【文章內容簡介】 or doing exercise. What’s more, it can deal with some emergencies. For example, if an old man falls ill suddenly, the robot will call doctors immediately for help.I’m sure my new invention will be a great help to the elderly. I think in the future people will live a more fortable life with the help of new robots.【解析】亮點說明：這篇習作的層次清晰，內容飽滿，表達流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如thank you for doing，I’d like to do，introduce sb. to，all of you，at home，do some washing，at a fixed time，have a chat，play chess，do exercise，deal with，a great help，in the future等。而Thank you for attending our robot show./ I invented the new robot mainly to help the elderly at home. / I think in the future people will live a more fortable life with the help of new ，豐富了習作內容，使表達多樣化，是本文的最大亮點。點睛：書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學英語知識準確表達意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復雜的句式結構以便得到較高的分數(shù)。5．書面表達你即將升入高中，面臨寄宿（a boarding school）和走讀（a day school）兩類學校的選擇。請你以“A boarding school or a day school”為題。寫一篇短文，內容須包括：讀寄宿學校的利和弊；讀走讀學校的利和弊；你的選擇和理由（不得與上述兩點內容重復）。注意：1. 詞數(shù)。100詞左右（文章開頭結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）；2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名、校名等信息；3. 文章必須包含提示中的所有信息，并按要求適當發(fā)揮。A hoarding school or a day schoolWe are going to graduate from our middle school, __________________________________【答案】We are going to graduate from our middle schools, and we will make a choice to enter a boarding school or a day school. Both kinds of school have their advantages and disadvantages.If we choose a boarding school, we will save time to study. However, we may have less time to stay with our family. If we choose a day school, parents can know more about our studies. At the same time puter games and TV plays may make a bad influence on us. As for me, I prefer a boarding school. We should pay attention to our studies to get good grades in the high school.【解析】【分析】整體分析：這是一篇給材料作文。可以分三段寫。第一段要寫總體交代你即將升入高中，面臨寄宿（a boarding school）和走讀（a day school）兩類學校的選擇。第二段要寫詳細敘述讀寄宿學校的利弊；讀走讀學校的利弊。第三段要表述作者自己的選擇和理由。【詳解】，看看有哪些要求？哪些時態(tài)？人稱？，記敘文？說明文？議論文？看圖？還是應用文？，單一還是混合。、短語、句型。，并運用適當?shù)木湫秃瓦^渡詞銜接。寫完后反復閱讀修改推敲潤色，人稱、時態(tài)、單復數(shù)一致等。運用自然過渡法和自然銜接法來是文章更為地道、通順、純正。用的短語、句型：both kinds of、If we choose a boarding school、At the same time、As for me, I prefer a boarding school、pay attention to、來增加了文章的亮點?！军c睛】這類作文的寫作方法要注意認真審題，注意過渡性語言的使用。做到：要點要全，表達要清晰明確，使用短語，句型要準確，注意避免拼寫和語法錯誤。6．今天手機在我們日常生活中已廣泛使用。但中學生在學校是否應該持有手機，一些學生和老師有不同的觀點。你們學校的?？⑽陌嬲诰痛伺e行征文活動，請根據(jù)下列表格提示的內容，用英語寫一篇征文。 觀點理由一些學生贊成擁有方便與家長聯(lián)系；一些老師反對擁有有學生用手機玩游戲；有學生用手機作弊；你的觀點1. 2.要求：1. 表達清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫；`2. 必須包含表格所給的提示信息，并作適當發(fā)揮；3. 詞數(shù)：80100詞左右（征文的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）。 Mobile phones have been used widely in our daily life 【答案】Mobile phones have been used widely in our daily life today. With the development of economy, mobile phones are more and more widely used in our daily life. However, some parents and teachers have different ideas about whether the students should use mobile phones at school. Some students are for it. They think that it is convenient to contact with parents. Mobile phones will make them more interested in learning so that they can learn more quickly and easily. Some teachers are against it．They think that some students can39。t control themselves and often play games. What39。s worse, some students cheat in exams by using mobile phones. Besides, using mobile phones too much does great harm to students39。 eyes. In my opinion, I think it is helpful for students to use mobile phones in a right way. Firstly，students can learn more knowledge using mobile phones. At the same time, parents and teachers should do something to help students. Only in this way can mobile phones be of help to their studies.【解析】【詳解】本篇寫作需注意要求中所提供的要點，不可遺漏。需在平時積累相關的詞匯，寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關系，上下文之間可以適當使用連接詞。如but, so, then等。可以適當使用高分句型。【點睛】高分句型：I think it is helpful for students to use mobile phones in a right way．我認