【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如at school，work hard，most of，patient enough，help sb. with sth.，all kinds of problems，in our life，as a result，as for students，listen to，be busy doing，try to do，spend a lot of time doing，not any more，play basketball等。而It is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student./ But the more carefully we plan our day, the more colorful our school life will ，豐富了習作內(nèi)容，使表達多樣化，是本文的最大亮點。點睛：書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學英語知識準確表達意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復雜的句式結(jié)構以便得到較高的分數(shù)。5． 亞洲文明對話大會近期在北京召開，你的印度朋友Danny收看了大會相關報道，對華夏文明產(chǎn)生了濃厚的興趣，來信向你了解中國文化。假設你是李華，請根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示用英語寫一封回信給Danny。要點內(nèi)容歷史文化歷史悠久，文化各異；傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日，多彩習俗（舉一例）文明行為相互尊重，以禮相待；互學共鑒，共同成長（或自擬）身邊文明校園文明（自擬一點）注意：1. 詞數(shù)90詞左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。2. 回復必須包括所以要點，可是當發(fā)揮，是短文連貫，通順。3. 文中不得提及真實的人名、校名等相關信息。 參考詞匯: civilized 文明的Dear Danny,I’m glad to receive your letter. Since you are interested in civilization（文明） of China, I would like to share something with you. I hope you can e to China someday to experience the ancient culture of China. Look forward to hear from you soon.All the best,Li Hua【答案】Dear Danny,I’m glad to receive your letter. Since you are interested in civilization（文明） of China, I would like to share something with you.Chinese civilization is one of the oldest and longest civilizations in the world. China is a country of 56 nationalities. Different nations have difficult cultures. In my country, we have many traditional festivals, such as, the Spring Festival, MidAutumn Festival and the Dragon Boat Festival . They are also called “three major Chinese holidays” in China. Here are the customs of eating Zongzi and racing dragonboat on the Dragon Boat Festival.China is a nation of etiquette （禮儀）. Chinese people can respect, trust and help each other. We all learn and grow together. Everyone in my school should protect the whole public environment. Climbing the trees, picking the flowers and throwing garbage at random are not allowed there.I hope you can e to China someday to experience the ancient culture of China. Look forward to hearing from you soon.All the best.Li Hua【解析】【分析】本文要求給你的印度朋友Danny寫一篇關于華夏文明的回信?！驹斀狻课恼滦枰榻B下中國的文化。表格中列舉了三個要點，寫作時注意不要漏寫。平時注意多多積累句型、短語。細心檢查避免疏漏。以圖表展示的作文要以“讀”為主，首先要認真讀懂圖表中的要求，對所給信息加以分析、推斷、篩選、概括，去粗取精；在寫作時目的要明確，要注意內(nèi)容的準確性和嚴肅性?！军c睛】寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關系，上下文之間可以適當使用連接詞。如but, so, then等。可以適當使用高分句子。本篇文章寫的好的句子有：Chinese civilization is one of the oldest and longest civilizations in the world．中華文明是世界上最古老、最悠久的文明之一。China is a nation of etiquette（禮儀），中國是一個禮儀之邦。6．今天手機在我們?nèi)粘Ｉ钪幸褟V泛使用。但中學生在學校是否應該持有手機，一些學生和老師有不同的觀點。你們學校的?？⑽陌嬲诰痛伺e行征文活動，請根據(jù)下列表格提示的內(nèi)容，用英語寫一篇征文。 觀點理由一些學生贊成擁有方便與家長聯(lián)系；一些老師反對擁有有學生用手機玩游戲；有學生用手機作弊；你的觀點1. 2.要求：1. 表達清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫；`2. 必須包含表格所給的提示信息，并作適當發(fā)揮；3. 詞數(shù)：80100詞左右（征文的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）。 Mobile phones have been used widely in our daily life 【答案】Mobile phones have been used widely in our daily life today. With the development of economy, mobile phones are more and more widely used in our daily life. However, some parents and teachers have different ideas about whether the students should use mobile phones at school. Some students ar