【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 ，既使短文層次清晰，又豐富了習(xí)作內(nèi)容，使表達多樣化，是本文的最大亮點。點睛：書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學(xué)英語知識準(zhǔn)確表達意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。5．馬上要初中畢業(yè)了，大家都是依依不舍的。班主任決定在下周舉辦一場“My Life At School” 主題 班會 , 邀請全班同學(xué)參加。請你根據(jù)以下提示，寫一篇發(fā)言稿。美好的回憶； ；； 。不開心的事情； 。未來展望1. 升上理想的學(xué)校；2. 能結(jié)識更多朋友；3. 請你補充（至少兩點）My Life At SchoolHow time flies! It39。s unbelievable that I39。m going to graduate from my beloved school. 【答案】My Life At SchoolHow time flies! It’s unbelievable that I’m going to graduate from my beloved school. There are many things to remember. In the junior school, I got along well with my classmates. The teachers are very friendly and they are ready to help me. The most unforgettable thing is that I got a chance of being an exchange students and spent two months in Australia. I learned a lot from the experience. I also remember I served as volunteer to help others. Certainly, there were also unhappy things. My good friend Li Hua went to another school. I was very sad. Luckily, we kept in touch with each other through s. Besides, I was not good at Chinese writing. I hope I can go to a dream school and make more new friends. I also wish I can do better in all subjects when I am in high school and can go to a good college.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以My Life At School為題，寫一篇發(fā)言稿。題目中利用表格的形式，展示了文章的具體內(nèi)容，學(xué)生們可以此為提綱進行寫作。審題可知，這篇短文應(yīng)主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時，注意根據(jù)表達需要使用正確時態(tài)，并注意謂語動詞的正確形式。內(nèi)容應(yīng)主要包括三部分：首先是初中三年里的美好回憶；然后是不開心的事情；最后展望自己未來的高中生活。表格中有非常具體的提示，但不能逐詞翻譯表格中的短語，應(yīng)把他們變成自己的話，并用英語表達出來。寫作時應(yīng)注意：文章中應(yīng)包括表格中的所有信息，不能遺漏要點；第三部分的內(nèi)容中還需要自己發(fā)揮想象力進行補充，注意應(yīng)合情合理，與上文很好地銜接。另外注意句式結(jié)構(gòu)要符合英語的表達習(xí)慣，用完整的句子表達。句式結(jié)構(gòu)可以簡單句為基礎(chǔ)，穿插并列句、復(fù)合句以及其他復(fù)雜句式的使用，提升作文檔次。同時語句之間使用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫、自然?！军c睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求，回憶了自己的初中生活，并展望了未來。短文有以下幾個特點：首先文章內(nèi)容完整，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰。短文分三段，第一段基本是題目中給出的開頭，作者使用一句話引出下文；第二段是主體，介紹了過去美好的回憶以及不開心的事情；最后一段對未來進行了展望。各部分內(nèi)容安排合理，有層次、有條理。其次短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，語法規(guī)范，用詞準(zhǔn)確，注意了動詞正確形式的變化。句式結(jié)構(gòu)完整，符合英語的表達習(xí)慣。語言準(zhǔn)確、得體，表達自然、流暢。短文中使用了豐富的句型和短語，如The teachers are very friendly and they are ready to help me. The most unforgettable thing is that I got a chance of being an exchange students and spent two months in , we kept in touch with each other through s. Besides, I was not good at Chinese also wish I can do better in all subjects when I am in high school and can go to a good 。6．（B）根據(jù)要求完成大作文,詞數(shù):80100 We Get from Sports 的短文,應(yīng)該包含以下要點:1,學(xué)生參加體育運動的興趣不同,理由各異.,通過運動來放松自己.,希望運動能使自己更強壯.，希望運動使自己減肥和保持健康,苗條..:文中不得出現(xiàn)自己的名字和學(xué)校的名字,不計入詞數(shù).:keep slim （保持苗條）What We Get from SportsStudents in our school have one thing in mon an interest in 【答案】Students in our school have one thing in mon an interest in sports. But different students have different reasons for taking part in sports.Many students have sports when they feel tired after study. They just want to relax themselves and have fun. Most boys love sports. They take part in all kinds of sports in order to bee stronger. They join in the sports that interest them most, such as soccer, basketball and volleyball. As for girls, they want to lose weight. They want to keep slim, so they also like taking exercise.In my opinion, no matter what reasons we have, we all can get a lot from sports.【解析】【詳解】本篇寫作主要是談?wù)撟约簩\動的觀點和看法，應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，寫作要點要包括：。（多數(shù)學(xué)生的觀點、男生的觀點、女生的觀點）。亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)，主謂一致，在文中使用了時間狀語從句，定語從句，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如have fun，in order to，as for，in my opinion等。增強邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，句子通順，行文連貫。7．書面表達初中畢業(yè)在即, 回顧三年的學(xué)習(xí)生活, 你一定有成功的體驗, 如一次考試, 一次比賽, 一次表演...... 請你以Believe Myself, and I Will Win為題寫一篇演講稿。提示：（1）What was the event?（2）How did you make it?（3）What’s your feeling?要求：（1）發(fā)言稿中須包括所有提示內(nèi)容, 可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。（2）發(fā)言稿中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名和地名。（3）詞數(shù)80個左右（開頭和結(jié)尾已給出, 不計入總詞數(shù)）。Believe Myself, and I Will WinHello, everyone!___________________________________________________________________________Thank you for your listening.【答案】Believe Myself, and I will winHello, everyone! As an old saying goes, where there is a will, there i