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gentlemen,Thank you for attending our robot show. Now I’d like to introduce my new invention to all of you. 【答案】Ladies and gentlemen,Thank you for attending our robot show. Now I’d like to introduce my new invention to all of you.I invented the new robot mainly to help the elderly at home. It can cook meals and do some washing at a fixed time. When old people feel alone, it can also acpany them by having a chat, playing chess or doing exercise. What’s more, it can deal with some emergencies. For example, if an old man falls ill suddenly, the robot will call doctors immediately for help.I’m sure my new invention will be a great help to the elderly. I think in the future people will live a more fortable life with the help of new robots.【解析】亮點說明:這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰,內(nèi)容飽滿,表達流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語,例如thank you for doing,I’d like to do,introduce sb. to,all of you,at home,do some washing,at a fixed time,have a chat,play chess,do exercise,deal with,a great help,in the future等。而Thank you for attending our robot show./ I invented the new robot mainly to help the elderly at home. / I think in the future people will live a more fortable life with the help of new ,豐富了習(xí)作內(nèi)容,使表達多樣化,是本文的最大亮點。點睛:書面表達題既不是漢譯英,也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維,考查運用所學(xué)英語知識準(zhǔn)確表達意思的能力。所以,考生不能遺漏要點,要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式,盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。6.今天手機在我們?nèi)粘I钪幸褟V泛使用。但中學(xué)生在學(xué)校是否應(yīng)該持有手機,一些學(xué)生和老師有不同的觀點。你們學(xué)校的??⑽陌嬲诰痛伺e行征文活動,請根據(jù)下列表格提示的內(nèi)容,用英語寫一篇征文。 觀點理由一些學(xué)生贊成擁有方便與家長聯(lián)系;一些老師反對擁有有學(xué)生用手機玩游戲;有學(xué)生用手機作弊;你的觀點1. 2.要求:1. 表達清楚,語法正確,上下文連貫;`2. 必須包含表格所給的提示信息,并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;3. 詞數(shù):80100詞左右(征文的開頭已給出,不計入總詞數(shù))。 Mobile phones have been used widely in our daily life 【答案】Mobile phones have been used widely in our daily life today. With the development of economy, mobile phones are more and more widely used in our daily life. However, some parents and teachers have different ideas about whether the students should use mobile phones at school. Some students are for it. They think that it is convenient to contact with parents. Mobile phones will make them more interested in learning so that they can learn more quickly and easily. Some teachers are against it.They think that some students can39。t control themselves and often play games. What39。s worse, some students cheat in exams by using mobile phones. Besides, using mobile phones too much does great harm to students39。 eyes. In my opinion, I think it is helpful for students to use mobile phones in a right way. Firstly,students can learn more knowledge using mobile phones. At the same time, parents and teachers should do something to help students. Only in this way can mobile phones be of help to their studies.【解析】【詳解】本篇寫作需注意要求中所提供的要點,不可遺漏。需在平時積累相關(guān)的詞匯,寫作中注意語義通順,符合邏輯關(guān)系,上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞。如but, so, then等??梢赃m當(dāng)使用高分句型?!军c睛】高分句型:I think it is helpful for students to use mobile phones in a right way.我認(rèn)為正確的方式使用手機對學(xué)生是有幫助的。I think+賓語從句。It is+形容詞 for sb to do sth做某事對某人來說是…的。7. 假如你是李華, 你的美國筆友Bill給你發(fā)了一封電子郵件, 想了解你的夢想職業(yè)。請認(rèn)真閱讀下面的郵件, 根據(jù)信中的內(nèi)容和你的實際情況給他寫封回信。To: lihua@ china. From: bill006@ america. Subject: Your dream jobDear Li Hua,Our teacher told us China is developing fast. You are lucky enough to live in China.Would you please tell me about your dream job in the future?◆What is your dream