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__________________________________________________【答案】As we all know, grabbing red packets on line won popularity with the people during the Spring Festival in 2016. From then on, more and more people have been crazy about it. So we did the survey on the activity of “Grabbing red packets” among students.About 75% of them think it is a popular form of entertainment, bring them more fun. It can bring people closer , they can make more friends .Grabbing red packets has been part of people’s lives. About 25% of them say some people spend too much time grabbing red packets. They don’t have enough munication with their family members .They may feel a little lonelyPersonally, there39。學(xué)校英語(yǔ)校刊《英語(yǔ)天地》對(duì)此進(jìn)行調(diào)查,假如你是一名??∮浾撸?qǐng)你就此次調(diào)查的結(jié)果進(jìn)行總結(jié),并談?wù)勀阕约旱挠^點(diǎn)。還應(yīng)使用一些較好的句型或者短語(yǔ),增強(qiáng)文章的表現(xiàn)力。最后要注意英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣,英語(yǔ)句式與漢語(yǔ)在語(yǔ)序和詞性上的使用是不同的,要注意不能逐詞翻譯,寫漢語(yǔ)式的英語(yǔ)。首先應(yīng)注意在短文中要包括題目中給出的所有信息,不能遺漏要點(diǎn),并注意表達(dá)的層次和條理。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫一篇有關(guān)霧霾的短文向??坝⒄Z(yǔ)角”投稿,內(nèi)容包括:1. 霧霾的危害 2. 霧霾產(chǎn)生的原因(2個(gè)) 3. 應(yīng)對(duì)霧霾的措施(3個(gè))提示:霧霾 smog poisonous 有毒的注意:1. 詞數(shù)110左右; 2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫; 3. 開頭語(yǔ)已為你寫好(不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。5. 近年來(lái)霧霾天氣在中國(guó)許多城市頻頻發(fā)生。短文中使用了豐富的句式,如Some students can39。句式結(jié)構(gòu)以簡(jiǎn)單句為主,敘述清晰、簡(jiǎn)潔。短文有如下幾個(gè)優(yōu)點(diǎn):首先短文內(nèi)容完整,包含了題目中要求的所有信息,且層次清晰,文章分成了四段,每一段的中心話題也很明確。語(yǔ)句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分,使文意連貫。句式結(jié)構(gòu)可以簡(jiǎn)單句結(jié)構(gòu)為主,這樣的句式表達(dá)簡(jiǎn)潔、明了,易于掌握。學(xué)生們可以從自身的經(jīng)歷和體會(huì)出發(fā),選取生活中常見的場(chǎng)景進(jìn)行介紹。審題可知,文章中應(yīng)主要包括以下幾個(gè)內(nèi)容:首先介紹同學(xué)們普遍感到壓力這種現(xiàn)象;然后講述自己過(guò)去曾面對(duì)的壓力;最后介紹自己如何成功緩解壓力。 I had a talk with my parents and told them I had done my best. Finally, they understood me. In this way, I feel less stressed out so that I can concentrate more on my studies.s world. Most students in our class are under too much pressure. Some students can39。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要求寫一份發(fā)言稿,內(nèi)容包括:1. 普遍存在的壓力:同學(xué)關(guān)系;考試2. 我過(guò)去的壓力:父母的期望;學(xué)習(xí)3. 我成功緩解壓力的辦法及效果;……要求:1. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和校名;2. 詞數(shù)80左右,短文的開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。4.書面表達(dá)初中即將畢業(yè),同學(xué)們都感到壓力很大。s good for us to do some sports.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文,本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫作要點(diǎn),動(dòng)筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn),然后圍繞要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮.寫作中,應(yīng)注意描述的全面性,盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上;結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容,可知本文主要是第三人稱,一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)進(jìn)行敘述.語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu),造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣.適當(dāng)使用連詞,做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密,符合邏輯關(guān)系.【點(diǎn)睛】這篇短文用到了一些好的句型:They also think kids can help do housework to learn some life skills. But the kids disagree. They think it39。s important to take summer courses. They also think kids can help do housework to learn some life skills. But the kids disagree. They think it39。(4)詞數(shù):不少于80。(2)開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。 opinionsGet ready for high school. Do some housework…Kid39。根據(jù)下表提示,寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文,描述他們的不同看法,同時(shí)發(fā)表你自己對(duì)暑假安排的觀點(diǎn)。此處would like to, enjoy doing sth, learn from, take part in, such as, look after, allow sb to do sth, let sb do sth, look forward to 等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。點(diǎn)睛:本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞,注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。結(jié)合所給材料,可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài),人稱為第一,三人稱,注意主謂一致問(wèn)題,句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu),注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用,比如:I39。m glad you would like to be a volunteer. Now let me answer your questions.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I hope you love volunteering and do well in it. Looking forward to your good news.Best wishesDavid【答案】Dear Li Ming,Thanks for your letter. I39。、校名等相關(guān)信息。To: davidwoodlandschoolFrom: limingsunshineschoolSubject: VolunteeringDear David, I’m writing to ask you for advice. I know you often do volunteer work in your free time. I’m interested in it very much. I’m going to do some this summer vacation. But I know little about it. Could you help me answer the following questions? ●Why do you want to be a volunteer? ●What kind of vo1unteer work is suitable for us students? ●Do you have any problems with volunteering? ●If my parents don’t allow me to do so, what should I do? I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon. Best wishes, Li Ming注意:。2.假定你是David,來(lái)自美國(guó),你的好友Li Ming想要在今年的暑假去做志愿者,他來(lái)信向你了解有關(guān)這方面的情況?!军c(diǎn)睛】本文要求以“Bikesharing”為題,根據(jù)表格的內(nèi)容提示,寫一篇短文,表達(dá)自己對(duì)共享單車的看法和建議。s known that it has many advantages.,F(xiàn)irst of all, it39。s health.(優(yōu)勢(shì)) However, it also brings some problems. For example, some people throw them away after using bikes. Even some people damage them, and some bikes are stolen.(難題) In my opinion, ever