【英語(yǔ)】中考英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)匯編經(jīng)典(編輯修改稿)
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【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 【答案】Our school life in Grade NineIt is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student. Here is what our school life is like now.At school, all of our teachers work very hard. Most of them are patient enough to help us with all kinds of problems, whether in our study or in our life. As a result, they won high respect from us.As for students, in class we listen to the teacher carefully and think actively. After class, we are busy doing our homework. Every student is making efforts to try to achieve our dreams.At weekends, we usually spend a lot of time doing our homework, too. So we can39。t afford time for our hobbies any more. I feel a bit stressed actually, so I try to spare some time to play basketball or turn on my favorite TV program to get relaxed.No pains, no gains. But the more carefully we plan our day, the more colorful our school life will be.【解析】亮點(diǎn)說明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)，例如at school，work hard，most of，patient enough，help sb. with sth.，all kinds of problems，in our life，as a result，as for students，listen to，be busy doing，try to do，spend a lot of time doing，not any more，play basketball等。而It is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student./ But the more carefully we plan our day, the more colorful our school life will ，豐富了習(xí)作內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。點(diǎn)睛：書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。5．Life is just like a mirror, you smile at it, and it smiles at you, too. 請(qǐng)你以“Learn to Smile”為題，根據(jù)下表所列的要點(diǎn)寫一篇100詞左右的文章（文章開頭已給出）。學(xué)會(huì)對(duì)自己微笑面對(duì)困難與煩惱學(xué)會(huì)微笑（考試失利、被別人誤解等）。使你自信，擊敗你的人有時(shí)就是你自己。有益于身心健康。學(xué)會(huì)對(duì)他人微笑便于與他人之間的交流。給別人帶來快樂,自己也快樂。微笑是一種語(yǔ)言人人都能懂，傳遞友誼，拉近距離。參考詞匯： 對(duì)某人微笑 smile at sb. 誤解 misunderstand短文必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，不要逐字翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連貫通順。 Learn to SmileI remember a song by Westlife, the first sentence of it is “Just a smile and the rain is gone.” Do you like smiling? I think you should learn to smile ._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Learn to SmileI remember a song by Westlife, the first sentence of it is “Just a smile and the rain is gone.”Do you like smiling? I think you should learn to smile .First, learn to smile at yourself when something unpleasant happens in your life. If you fail an exam or you are misunderstood by your friends, don’t be sad. Just smile at yourself . Smiling at yourself brings back your confidence . Sometimes the one who beats you is not others, but yourself. And smile can also keep you healthy. Second, learn to smile at others. It will make you municate better with people. Smiling at others makes yourself happy as well. In a word, smile is a kind of language belonging to everyone. It passes love and friendship and helps shorten the distance between you and other people. Living with a smile ,every day will be shiny.【解析】這是一篇表格式的作文，要點(diǎn)是一表格的形式出現(xiàn)，首先要研
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