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______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】 In recent years, many cities in China have been hit by smog frequently, which has aroused great concern among people. Smog has a bad effect on people’s health. Many people, children and the old in particular, suffer from illnesses caused by smog. Consequently, citizens are warned not to go out without wearing masks. How does it e about? Scientists have found that it is human activity that has caused this. The poisonous matters in the air mainly e as a result of people’s burning coal, driving cars, industry production and so on. What should we do to stop the situation from worsening? First, cleaner fuels for cars and stricter emission standards for factories are of vital importance. Second, for us individuals, living a green life like going to work or school by public transport is a good choice. Also planting more trees to increase green areas is necessary. I believe every contribution counts. Only if we work together will smog weather disappear pletely. 【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們根據(jù)提示來(lái)介紹有關(guān)霧霾的情況,題目中給出了寫作的內(nèi)容,我們應(yīng)將這些內(nèi)容用正確的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)出來(lái)。首先應(yīng)注意在短文中要包括題目中給出的所有信息,不能遺漏要點(diǎn),并注意表達(dá)的層次和條理。其次要注意使用正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱,通過(guò)分析可知,這篇短文應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài),謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞用原形,特別要注意謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞形式要變化,這是一個(gè)寫作的難點(diǎn)。最后要注意英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣,英語(yǔ)句式與漢語(yǔ)在語(yǔ)序和詞性上的使用是不同的,要注意不能逐詞翻譯,寫漢語(yǔ)式的英語(yǔ)。應(yīng)從句子整體考慮,使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯和句型來(lái)表達(dá),語(yǔ)法規(guī)范。還應(yīng)使用一些較好的句型或者短語(yǔ),增強(qiáng)文章的表現(xiàn)力。6.寫作81. 春天,許多人都喜歡參加各種戶外活動(dòng)。為了倡導(dǎo)中學(xué)生接近大自然,某中學(xué)生英文報(bào)舉辦了一次征文活動(dòng),請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下問(wèn)題,用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文參加征文。提示:1)What’s the benefit (好處) of outdoor activities? (12 opinions)2)Which is your favourite outdoor activity? How and why? (12 examples)3)What do we need to pay attention to when we do outdoor activities? (At least 1 suggestion)要求:1)表達(dá)清楚,語(yǔ)法正確,上下文連貫;2)必須包括提示中的所有信息,并按要求適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;3)詞數(shù):100詞左右,開(kāi)頭已給出,不計(jì)入詞數(shù);4)不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名等。It’s spring now. Many people like to go out for some activities. I think it’s great to get close to nature. 【答案】It’s spring now. Many people like to go out for some activities. I think it’s a good way to get close to nature.When we are outdoors and in the natural world, we can not only breathe fresh air and enjoy the beautiful scene, but also relax ourselves for the ing study or work.There are many different ways we can get out into the natural world, such as hiking, cycling, camping and climbing. Cycling is my favourite. I join a cycling club, and often go out with other members. While cycling, we can forget our worries and have fun together. Also, we can learn to be a part of a team and help each other.Whatever you do,