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文活動,請你根據以下問題,用英語寫一篇短文參加征文。提示:1)What’s the benefit (好處) of outdoor activities? (12 opinions)2)Which is your favourite outdoor activity? How and why? (12 examples)3)What do we need to pay attention to when we do outdoor activities? (At least 1 suggestion)要求:1)表達清楚,語法正確,上下文連貫;2)必須包括提示中的所有信息,并按要求適當發(fā)揮;3)詞數:100詞左右,開頭已給出,不計入詞數;4)不得使用真實姓名、校名和地名等。It’s spring now. Many people like to go out for some activities. I think it’s great to get close to nature. 【答案】It’s spring now. Many people like to go out for some activities. I think it’s a good way to get close to nature.When we are outdoors and in the natural world, we can not only breathe fresh air and enjoy the beautiful scene, but also relax ourselves for the ing study or work.There are many different ways we can get out into the natural world, such as hiking, cycling, camping and climbing. Cycling is my favourite. I join a cycling club, and often go out with other members. While cycling, we can forget our worries and have fun together. Also, we can learn to be a part of a team and help each other.Whatever you do, remember to stay safe. When you’re outside, it’s better to be with your parents or friends.【解析】試題分析:本篇書面表達以“outdoor activities”為話題,結合所給的寫作材料,寫一篇報刊征文稿。根據內容提示可知本文會使用到一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài),注意一些常見句式的應用。寫作中注意連詞、固定短語的交替使用,使文意連接緊密,還要注意使用豐富的語句,注意敘述順序,符合邏輯關系,最后最好要表達出人物的感想和看法。寫作亮點:本文結構緊湊,語言簡練、要點齊全。文中in the natural world, not only…but also, get out, such as, also等詞(組)的恰當使用,使上下文意連接緊密;本文還采用了豐富的句型,比如:It is +形容詞+(for sb.) to do sth.;There be句型;時間狀語從句等復合句,大大增加了信息的容量,使文章增色不少,這是一篇不錯的范文。6. 書面表達共享單車(shared bikes)在蘇州投入使用以來,給人們帶來了諸多便利,受到人們的追捧,改變了人們的出行方式,但同時也遇到了一些挑戰(zhàn),是國民素質的‘“照妖鏡”,請你根據表格中信息的提示,給《21世紀英文報》寫一篇關于共享單車看法的稿件。社會現(xiàn)狀自從出現(xiàn),飽受贊譽。諸多優(yōu)勢,出行方便,減少污染 ,負擔得起存在問題 你的觀點我認為……(考生自擬,至少2點)注意事項:,要求語句通順,意思連貫。“你的觀點”一欄用2―3句話展開合理想象。作適當發(fā)揮。,文章的開頭部分已給出,不計入總詞數。Shared bikes are being more and more popular in our daily life. 【答案】Shared bikes are being more and more popular in our daily life. They have won high praise since they appeared.Shared bikes have brought us many advantages. They can be seen everywhere so that it39。s easy for us to get around on shared bikes. Also, riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. What39。s more, using shared bikes costs so little that we can afford it.But there are some problems too. Some people can39。t return shared bikes in time. Sometimes shared bikes take up too much of the road, so they are in our way.