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ge and horizon。句型:reading is a good way to improve reading and writing skills;reading can broaden our knowledge and horizon, which is important to job hunting in the future。5.中學(xué)生在成長(zhǎng)過程中經(jīng)常會(huì)碰到一些煩惱。假設(shè)你是李華,請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表提示,用英語(yǔ)寫一篇發(fā)言稿,在班會(huì)上談?wù)勀阌龅降臒酪约澳阕约旱淖龇āD愕臒滥愕淖龇▊€(gè)頭不高,相貌平常不必在意,相信自己父母不理解,朋友少學(xué)會(huì)溝通,友善待人學(xué)習(xí)壓力大,課外活動(dòng)少……(自主發(fā)揮,至少兩點(diǎn))要求:1. 詞數(shù)100左右,開頭及結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。2. 所寫內(nèi)容必須包括表格中所有的信息,并作適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮。3. 不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名、地名等相關(guān)信息。Hello everyone,Hello everyone,I am Li Hua. I’d like to talk about my problems and how I deal with them. That’s all. Thank you!【答案】Hello everyone,I am Li Hua. I’d like to talk about my problems and how I deal with them.I am not very tall and very mon. But I don’t care and I believe in myself.My parents don’t understand me and I have very few friends. I encourage myself to be kind to others and learn to municate with others very well.I often feel stressed because of my study and I don’t have many chances to join the afterclass activities. I will plan my time very carefully and improve my study in a very good way. Try to join as many activities as possible and achieve a balance between study and hobbies.That’s all. Thank you!【解析】試題分析:本題是一篇給材料作文,要求用英語(yǔ)寫一篇發(fā)言稿,在班會(huì)上談?wù)勀阌龅降臒酪约澳阕约旱淖龇?。要求從個(gè)人外貌特點(diǎn)、與人溝通及學(xué)習(xí)壓力等方面進(jìn)行寫作。要包含表格中所有的信息,并作適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮。短文用第一人稱形式,一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。寫作亮點(diǎn):短文開頭直奔主題:我想要談?wù)勎业臒兰霸鯓犹幚硭麄?;后面三段分別從外貌上的煩惱、與父母交流上的障礙、學(xué)習(xí)上的壓力幾方面分別談?wù)撟约旱臒兰疤幚淼姆绞?,生?dòng)具體,條理分明。文中的不定式作賓補(bǔ)、作定語(yǔ)、作賓語(yǔ)用得準(zhǔn)確恰當(dāng);and連接的并列句、并列謂語(yǔ)等等都使短文顯得簡(jiǎn)捷生動(dòng)。【考點(diǎn)定位】 考查提綱類作文。6.寫作某英文網(wǎng)站的“ Student Life”欄目正在向中學(xué)生征文,標(biāo)題為“ A time when I made someone happy”,請(qǐng)你寫一篇英文稿件,內(nèi)容需包括以下要點(diǎn):1. Who was the person you made happy?2. When was it?3. What did you say or do?4. Why did it make him/her happy?5. How did you feel at that moment?注意:1.詞數(shù):100左右(題目不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))?!敬鸢浮縇ast summer,though it was hot,I volunteered to teach children English in rural I arrived there,I couldn39。t adjust to the weather and life ,as time went by,I found myself quite happy when I saw the students I was teaching made great order to teach them,I had to keep on learning as a result,my English improved a ,I made friends with some of my are still keeping in touch by letter now.In a word,not only did I help those in need,but also I myself learn a lot that I have another chance to do volunteer work,I am ready to go.【解析】寫作分析:這是一篇給定標(biāo)題的材料作文,需要逐條完成要點(diǎn)問題的回答,描述一次自己讓別人開心快樂的經(jīng)歷,是一篇記敘文,首先要讀懂5個(gè)問題,其次要用恰當(dāng)?shù)恼Z(yǔ)言和銜接手段把這五個(gè)問題的回答聯(lián)系在一起,變成一篇短文,同時(shí)也要注意在描述過去的故事的時(shí)候要正確運(yùn)用過去時(shí)態(tài)。寫作亮點(diǎn):既然這是一篇記敘文,就應(yīng)該完整地呈現(xiàn)故事,需要加上必要的背景,指明時(shí)間(Last summer),地點(diǎn)(in rural area),簡(jiǎn)要概括事件(teach children English),這是文章首句的點(diǎn)睛之筆,信息量豐富。短語(yǔ)和固定搭配的正確使用也為這篇文章增色不少,例如“adjust to…”(調(diào)整以適應(yīng)…),“as time went by”(隨著時(shí)間的流逝),“made great progress”(取得巨大進(jìn)步),“keep on learning”(繼續(xù)學(xué)習(xí)),“In a word”(總而言之)等等短語(yǔ)使用正確。在收尾部分表達(dá)了作者積極的人生態(tài)度,表示如果還有機(jī)會(huì)自己還樂于參與,這樣使得這篇文章結(jié)構(gòu)完整,表意更加清晰。7.同學(xué)們,初中生活即將結(jié)束,本次考試后,盼望已久的假期就要到來!請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示,制定出度假計(jì)劃,可以結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際發(fā)揮。 寫作內(nèi)容:,享受大自然的美景,放松心情。,幫家長(zhǎng)做家務(wù)。 寫作要求: 詞左右,開頭部分已給出,但不計(jì)入規(guī)定字?jǐn)?shù)。;要點(diǎn)齊全;句子及篇章結(jié)構(gòu)正確、連貫;書寫規(guī)范。My junior high school years are ing to an end. The summer holiday is on the way. Here are my plans for the long exciting holidays.