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,開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。2. 回復(fù)必須包括所以要點(diǎn),可是當(dāng)發(fā)揮,是短文連貫,通順。3. 文中不得提及真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。 參考詞匯: civilized 文明的Dear Danny,I’m glad to receive your letter. Since you are interested in civilization(文明) of China, I would like to share something with you. I hope you can e to China someday to experience the ancient culture of China. Look forward to hear from you soon.All the best,Li Hua【答案】Dear Danny,I’m glad to receive your letter. Since you are interested in civilization(文明) of China, I would like to share something with you.Chinese civilization is one of the oldest and longest civilizations in the world. China is a country of 56 nationalities. Different nations have difficult cultures. In my country, we have many traditional festivals, such as, the Spring Festival, MidAutumn Festival and the Dragon Boat Festival . They are also called “three major Chinese holidays” in China. Here are the customs of eating Zongzi and racing dragonboat on the Dragon Boat Festival.China is a nation of etiquette (禮儀). Chinese people can respect, trust and help each other. We all learn and grow together. Everyone in my school should protect the whole public environment. Climbing the trees, picking the flowers and throwing garbage at random are not allowed there.I hope you can e to China someday to experience the ancient culture of China. Look forward to hearing from you soon.All the best.Li Hua【解析】【分析】本文要求給你的印度朋友Danny寫一篇關(guān)于華夏文明的回信。【詳解】文章需要介紹下中國(guó)的文化。表格中列舉了三個(gè)要點(diǎn),寫作時(shí)注意不要漏寫。平時(shí)注意多多積累句型、短語(yǔ)。細(xì)心檢查避免疏漏。以圖表展示的作文要以“讀”為主,首先要認(rèn)真讀懂圖表中的要求,對(duì)所給信息加以分析、推斷、篩選、概括,去粗取精;在寫作時(shí)目的要明確,要注意內(nèi)容的準(zhǔn)確性和嚴(yán)肅性?!军c(diǎn)睛】寫作中注意語(yǔ)義通順,符合邏輯關(guān)系,上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞。如but, so, then等。可以適當(dāng)使用高分句子。本篇文章寫的好的句子有:Chinese civilization is one of the oldest and longest civilizations in the world.中華文明是世界上最古老、最悠久的文明之一。China is a nation of etiquette(禮儀),中國(guó)是一個(gè)禮儀之邦。6.2019年2月20日,中央宣傳部授予北京榜樣優(yōu)秀群體“時(shí)代楷?!狈Q號(hào)。時(shí)代楷模充分體現(xiàn)“愛國(guó)、敬業(yè)、誠(chéng)信、友善”的價(jià)值準(zhǔn)則。某網(wǎng)站正在開展以“向時(shí)代楷模學(xué)習(xí)”為主題的英語(yǔ)征文活動(dòng)。假如你是李華,請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文投稿,談?wù)勆钪心阍撛趺醋觯约斑@樣做的意義。提示詞語(yǔ):pick up, rubbish, study, honest, important提示問題:● What should you do in your daily life? ● Why do you do so? As a middle student, I can do a lot to learn from our role models. 【答案】例文As a middle student, I can do a lot to learn from our role models. First, we can protect the environment. For example, we can pick up the rubbish, recycle things in our daily life, and so on. Second, we shall respect people around us. Respect others to start from small things. Third, behave well. We should be kind to others, warmhearted to everyone, and generous to our friends. By doing so, our world will bee more and more beautiful.【解析】【詳解】題干解讀:該題目屬于應(yīng)用文寫作,但寫作時(shí)要按照應(yīng)用文格式寫,寫作時(shí)承接短文開頭,具體寫出怎樣做以及這樣做的意義。例文點(diǎn)評(píng):例文采用的是一段式,人稱用的是第一人稱復(fù)數(shù)形式,時(shí)態(tài)主要用的是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),描述具體怎么做時(shí),描寫細(xì)致,條理清晰。高分亮點(diǎn):短語(yǔ):protect the environment;pick up the rubbish;behave