【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 也很明確。其次短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，文章主要使用了一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞形式準(zhǔn)確。句式結(jié)構(gòu)以簡(jiǎn)單句為主，敘述清晰、簡(jiǎn)潔。也使用了并列句和復(fù)合句的結(jié)構(gòu)，如賓語(yǔ)從句、狀語(yǔ)從句等。短文中使用了豐富的句式，如Some students can39。t get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams too much.、My parents wanted me to be the top student in my class、In this way, I feel less stressed out so that I can concentrate more on my studies等等。5．　　近年來(lái)霧霾天氣在中國(guó)許多城市頻頻發(fā)生。霧霾天氣引起大家極大的關(guān)注。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇有關(guān)霧霾的短文向校刊“英語(yǔ)角”投稿,內(nèi)容包括：1. 霧霾的危害 2. 霧霾產(chǎn)生的原因（2個(gè)） 3. 應(yīng)對(duì)霧霾的措施（3個(gè)）提示：霧霾 smog poisonous 有毒的注意：1. 詞數(shù)110左右； 2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫； 3. 開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好（不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。In recent years, many cities in China have been hit by smog frequently, which has aroused great concern among people. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】　　In recent years, many cities in China have been hit by smog frequently, which has aroused great concern among people.　　Smog has a bad effect on people’s health. Many people, children and the old in particular, suffer from illnesses caused by smog. Consequently, citizens are warned not to go out without wearing masks. 　　How does it e about? Scientists have found that it is human activity that has caused this. The poisonous matters in the air mainly e as a result of people’s burning coal, driving cars, industry production and so on.　　What should we do to stop the situation from worsening? First, cleaner fuels for cars and stricter emission standards for factories are of vital importance. Second, for us individuals, living a green life like going to work or school by public transport is a good choice. 　　Also planting more trees to increase green areas is necessary. I believe every contribution counts. Only if we work together will smog weather disappear pletely. 【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們根據(jù)提示來(lái)介紹有關(guān)霧霾的情況，題目中給出了寫(xiě)作的內(nèi)容，我們應(yīng)將這些內(nèi)容用正確的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)出來(lái)。首先應(yīng)注意在短文中要包括題目中給出的所有信息，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，并注意表達(dá)的層次和條理。其次要注意使用正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，通過(guò)分析可知，這篇短文應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞用原形，特別要注意謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞形式要變化，這是一個(gè)寫(xiě)作的難點(diǎn)。最后要注意英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣，英語(yǔ)句式與漢語(yǔ)在語(yǔ)序和詞性上的使用是不同的，要注意不能逐詞翻譯，寫(xiě)漢語(yǔ)式的英語(yǔ)。應(yīng)從句子整體考慮，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯和句型來(lái)表達(dá)，語(yǔ)法規(guī)范。還應(yīng)使用一些較好的句型或者短語(yǔ)，增強(qiáng)文章的表現(xiàn)力。6．書(shū)面表達(dá)（原創(chuàng)）今年春節(jié)，很多人加入了搶紅包的游戲，但也有人表示擔(dān)憂。學(xué)校英語(yǔ)?？队⒄Z(yǔ)天地》對(duì)此進(jìn)行調(diào)查，假如你是一名?？∮浾?，請(qǐng)你就此次調(diào)查的結(jié)果進(jìn)行總結(jié)，并談?wù)勀阕约旱挠^點(diǎn)。Grabbing red packets on lineAgreement（75%） popular form of entertainment, bring more fun people closer, make more friendsDisagreement（25%）spend too much time.not have enough munication with family members, feel lonelyYour opinion1.2.提示詞：We chat 微信Grabbing red packets on line搶紅包注意：（1）詞數(shù)80左右，開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；（2）文章應(yīng)包括題中所提的所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫；（3）文中請(qǐng)勿提及你的真實(shí)姓名、校名和其他真實(shí)信息。As we all know, grabbing red packets on line won popularity with the people during the Spring Festival in 2016. From then on, more and more people have been crazy about it. So we did the survey on the activity of “Grabbing red packets” among students.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】As we all know, grabbing red packets on line won popularity with the people during the Spring Festival in 2016. From then on, more and more people have been crazy about it. So we did the survey on the activity of “Grabbing red packets” among students.About 75% of them think it