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_________________________________________Yours,Li Hua【答案】例文Thank you for your letter. I am glad to tell you about my dream job. Teaching is my dream job because I would like to share my knowledge with my students and help them solve problems. I am outgoing and helpful. I get on well with children. Besides, the school39。s environment appeals to me and staying with students helps to keep me young and alive. To realize my dream, I have to make full use of spare time to acquire the essential knowledge and enter a good university. What efforts are you making for your dream?Tell me about your ideal job!Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】本題通過描寫夢想中的職業(yè),讓學生對未來有憧憬,給一部分提示詞,讓學生有話可說?!驹斀狻渴紫然卮鹇殬I(yè)是教師。然后解釋為什么喜歡該工作,因為可以把自己的知識分享給孩子們,并且喜歡學校的環(huán)境。為了實現(xiàn)自己的夢想,正在為此作出努力。最后向Bill提出問題,結束全文?!军c睛】本文首先開篇功能句Thank you for your ,運用多種連接詞,比如because,Besides,To realize my dream, 等使文章連貫性強,長短句結合,讀起來朗朗上口,不失為一篇佳作。6.書面表達難忘的初中三年學習生活已經(jīng)接近尾聲,你一定既有收獲又有不足,也有許多對自己未來的期待。請以My Unforgettable Middle School Life為題,根據(jù)下面的思維導圖,寫一篇短文介紹自己難忘的校園生活并描述對未來的期盼。注意:。短文的開頭已為你寫好,不計入總詞數(shù)。,并補充相關信息,可適當發(fā)揮。語言連貫、通順。、校名等相關信息。How time flies! My colourful middle school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think about myself. 【答案】How time flies! My colourful middle school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think about myself.In the past, I learnt a lot of knowledge not only from books but also from the teachers. So, I am very grateful to them. They helped me a lot! I also got on well with my classmates. We shared happiness and sadness together. We were like a big family. However, I still have a lot to improve. I didn’t do well in Maths because I gave up easily when meeting difficult Maths problems. Besides, I didn’t have a good sense of time. I used to go to school late and that made my teachers angry.Therefore, in the future, I will try my best to bee better. I will work harder and organize my life and my time better. I hope one day, my school and teachers will be proud of me!【解析】試題分析:本篇書面表達以“My Unforgettable Middle School Life”為題,結合本題所給的寫作信息,闡述自己難忘的中學生活。根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示可知本文會用一般過去時態(tài)和一般將來時態(tài),注意一些常見句式的應用。寫作中注意連詞、固定短語的交替使用,使文意連接緊密,還要注意使用豐富的語句,注意敘述順序,符合邏輯關系,最后最好要表達出自己的感想和看法。寫作亮點:本文結構緊湊,要點齊全,語言簡練。文中 not only …but also…,help a lot,share happiness and sadness,do well in,give up, besides,so, and, a good sense of time, used to, make sb.+adj.,therefore, be proud of等詞(組)恰當使用,使上下文意連接緊密;文章的最后I hope one day, my school and teachers will be proud of me! 表達了自己愿望與想法,使文章增色不少,值得學習。7.自信賦予人力量,帶給人快樂。擁有自信,人生處處是舞臺,生活越來越精彩。假如你是李華,請你為??⒄Z園地“自信助我成長”專欄寫一篇短文,談談自信的重要性,分享一次使你更加自信的經(jīng)歷,并說說我們?nèi)绾胃幼孕?。提示詞語:powerful,happy,believe in,keep doing提示問題:Why is it important to be confident?What experience made you more confident?How can we bee more confident?It39。s very important to be confident【答案】It’s very important to be confident. Selfconfidence can bring us courage to stick to what