【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 ings to people in a special form. Also, it39。s obvious that it is more convenient. However, as a saying goes, each coin has two sides. It is not an exception, it also has some bad effects. If people can39。t grab the red packets, people may feel sad or illtempered ,even break their cell phones. What39。s worse, it may lead to the crime.【解析】這篇作文要求我們對學校進行的關于春節(jié)搶紅包這件事的調(diào)查結果進行總結，并談談自己對這件事情的看法。題目中給出了一個表格，里面包括了支持搶紅包這個游戲的人們的觀點以及反對這個游戲的人們的觀點和理由，只給了一些短語，我們需要組織語言，將這些要點用正確的英語表達出來，并使文章內(nèi)容更加豐富、完整。最后還要加上自己的看法。因此文章的內(nèi)容應主要包括三部分：支持的人們的理由；反對者們的理由；自己的看法，可以分成兩段或者三段來敘述，這樣可以使文章結構清楚，有層次。寫作時，應注意英語表達習慣和漢語的不同，不要逐詞翻譯，應從句子整體結構出發(fā)，以簡單句為主，穿插并列句和復合句。為提升文章檔次，還應注意使用高級句型和較復雜的句式。語句之間使用恰當?shù)倪B接成分，使文章整體意思連貫、表達流暢。點睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。首先短文內(nèi)容完整、結構清晰。文章分為三段，第一段是題目中已經(jīng)給出的，因此了文章的話題。第二段中作者表述了支持和反對玩這個游戲的人們各自的理由；第三段中作者發(fā)表了自己的看法。其次短文中語言得體，句式準確，符合英語的表達習慣。文章以一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)為主，特別注意了謂語動詞的正確形式，語法規(guī)范、準確。短文中使用了較豐富的句型，如About 75% of them think it is a popular form of entertainment, bring them more fun.、Grabbing red packets has been part of people’s lives、About 25% of them say some people spend too much time grabbing red packets、Personally, there39。s no doubt that not only does it bring people happiness, but also send blessings to people in a special form.、If people can39。t grab the red packets, people may feel sad or illtempered ,even break their cell 。文章中也出現(xiàn)了一些語法上的小錯誤，總的來說，不影響整篇文章的質(zhì)量。5． 假如你是李華，你的英國筆友 Jack 給你寫郵件表達了想?yún)⒓幽阈Ｊ钇跒橥鈬鴮W生舉辦的漢語夏令營的愿望，希望你告知活動舉辦的具體時間地點，活動安排以及你的建議。提示詞語： Chinese classes, learn, attend, culture, prepare提示問題： ● When and where will the Chinese Summer Camp be held?● What activities will be held at the Chinese Summer Camp?● What is your advice for Jack?Dear Jack,I am very glad to know that you are interested in the Chinese Summer Camp in ourschool this summer holiday . .Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Jack,I am very glad to know that you are interested in the Chinese Summer Camp in our school this summer holiday.The Chinese Summer Camp will be held in our school from July 10th to July 30th this summer. The activities of this Chinese Summer Camp are as follows:First, you will attend Chinese classes, learning the meaning of Chinese characters. Second, you will take part in different parties, knowing the history of China and Chinese culture, especially Chinese holidays, which will impress you deeply.What’s more, you will have chances to visit some museums and the Great Wall. What you should prepare is a pair of shoes for the visit. If you have any questions, please tell me. I am looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua【解析】【詳解】：這是一篇提綱類書面表達，只給了一些要點提示，但都不很明確。學生除了要把所給要點提示都表達出來外，還要進行適當拓展，使文章內(nèi)容充實。：該題要求寫作體裁為書信格式，所以例文用第一人稱I進行寫作，在文章結尾也按照標準書信格式進行了收尾。文章時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時。文章條理分明，三個要點提示都已表達清楚，并進行了適當拓展，所給單詞也都全部用上。：短語：as follows，take part in，What’s more，look forward to。句型：被動句型，現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語，主語從句。6．近年來，習近平主席提出了實現(xiàn)中華民族偉大復興的“中國夢”。學校開展了“夢想少年”的主題演講活動，假如你是張明，請根據(jù)以下提供的要點，以“I39。m a Dream Teenager”為題，寫一篇80－100詞的短文，向大家推介自己。（可聯(lián)系實際，適當發(fā)揮）注意：1．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名和校名。提示詞語： good at ..with ...rules up popular with... to do something【答案】I39。m a Dream Teenager Good morning， dear teachers and friends， I am Zhang Ming． It39。s great honor for me to make a speech here． As a fifteenyearold boy， my dream is to be a good teacher． To make my dream e tr