【文章內容簡介】 【答案】Public bicycles are being more and more popular in our daily life. They have won high praise since they appeared. Public bicycles have brought us many advantages. They can be seen everywhere so that it’s easy for us to get around on public bicycles. Also, Riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. What’s more, using public bicycles costs so little that we can afford it. But there are some problems too. Some people can’t return public bicycles in time. Sometimes because public bicycles take up too much of the road, they are in our way. I think we should encourage more people to use public bicycles. After all, it’s a way of living a green life.【解析】這是一篇材料作文，要求給英文報社寫一篇投稿，介紹對共享單車看法。作文應包括4個主要內容，一個是社會現狀，第二個優(yōu)點，第三是存在的問題，最后發(fā)表個人的觀點。動筆前要認真審題，深入挖掘題材內涵，不可遺漏要點，并適當發(fā)揮。要注意上下文的連貫，將這些內容有機的連接起來，不要逐句翻譯。使用一些好的句型和短語，注意正確的時態(tài)和語態(tài)以及謂語動詞的形式，還需要注意英語表達和漢語習慣的不同，讓整篇短文表達流暢。6．隨著網絡的發(fā)展、人們消費觀念的轉變， 購物方式也在悄然的發(fā)生變化?！熬W購”已成為一種時尚，越來越多的學生也加入到網購群體中。請你根據以下表格的提示，寫一篇網上購物的文章。優(yōu)點（advantage）；節(jié)約時間；避免擁擠、勞累，品種多缺點（disadvantage）， 看不到商品本身， 造成浪費你的觀點……提示詞匯：網購shopping online。 商品 goods。 導致 cause注意：，可適當發(fā)揮；；：100詞左右，文章開頭已給出，但不計入總數。With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online. 【答案】With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online. It has bee fashionable. Some of us students also join the group. Shopping online has many advantages. Just with the click of a mouse, you can buy what you’re interested in without going outdoors. You can avoid getting tired and being trapped in the crowds and save a lot of time. When shopping online, you can choose from more varieties of goods, whose prices are generally lower. Every coin has two sides. Its disadvantages are obvious, too. On one hand, it’s very easy for you to buy goods that aren’t like the pictures you see on the Internet. On the other hand, shopping online may cause people to buy goods that are not badly needed. That’s a waste of money. All in all, I love shopping online.【解析】本文屬于材料作文，主要講述網購的優(yōu)點和缺點。根據要表達的內容確定并準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當增加內容?！玖咙c說明】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務，語言表達符合英語習慣，準確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別適用一些亮點詞句，如convenient，disadvantage，in good quality，figure out，have the chance to do，be attacked by，of course，take care of等。增強邏輯關系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準確，句子通順，行文連貫。點睛：寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：認真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達的關鍵。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點，詞數符合要求。構思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據提綱和主題確定相關的寫作材料。通常書面表達給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內容要求學生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當的素材也是使短文中心突出、明確的關鍵。初寫短文。一切都準備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時還要注意使用恰當的連詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤色。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結構是否合理，有無重復、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數是否符合要求等。7．近年來，習近平主席提出了實現中華民族偉大復興的“中國夢”。學校開展了“夢想少年”的主題演講活動，假如你是張明，請根據以下提供的要點，以“I39。m a Dream Teenager”為題，寫一篇80－100詞的短文，向大家推介自己。（可聯系實際，適當發(fā)揮）注意：1．文中不得出現真實的人名和校名。提示詞語： good at ..with ...rules up popular with... to do something【答案】I39。m a D