shí)歷史悠久,深受喜愛世界杯4年舉行一次好 處男生女生皆可參加利于培養(yǎng)團(tuán)隊(duì)精神考生自擬(至少1點(diǎn))偶 像梅西,有足球天賦夢 想考生自擬(至少1點(diǎn))注意:1. 詞數(shù)90左右。短文的開頭已為你寫好,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);,不要逐詞翻譯,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,使短文連貫、通順;、校名等相關(guān)信息。參考詞匯:梅西 MessiDear classmates,I’m very excited to hear that China will build 20,000 footballthemed schools by 2020. Thank you for your attention.【答案】Dear classmates,I’m very excited to hear that China will build 20,000 footballthemed schools by 2020.Football has a very long history.It is liked by people all over the world.The World Cup takes place every four years.Playing football has lots of advantages.First,both boys and girls can take part in it.Second,it helps develop team spirit.What’s more,playing football is good for our health.I’m a football fan.Messi is my hero.He has a gift for playing football.My dream is to bee a famous football player like Messi.I hope China will hold the World Cup some day.Thank you for your attention.【解析】【詳解】試題分析:本題要求按提綱的提示,介紹足球運(yùn)動(dòng)并談?wù)勛约旱膲粝搿R笞屑?xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示,弄清試題提供的所有信息,明確本文主要從三個(gè)方面來寫:介紹足球運(yùn)動(dòng)及其好處;說說自己的偶像;談?wù)勛约旱膲粝搿R罁?jù)提示情景或詞語,按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài);語言表達(dá)要符合英語習(xí)慣。寫作亮點(diǎn):本文語言精煉,像第二自然段的Football has a very long history. It is liked by people all over the world. The World Cup takes place every four years. it helps develop team spirit. What’s more, playing football is good for our health. 等等句子,簡潔,但是句意表達(dá)清楚;同時(shí),本文用了被動(dòng)語態(tài)、動(dòng)名詞作主語、不定式作表語等等語法形式,使表達(dá)生動(dòng);用了first, second等使得短文層次清楚。6.環(huán)境保護(hù)人人有責(zé), 如果我們每一個(gè)人都能珍愛美麗地球 保護(hù)自然資源,相信我們的家園會(huì)越來越美好。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“Going Green”為主題的征文活動(dòng)。假如你是李華,請用英語寫一篇短文投稿,談?wù)勎覀兠媾R的主要環(huán)境問題是什么,為改善環(huán)境我們能做什么,以及你的期望。提示詞語: pollution, protect, save, recycle, take action提示問題:● What are the main environmental problems we have?● What can we do in our daily life? ● What’s your wish?Now there are many environmental 【答案】例文Now there are many environmental problems. Such as air pollution, water pollution and so on.I believe that there are many things we can do in our daily life, we can save energy by go to school by bike or on foot. We can use less water by turning off the tap while we brush our teeth, and taking shorter showers. When we see litter on the ground, we must pick it up and put it into different bins. I hope everyone can take action. Although each one of us may only do a little, together we can make a big difference. Let’s work together to make a better place to live.【解析】【詳解】題干解讀:該題目屬于說明文寫作,寫作時(shí)要把我們面臨的主要環(huán)境問題是什么,為改善環(huán)境我們能做什么,以及你的期望全部包括。例文點(diǎn)評:例文采用的是三段式;用第一人稱來敘述為改善環(huán)境我們能做什么;時(shí)態(tài)采用的是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),描述建議時(shí),描寫具體,條理清晰。高分亮點(diǎn):短語:save energy;brush our teeth;put it into different bins;take action;make a big difference。句型:When we see litter on the ground, we must pick it up and put it into different bins;Although each one of us may only do a little, together we can make a big difference?!军c(diǎn)睛】首先認(rèn)真審題,看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn);然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容,列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá),例如save energy;brush our teeth;put it into different bins;take action;make a big difference。以及狀語從句等;然后緊扣要點(diǎn),動(dòng)筆寫作,在寫作過程中,要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡,必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞,使文章過渡平穩(wěn),自然流暢;最后,要仔細(xì)檢查有無單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號誤用等,還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理,有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言,大小寫是否正確,詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。7.寫作某英文網(wǎng)站的“ Student Life”欄目正在向中學(xué)生征文,標(biāo)題為“ A time when I made someone ha