【文章內容簡介】 jor Chinese holidays” in China. Here are the customs of eating Zongzi and racing dragonboat on the Dragon Boat Festival.China is a nation of etiquette （禮儀）. Chinese people can respect, trust and help each other. We all learn and grow together. Everyone in my school should protect the whole public environment. Climbing the trees, picking the flowers and throwing garbage at random are not allowed there.I hope you can e to China someday to experience the ancient culture of China. Look forward to hearing from you soon.All the best.Li Hua【解析】【分析】本文要求給你的印度朋友Danny寫一篇關于華夏文明的回信?！驹斀狻课恼滦枰榻B下中國的文化。表格中列舉了三個要點，寫作時注意不要漏寫。平時注意多多積累句型、短語。細心檢查避免疏漏。以圖表展示的作文要以“讀”為主，首先要認真讀懂圖表中的要求，對所給信息加以分析、推斷、篩選、概括，去粗取精；在寫作時目的要明確，要注意內容的準確性和嚴肅性。【點睛】寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關系，上下文之間可以適當使用連接詞。如but, so, then等?？梢赃m當使用高分句子。本篇文章寫的好的句子有：Chinese civilization is one of the oldest and longest civilizations in the world．中華文明是世界上最古老、最悠久的文明之一。China is a nation of etiquette（禮儀），中國是一個禮儀之邦。5． “inspire” 一詞的漢語解釋是“激勵；鼓舞；賦予靈感；或啟發(fā)思考”等。請以 “The person who inspired me”為題寫一篇不少于 80 詞的短文，向校報的英語園地投稿。要點： 1. What kind of person is he/ she？2. How did he/ she inspire you？要求： 1. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的姓名和校名。2. 語言流暢，字跡清楚?！敬鸢浮縏he person who inspired meMany people around gave me deep impressions. They helped me, encouraged me and inspired me. But the person who inspired me most, I think, is my friend Wang Peng. Wang Peng is a small thin boy with two big black eyes. He doesn39。t talk too much, but always keeps a smile on his face. He is warmhearted and ready to help others. If I need any help for my math exercises, he is always the one that can help me out. As a good student, he studies very hard. In the early morning, you can see him stand near a tree and read English intensively. Few students can arrive at school as early as he is. He also does well in many sports, such as badminton and pingpang. He got the first prize in last year39。s pingpang petition.You can see the good personality and the spirit of persistence in this small body. He is my idol and I wish I could be a student as good as he is.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以The person who inspired me為題，介紹一個曾經(jīng)激勵過你的人。題目中用問題的形式給予了提示，審題可知，短文應包括兩個部分的內容：首先介紹這個激勵過你的人是誰，他是怎樣的一個人；然后介紹他是如何激勵你的。學生們可以這兩個問題為提綱，發(fā)揮想象力，充實細節(jié)信息，組織語言，連貫成文。短文應以一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時為主來敘述，人稱是第三人稱和第一人稱，注意謂語動詞形式的變化。寫作時應注意：首先要符合題目要求，包括題目中要求的所有信息，不能遺漏要點，可以適當發(fā)揮，注意上下文的銜接。其次應注意英語表達習慣和漢語的不同，不要按照漢語思維逐詞翻譯。應該從句子的整體結構入手，寫完整的句子。可以簡單句結構為主，輔以并列句、復合句。為提升文章檔次，應使用高級詞匯以及復雜結構。同時語句之間使用恰當?shù)倪B接成分使文意連貫、自然?！军c睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求，介紹了一個曾經(jīng)激勵過自己的人。短文有以下幾個優(yōu)點：首先文章內容完整，層次清晰，短文分三段，第一段先介紹了這個人是誰，第二段描寫了這個人身上的品質以及對自己的應選；最后一段結尾。各部分內容安排合理，主次分明。其次短文中使用了正確的人稱和時態(tài)，文章以第三人稱和第一人稱為主來敘述，主要使用了一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時，動詞形式變化準確，注意了第三人稱單數(shù)形式以及過去式形式的變化，語法規(guī)范。用詞準確，語言得體，句式結構完整，符合英語的表達習慣。短文中使用了一些較好的句型和短語，如But the person who inspired me most, I think, is my friend Wang Peng.、Wang Peng is a small thin boy with two big black eyes.、He doesn39。t talk too much, but always keeps a smile on his face.、If I need any help for my math exercises, he is always the one that can help me out.、He also does well in many sports, such as badminton and pingpang.、He is my idol and I wish I could be a student as good as he 。6．題目②“持之以恒，方得始。”堅持是一種可貴的品格。生活中想要做成任何一件事情，都需要持之以恒的精神。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“堅持”為主題的征文活動。假如你是李華，請用英語寫一篇短文投稿。談淡你在初中生活中堅持的一件事（愛好，習慣……），你是怎樣做的，以及你的感受。提示詞語：keep, practice, difficult, give up, proud提示問題：1. What did you do?2. How do you feel?It s important for us to keep trying to achieve our goals. 【答案】It39。s important for us to keep trying to achieve our love running and I have kept running for three years.When I was in Grade 7，I was not good at sports and running was always my often failed in my running order to catch up with my classmates，I began to practice running every day after ，I was so tired that I really wanted to give I kept telling myself that I could make matter what kind of difficulties I faced，I tried my best to keep I do much better in running and I39