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意思更連貫,但要點一定要全,不能漏掉。寫作時要注意遣詞造句,不能受漢語的影響,要用地道的英語表達(dá),注意時態(tài),語態(tài),單詞拼寫,語法等問題,用好簡單句,適當(dāng)用復(fù)雜句??梢杂靡恍└呒壴~匯。還要注意句子的關(guān)聯(lián)。5. 近年來霧霾天氣在中國許多城市頻頻發(fā)生。霧霾天氣引起大家極大的關(guān)注。請你用英語寫一篇有關(guān)霧霾的短文向校刊“英語角”投稿,內(nèi)容包括:1. 霧霾的危害 2. 霧霾產(chǎn)生的原因(2個) 3. 應(yīng)對霧霾的措施(3個)提示:霧霾 smog poisonous 有毒的注意:1. 詞數(shù)110左右; 2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫; 3. 開頭語已為你寫好(不計入總詞數(shù))。In recent years, many cities in China have been hit by smog frequently, which has aroused great concern among people. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】 In recent years, many cities in China have been hit by smog frequently, which has aroused great concern among people. Smog has a bad effect on people’s health. Many people, children and the old in particular, suffer from illnesses caused by smog. Consequently, citizens are warned not to go out without wearing masks. How does it e about? Scientists have found that it is human activity that has caused this. The poisonous matters in the air mainly e as a result of people’s burning coal, driving cars, industry production and so on. What should we do to stop the situation from worsening? First, cleaner fuels for cars and stricter emission standards for factories are of vital importance. Second, for us individuals, living a green life like going to work or school by public transport is a good choice. Also planting more trees to increase green areas is necessary. I believe every contribution counts. Only if we work together will smog weather disappear pletely. 【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們根據(jù)提示來介紹有關(guān)霧霾的情況,題目中給出了寫作的內(nèi)容,我們應(yīng)將這些內(nèi)容用正確的英語表達(dá)出來。首先應(yīng)注意在短文中要包括題目中給出的所有信息,不能遺漏要點,并注意表達(dá)的層次和條理。其次要注意使用正確的時態(tài)和人稱,通過分析可知,這篇短文應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài),謂語動詞用原形,特別要注意謂語動詞形式要變化,這是一個寫作的難點。最后要注意英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣,英語句式與漢語在語序和詞性上的使用是不同的,要注意不能逐詞翻譯,寫漢語式的英語。應(yīng)從句子整體考慮,使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯和句型來表達(dá),語法規(guī)范。還應(yīng)使用一些較好的句型或者短語,增強(qiáng)文章的表現(xiàn)力。6.書面表達(dá)某英文報舉辦“家鄉(xiāng)的變化”主題征文活動。請根據(jù)下表提示,以“The Changes in My Hometown”為題,用英語寫一篇100詞左右的短文,不必逐字逐句翻譯。過去生活條件差,道路狹窄,房屋破舊。污染嚴(yán)重,垃圾遍地。......(適當(dāng)發(fā)揮一至兩點)現(xiàn)在環(huán)境:政府采取措施來改善污染,城市變得越來越整潔。生活:住房寬敞明亮;許多人搬進(jìn)了新公寓。越來越多的人有自己的汽車;生活舒適。交通:新的飛機(jī)場已投入使用多年。be in use(投入使用);旅游:每年有成千上萬來自各地的游客。將來希望……(兩點)要求:1. 短文的開頭已為你寫好,不計入總詞數(shù);2. 短文必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點,并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,使短文連貫通順;3. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名、地名等相關(guān)信息。Changes my hometownMy hometown has changed a lot over the years.In the past, _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】My hometown has changed a