【文章內容簡介】 in the garden. They found that a young tree needed watering and it was going to die. So they decided to do something for the young tree. First, Meimei kept the tree straight and pushed the earth hard down with her foot. Then Lin Tao knocked a board into the earth. It said, “Please take care of trees.” After that, they quickly got water and watered it carefully. Both of them were working hard. Their teacher, Miss Li, spoke highly of them.Trees are good for the environment. We should protect them.【解析】這是一篇看圖作文，要求我們仔細觀察圖片，弄清楚里面發(fā)生的事情，用英語將這些內容完整地敘述出來，并簡單陳述自己從中學到的東西。因此寫作前，要仔細看圖片，了解圖片中所發(fā)生的事情，并提煉出要點，列出所要用到的詞匯、短語等，或者列出大概的寫作提綱。通過分析可知，這篇短文講述的是過去發(fā)生的事情，應用一般過去時態(tài)，注意謂語動詞形式的變化，尤其是不規(guī)則動詞的過去式形式。寫作時要注意按照事情發(fā)展的先后順序，這樣可以使文章條理清楚。還需注意的是英語表達和漢語的習慣不同，不能逐詞去翻譯，應從句子整體考慮，使用簡單句的基本句型，如主謂賓結構或主系表結構。在文章中點綴幾個并列句、復合句或復雜句式，調整文章節(jié)奏，提升文章檔次。語句之間注意使用恰當的連接成分，使文意連貫。點睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。首先短文內容完整，符合圖片所傳達的信息，表述準確。作者在短文中敘述了林濤和梅梅兩人在公園里給小樹澆水、并掛牌子告訴人們注意保護樹木。整篇文章按照事情發(fā)生的先后順序敘述，條理清晰。文章最后的兩句話也點明了文章的主題。其次短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，文章以一般過去時態(tài)為主，謂語動詞用了過去式，尤其是注意了不規(guī)則動詞過去式的形式，如found, kept, got, were, spoke等。語法規(guī)范、準確。短文中還使用了較豐富的句型和短語，如They found that a young tree needed watering and it was going to ；再如So they decided to do something for the young tree這句話中使用了句型decided to do ；After that, they quickly got water and watered it carefully. Both of them were working hard. Their teacher, Miss Li, spoke highly of that, speak highly of等等。6．隨著網絡的發(fā)展、人們消費觀念的轉變， 購物方式也在悄然的發(fā)生變化?！熬W購”已成為一種時尚，越來越多的學生也加入到網購群體中。請你根據以下表格的提示，寫一篇網上購物的文章。優(yōu)點（advantage）；節(jié)約時間；避免擁擠、勞累，品種多缺點（disadvantage）， 看不到商品本身， 造成浪費你的觀點……提示詞匯：網購shopping online。 商品 goods。 導致 cause注意：，可適當發(fā)揮；；：100詞左右，文章開頭已給出，但不計入總數。With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online. 【答案】With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online. It has bee fashionable. Some of us students also join the group. Shopping online has many advantages. Just with the click of a mouse, you can buy what you’re interested in without going outdoors. You can avoid getting tired and being trapped in the crowds and save a lot of time. When shopping online, you can choose from more varieties of goods, whose prices are generally lower. Every coin has two sides. Its disadvantages are obvious, too. On one hand, it’s very easy for you to buy goods that aren’t like the pictures you see on the Internet. On the other hand, shopping online may cause people to buy goods that are not badly needed. That’s a waste of money. All in all, I love shopping online.【解析】本文屬于材料作文，主要講述網購的優(yōu)點和缺點。根據要表達的內容確定并準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當增加內容。【亮點說明】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務，語言表達符合英語習慣，準確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別適用一些亮點詞句，如convenient，disadvantage，in good quality，figure out，have the chance to do，be attacked by，of course，take care of等。增強邏輯關系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準確，句子通順，行文連貫。點睛：寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：認真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達的關鍵。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點，詞數符合要求。構思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據提綱和主題確定相關的寫作材料。通常書面表達給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內容要求學生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當的素材也是使短文中心突出、明確的關鍵。初寫短文。一切都準備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時還要注意使用恰當的連詞，使句子銜接自然。