【文章內容簡介】 on? Parents and kids have their own opinions. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】How will you spend the ing summer vacation? Parents and kids have their own opinions.Some parents think kids should get ready for high school in the sum?mer so it39。s important to take summer courses. They also think kids can help do housework to learn some life skills. But the kids disagree. They think it39。s time to take a good rest. They need to hang out with their friends to go sightseeing.In my opinion we can have a talk with our parents. All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. We need to relax ourselves after working so hard at school. It39。s good for us to do some sports.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文，本文已經給出了主要寫作要點，動筆前要先認真閱讀要點，然后圍繞要點適當發(fā)揮．寫作中，應注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內容利用上；結合材料內容，可知本文主要是第三人稱，一般現在時態(tài)進行敘述．語言的表述應該符合語法的結構，造句應該符合英語的表達習慣．適當使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關系．【點睛】這篇短文用到了一些好的句型：They also think kids can help do housework to learn some life skills. But the kids disagree. They think it39。s time to take a good rest. They need to hang out with their friends to go 。6．書面表達初中即將畢業(yè)，同學們都感到壓力很大。就此問題，老師要求你在英語課上做一個以“Less Pressure Makes Life Better”為題的報告，談談你的做法，與同學分享經驗。請根據以下要求寫一份發(fā)言稿，內容包括：1. 普遍存在的壓力：同學關系；考試2. 我過去的壓力：父母的期望；學習3. 我成功緩解壓力的辦法及效果；……要求：1. 文中不得出現真實的姓名和校名；2. 詞數80左右，短文的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。Less Pressure Makes Better LifeHello, everyone!Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world. Most students in our class are under too much pressure. _________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Hello, my classmates! Pressure is a serious problem in today39。s world. Most students in our class are under too much pressure. Some students can39。t get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams too much.I was always under pressure, too. My parents wanted me to be the top student in my class. They always sent me to all kinds of afterclasses on weekends. I had a talk with my parents and told them I had done my best. Finally, they understood me. In this way, I feel less stressed out so that I can concentrate more on my studies.Less pressure makes better life. Thank you.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們針對現在同學們普遍感到壓力大這種現象，以Less Pressure Makes Life Better為題，談談自己的看法，和同學們分享一下自己的經驗。審題可知，文章中應主要包括以下幾個內容：首先介紹同學們普遍感到壓力這種現象；然后講述自己過去曾面對的壓力；最后介紹自己如何成功緩解壓力。題目中只給出了大概的提綱，其中具體的內容應由學生們自己發(fā)揮想象力來補充，并用正確的英語表達出來。學生們可以從自身的經歷和體會出發(fā)，選取生活中常見的場景進行介紹。文章應使用一般現在時和一般過去時，注意根據表達的需要使用正確的時態(tài)，并變化謂語動詞的正確形式。句式結構可以簡單句結構為主，這樣的句式表達簡潔、明了，易于掌握。但為提升作文檔次，應穿插使用并列句和復合句，或使用一些復雜結構，如非謂語動詞、被動語態(tài)等。語句之間使用恰當的連接成分，使文意連貫。【點睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據題目要求，談了自己對同學們普遍感到壓力大這種現象的看法，并分享了自己的經歷。短文有如下幾個優(yōu)點：首先短文內容完整，包含了題目中要求的所有信息，且層次清晰，文章分成了四段，每一段的中心話題也很明確。其次短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，文章主要使用了一般現在時和一般過去時，謂語動詞形式準確。句式結構以簡單句為主，敘述清晰、簡潔。也使用了并列句和復合句的結構，如賓語從句、狀語從句等。短文中使用了豐富的句式，如Some students can39。t get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams too much.、My parents wanted me to be the top student in my class、In this way, I feel less