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s to remember what we have to do ,豐富了短文內(nèi)容,使表達(dá)多樣化,是本文的亮點(diǎn)。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性,也更富有條理。【點(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英,也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維,考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以,考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn),要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式,盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。5.(題文) 書面表達(dá)在中學(xué)生機(jī)器人大賽上,出現(xiàn)了一種專門照顧老人的新型家用智能機(jī)器人,它的主要功能有:1. 定時(shí)做飯、洗衣服; 2. 陪老人聊天、下棋、做運(yùn)動(dòng);3. 處理緊急情況(如:撥打120)假如你是該機(jī)器人的發(fā)明者,請(qǐng)你介紹這個(gè)產(chǎn)品,并談?wù)勀愕奈磥?lái)設(shè)想。要求:1. 意思連貫,語(yǔ)句通順;2. 詞數(shù)80詞左右;短文的開頭已給出(不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)) 3. 參考詞匯: at a fixed time 定時(shí)emergency 緊急情況 cpany sb. 陪伴某人Ladies and gentlemen,Thank you for attending our robot show. Now I’d like to introduce my new invention to all of you. 【答案】Ladies and gentlemen,Thank you for attending our robot show. Now I’d like to introduce my new invention to all of you.I invented the new robot mainly to help the elderly at home. It can cook meals and do some washing at a fixed time. When old people feel alone, it can also acpany them by having a chat, playing chess or doing exercise. What’s more, it can deal with some emergencies. For example, if an old man falls ill suddenly, the robot will call doctors immediately for help.I’m sure my new invention will be a great help to the elderly. I think in the future people will live a more fortable life with the help of new robots.【解析】亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明:這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰,內(nèi)容飽滿,表達(dá)流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ),例如thank you for doing,I’d like to do,introduce sb. to,all of you,at home,do some washing,at a fixed time,have a chat,play chess,do exercise,deal with,a great help,in the future等。而Thank you for attending our robot show./ I invented the new robot mainly to help the elderly at home. / I think in the future people will live a more fortable life with the help of new ,豐富了習(xí)作內(nèi)容,使表達(dá)多樣化,是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。點(diǎn)睛:書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英,也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維,考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以,考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn),要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式,盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。6.Life is just like a mirror, you smile at it, and it smiles at you, too. 請(qǐng)你以“Learn to Smile”為題,根據(jù)下表所列的要點(diǎn)寫一篇100詞左右的文章(文章開頭已給出)。學(xué)會(huì)對(duì)自己微笑面對(duì)困難與煩惱學(xué)會(huì)微笑(考試失利、被別人誤解等)。使你自信,擊敗你的人有時(shí)就是你自己。有益于身心健康。學(xué)會(huì)對(duì)他人微笑便于與他人之間的交流。給別人帶來(lái)快樂(lè),自己也快樂(lè)。微笑是一種語(yǔ)言人人都能懂,傳遞友誼,拉近距離。參考詞匯: 對(duì)某人微笑 smile at sb. 誤解 misunderstand短文必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn),不要逐字翻譯,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,使短文連貫通順。 Learn to SmileI remember a song by Westlife, the first sentence of it is “Just a smile and the rain is gone.” Do you like smiling? I think you should learn to smile ._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Learn to SmileI remember a song by Westlife, the first sentence of it is “Just a smile and the rain is gone.”Do you like smiling? I think you should learn to smile .First, learn to smile at yourself when something unpleasant happens in your life. If you fail an exam or you are misunderstood by your friends, don’t be sad. Just smile at yourself . Smiling at yourself brings back your confidence . Sometimes the one who beats you is not others, but yourself. And smile can also keep you healthy. Second, learn to smile at others. It will make you municate better with people. Smiling at others makes yourself happy as well. In a word, smile is a kind of language belonging to everyone. It passes love and friendship and helps shorten the distance between you and other people. Living wi