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ebooks are beneficial if we read correctly and properly instead of reading over.All the best!Betty【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語,為文章增色不少,如in recent years,as a product of,live in,more and more,so…that,for example,do harm to,be harmful to,in my opinion,take the place of,instead of等。同時For one thing, / For another,/ However,等使短文的敘述很有條理,而It is no doubt electronic books bring many benefits./ they are so convenient that we can read them anywhere and anytime. / And there are more radiation which is harmful to people39。s body./ I think that ebooks are beneficial if we read correctly and properly instead of reading ,豐富了短文內容,使表達多樣化,是本文的最大亮點。在學習中注意總結牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當引用,使文章表達更有邏輯性,也更富有條理。【點睛】書面表達題既不是漢譯英,也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內容經整理后展開思維,考查運用所學英語知識準確表達意思的能力。所以,考生不能遺漏要點,要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式,盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復雜的句式結構以便得到較高的分數。6.書面表達 初三的學習生活繁忙中有困惑、淚水,也有進步、喜悅。請根據表格提示,寫一篇題為“Our school life in Grade Nine”的短文,介紹九年級的學校生活,并提出希望和建議。在校老師工作認真負責,充滿愛心學生…… (至少發(fā)揮兩點)周末作業(yè)作業(yè)多.舍棄愛好其它活動鍛煉,電視愿望…… (發(fā)揮一到兩點)要求:1.所寫內容必須包括以上表格提供的所有信息,并適當發(fā)揮:2.文章不少于90詞,開頭和結尾已給出,不計入總詞數;3.語意通順,意思連貫,條理清楚,書寫規(guī)范;4.文中不得出現真實姓名、校名等信息。Our school life in Grade NineIt is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student. Here is what our school life is like now. 【答案】Our school life in Grade NineIt is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student. Here is what our school life is like now.At school, all of our teachers work very hard. Most of them are patient enough to help us with all kinds of problems, whether in our study or in our life. As a result, they won high respect from us.As for students, in class we listen to the teacher carefully and think actively. After class, we are busy doing our homework. Every student is making efforts to try to achieve our dreams.At weekends, we usually spend a lot of time doing our homework, too. So we can39。t afford time for our hobbies any more. I feel a bit stressed actually, so I try to spare some time to play basketball or turn on my favorite TV program to get relaxed.No pains, no gains. But the more carefully we plan our day, the more colorful our school life will be.【解析】亮點說明:這篇習作的層次清晰,內容飽滿,表達流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語,例如at school,work hard,most of,patient enough,help sb. with sth.,all kinds of problems,in our life,as a result,as for students,listen to,be busy doing,try to do,spend a lot of time doing,not any more,play basketball等。而It is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student./ But the more carefully we plan our day, the more colorful our school life will ,豐富了習作內容,使表達多樣化,是本文的最大亮點。點睛:書面表達題既不是漢譯英,也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內容經整理后展開思維,考查運用所學英語知識準確表達意思的能力。所以,考生不能遺漏要點,要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式,盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復雜的句式結構以便得到較高的分數。7. “美麗的瓊海我的家,人人都要保護她”。自雙創(chuàng)以來,我們的生活環(huán)境得到了很大的改觀,人人積極參與雙創(chuàng)活動,讓人點贊的文明行為隨處可見。作為一名中學生,請你寫一篇短文號召大家加入到雙創(chuàng)活動中來。要求:,意思連貫,語法正確,書寫規(guī)范;,并做適當的拓展;3. 行文中不得出現真實人名、校名或地名;4. 詞數80左右,(短文的開頭和結尾已給出,不計入總詞數);Since the government created the civilized and healthy city, our living environment has improved a lot. Everyone plays an important role in building our city, so good behaviors can be seen everywhere.As junior high students,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Let’s take action now. Our actions can make a difference and lead to a more beautiful city.【答案】Since the government created civilized and healthy city, our living environment has improved a lot. Everyone plays an important role in building our city, so good behaviors can be seen everywhere.As junior high students, on the one hand, there are a lot of things we can do. We should be polite to others and try to behave well. It’s kind of you