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m sure I39。切記不要遺漏要點(diǎn)。like【點(diǎn)睛】本文首先開(kāi)篇功能句Thank you for your ,運(yùn)用多種連接詞,比如because,Besides,To realize my dream, 等使文章連貫性強(qiáng),長(zhǎng)短句結(jié)合,讀起來(lái)朗朗上口,不失為一篇佳作。 eyes. In my opinion, I think it is helpful for students to use mobile phones in a right way. Firstly,students can learn more knowledge using mobile phones. At the same time, parents and teachers should do something to help students. Only in this way can mobile phones be of help to their studies.【解析】【詳解】本篇寫(xiě)作需注意要求中所提供的要點(diǎn),不可遺漏。開(kāi)頭介紹了我要點(diǎn)贊的人,接下來(lái)介紹他的情況,最后指出我從他身上學(xué)到的東西。寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代詞,注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。t spend too much time on mobile phones, TV and puters. Secondly, pay attention to the following: Don39。t read in the sun。Dear Peppa,Thank you for your last letter asking about our discussion on lowcarbon lifestyle. Here is something about it._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Best wishes,Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Peppa,Thank you for your last letter asking about our discussion on lowcarbon lifestyle. Here is something about it.We can do a lot in our daily life to achieve the goal of low carbon life. First, we’d better turn off lights if possible and spend less time watching TV or surfing the Internet. Saving water also matters much. Besides, we should sort out the rubbish, hoping that we might recycle some, which will surely benefit us a great deal. In addition, we suggest using handkerchiefs instead of tissues so that we can prevent more trees from being cut down. More importantly, when we go out, walking, riding bikes or taking buses should be our first choice, which contributes to a cleaner world.Best wishes,Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】這是一篇給材料作文,向我的英國(guó)朋友Peppa寫(xiě)信,介紹我們班就低碳生活方式進(jìn)行的討論情況。寫(xiě)作中注意敘述順序,符合邏輯關(guān)系。此處give sb sth, work hard, grow up, want to do sth, live a …life等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。需在平時(shí)積累相關(guān)的詞匯,寫(xiě)作中注意語(yǔ)義通順,符合邏輯關(guān)系,上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞。8.自信賦予人力量,帶給人快樂(lè)。it/them?3.What:這是一篇優(yōu)秀的文章,很好地完成了試題中所規(guī)定的內(nèi)容。ll have an interesting and meaningful summer holiday.【解析】試題分析:短文要制定出度假計(jì)劃,文章需要用第一人稱“I”進(jìn)行書(shū)寫(xiě),不可使用“we/ you”等其他人稱。My junior high school years are ing to an end. The summer holiday is on the way. Here are my plans for the long exciting holidays. 【答案】My junior high school years are ing to an end. The summer holiday is on the way. Here are my plans for the long exciting holidays.Because I have a busy life in school days,I will get close to nature and relax myself with my parents. I will volunteer to do something for others .I will stay with my parents and help my parents to do some housework in my free. I will also read every morning. From the books, I can get more knowledge to fulfill myself. I also decide to have a good sleep during the vacation. I decide to take part in some social activit