【正文】 查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結構是否合理，有無重復、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數是否符合要求等。修改潤色。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。初寫短文。有了提綱，我們就可以根據提綱和主題確定相關的寫作材料。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點，詞數符合要求。點睛：寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：認真審題。【亮點說明】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務，語言表達符合英語習慣，準確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別適用一些亮點詞句，如convenient，disadvantage，in good quality，figure out，have the chance to do，be attacked by，of course，take care of等。With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online. 【答案】With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online. It has bee fashionable. Some of us students also join the group. Shopping online has many advantages. Just with the click of a mouse, you can buy what you’re interested in without going outdoors. You can avoid getting tired and being trapped in the crowds and save a lot of time. When shopping online, you can choose from more varieties of goods, whose prices are generally lower. Every coin has two sides. Its disadvantages are obvious, too. On one hand, it’s very easy for you to buy goods that aren’t like the pictures you see on the Internet. On the other hand, shopping online may cause people to buy goods that are not badly needed. That’s a waste of money. All in all, I love shopping online.【解析】本文屬于材料作文，主要講述網購的優(yōu)點和缺點。 商品 goods。請你根據以下表格的提示，寫一篇網上購物的文章。7．隨著網絡的發(fā)展、人們消費觀念的轉變， 購物方式也在悄然的發(fā)生變化。語法規(guī)范、準確。文章最后的兩句話也點明了文章的主題。作者在短文中敘述了林濤和梅梅兩人在公園里給小樹澆水、并掛牌子告訴人們注意保護樹木。點睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。在文章中點綴幾個并列句、復合句或復雜句式，調整文章節(jié)奏，提升文章檔次。寫作時要注意按照事情發(fā)展的先后順序，這樣可以使文章條理清楚。因此寫作前，要仔細看圖片，了解圖片中所發(fā)生的事情，并提煉出要點，列出所要用到的詞匯、短語等，或者列出大概的寫作提綱。請用英語寫一篇約100詞的短文。使用一些好的句型和短語，注意正確的時態(tài)和語態(tài)以及謂語動詞的形式，還需要注意英語表達和漢語習慣的不同，讓整篇短文表達流暢。動筆前要認真審題，深入挖掘題材內涵，不可遺漏要點，并適當發(fā)揮。Public bicycles are being more and more popular in our daily life. 【答案】Public bicycles are being more and more popular in our daily life. They have won high praise since they appeared. Public bicycles have brought us many advantages. They can be seen everywhere so that it’s easy for us to get around on public bicycles. Also, Riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. What’s more, using public bicycles costs so little that we can afford it. But there are some problems too. Some people can’t return public bicycles in time. Sometimes because public bicycles take up too much of the road, they are in our way. I think we should encourage more people to use public bicycles. After all, it’s a way of living a green life.【解析】這是一篇材料作文，要求給英文報社寫一篇投稿，介紹對共享單車看法?！澳愕挠^點”一欄用23句話展開合理想象，做適當發(fā)揮。社會現狀自從出現，飽受贊譽。短文里還使用了一些較好的短語和句型，如In the past, my hometown was very poor and the streets were very narrow.、Now the government takes measures to improve the pollution and the city bees cleaner and cleaner、More and more people have their own cars and live a fortable life、There are thousands of tourists from all over the country every 。整篇文章內容充實、完整，敘述清晰、條理，結構合理。然后是家鄉(xiāng)現在的樣子，這里主要以一般現在時態(tài)為主?！军c睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者按照題目要求，介紹了自己的家鄉(xiāng)這些年來的變化。注意句式的多變，長短句結合、簡單句、并列句或復合句穿插使用，提升文章的檔次。這兩個地方需要學生們展開想象，合理發(fā)揮，注意要與文章的其他部分能夠很好的結合起來，內容也要統(tǒng)一，符合題目要求，合情