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e traditional virtue of the Chinese nation. What Daming should do now is to ask for forgiveness and promise that he will never do that again.Promise is very important. Everyone should keep it. Yours,Tony【解析】【分析】本文為一篇稿件,需要學(xué)生通過大明和玲玲之間,大明沒有信守承諾的事情,談自己的看法。信守承諾是中華民族的傳統(tǒng)美德,在寫作過程中,注意文章結(jié)構(gòu),先寫出大明和玲玲之間的事情,然后再說自己對此的看法?!驹斀狻渴紫?,第一句話直接點明作者的觀點,大明是犯錯了的。然后仔細(xì)闡述了事情發(fā)生的經(jīng)過。接下來說出自己對此事件的看法,不信守承諾會導(dǎo)致失去別人的信任,對大明的建議是除了認(rèn)錯之外,還需要再次保證永不再犯?!军c睛】文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰,符合邏輯,先表明自己觀點,然后闡述事情,提出自己的觀點和建議。整篇文章在謀篇布局上,比較嚴(yán)密。除此之外,中間也使用了一些連接詞,例如but,so,because of等,使文章更加通順。5.(B)根據(jù)要求完成大作文,詞數(shù):80100 We Get from Sports 的短文,應(yīng)該包含以下要點:1,學(xué)生參加體育運(yùn)動的興趣不同,理由各異.,通過運(yùn)動來放松自己.,希望運(yùn)動能使自己更強(qiáng)壯.,希望運(yùn)動使自己減肥和保持健康,苗條..:文中不得出現(xiàn)自己的名字和學(xué)校的名字,不計入詞數(shù).:keep slim (保持苗條)What We Get from SportsStudents in our school have one thing in mon an interest in 【答案】Students in our school have one thing in mon an interest in sports. But different students have different reasons for taking part in sports.Many students have sports when they feel tired after study. They just want to relax themselves and have fun. Most boys love sports. They take part in all kinds of sports in order to bee stronger. They join in the sports that interest them most, such as soccer, basketball and volleyball. As for girls, they want to lose weight. They want to keep slim, so they also like taking exercise.In my opinion, no matter what reasons we have, we all can get a lot from sports.【解析】【詳解】本篇寫作主要是談?wù)撟约簩\(yùn)動的觀點和看法,應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài),寫作要點要包括:。(多數(shù)學(xué)生的觀點、男生的觀點、女生的觀點)。亮點說明:這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文,很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù),語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣,準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài),主謂一致,在文中使用了時間狀語從句,定語從句,特別使用一些亮點詞句,如have fun,in order to,as for,in my opinion等。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系,增加上下文意思連貫,句子通順,行文連貫。6.2019年2月20日,中央宣傳部授予北京榜樣優(yōu)秀群體“時代楷?!狈Q號。時代楷模充分體現(xiàn)“愛國、敬業(yè)、誠信、友善”的價值準(zhǔn)則。某網(wǎng)站正在開展以“向時代楷模學(xué)習(xí)”為主題的英語征文活動。假如你是李華,請用英語寫一篇短文投稿,談?wù)勆钪心阍撛趺醋?,以及這樣做的意義。提示詞語:pick up, rubbish, study, honest, important提示問題:● What should you do in your daily life? ● Why do you do so? As a middle student, I can do a lot to learn from our role models. 【答案】例文As a middle student, I can do a lot to learn from our role models. First, we can protect the environment. For example, we can pick up the rubbish, recycle things in our daily life, and so on. Second, we shall respect people around us. Respect others to start from small things. Third, behave well. We should be kind to others, warmhearted to everyone, and generous to our friends. By doing so, our world will bee more and more beautiful.【解析】【詳解】題干解讀:該題目屬于應(yīng)用文寫作,但寫作時要按照應(yīng)用文格式寫,寫作時承接短文開頭,具體寫出怎樣做以及這樣做的意義。例文點評:例文采用的是一段式,人稱用的是第一人稱復(fù)數(shù)形式,時態(tài)主要用的是一般現(xiàn)在時,描述具體怎么做時,描寫細(xì)致,條理清晰。高分亮點:短語:protect the environment;pick up the rubbish;behave well;be kind to sb;more and more beautiful。句型:By doing so, our world will bee more and more beautiful;we can pick up the rubbish, recycle things in our daily life, and so on。7.根據(jù)要求完成大作文,詞數(shù):80100詞. 豐富的校本課程可以讓你的生活更精彩.請根據(jù)下列圖示中所提供的特色課程,按內(nèi)容及要求,用英文完成寫作.內(nèi)容包括:1.Whichcourse(s)doyoulike?2.Whydoyoulikeit/them?3.Whatcanyoulearnfromit/them?寫作要求:1.依據(jù)你的興趣選擇課程(數(shù)量不限);2.短文開頭已給出,不計入總詞數(shù);3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的校名及姓名. Ofallthecour