【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 gry to forgive him. In my opinion, it was really his fault. Forgetting the date not only led to Lingling’s anger, but also made her lose trust in him. Keeping promises is always the traditional virtue of the Chinese nation. What Daming should do now is to ask for forgiveness and promise that he will never do that again.Promise is very important. Everyone should keep it. Yours,Tony【解析】【分析】本文為一篇稿件，需要學生通過大明和玲玲之間，大明沒有信守承諾的事情，談自己的看法。信守承諾是中華民族的傳統(tǒng)美德，在寫作過程中，注意文章結(jié)構(gòu)，先寫出大明和玲玲之間的事情，然后再說自己對此的看法?！驹斀狻渴紫龋谝痪湓捴苯狱c明作者的觀點，大明是犯錯了的。然后仔細闡述了事情發(fā)生的經(jīng)過。接下來說出自己對此事件的看法，不信守承諾會導致失去別人的信任，對大明的建議是除了認錯之外，還需要再次保證永不再犯?！军c睛】文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，符合邏輯，先表明自己觀點，然后闡述事情，提出自己的觀點和建議。整篇文章在謀篇布局上，比較嚴密。除此之外，中間也使用了一些連接詞，例如but，so，because of等，使文章更加通順。5．（B）根據(jù)要求完成大作文,詞數(shù):80100 We Get from Sports 的短文,應該包含以下要點:1,學生參加體育運動的興趣不同,理由各異.,通過運動來放松自己.,希望運動能使自己更強壯.，希望運動使自己減肥和保持健康,苗條..:文中不得出現(xiàn)自己的名字和學校的名字,不計入詞數(shù).:keep slim （保持苗條）What We Get from SportsStudents in our school have one thing in mon an interest in 【答案】Students in our school have one thing in mon an interest in sports. But different students have different reasons for taking part in sports.Many students have sports when they feel tired after study. They just want to relax themselves and have fun. Most boys love sports. They take part in all kinds of sports in order to bee stronger. They join in the sports that interest them most, such as soccer, basketball and volleyball. As for girls, they want to lose weight. They want to keep slim, so they also like taking exercise.In my opinion, no matter what reasons we have, we all can get a lot from sports.【解析】【詳解】本篇寫作主要是談論自己對運動的觀點和看法，應該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，寫作要點要包括：。（多數(shù)學生的觀點、男生的觀點、女生的觀點）。亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務，語言表達符合英語習慣，準確運用時態(tài)，主謂一致，在文中使用了時間狀語從句，定語從句，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如have fun，in order to，as for，in my opinion等。增強邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，句子通順，行文連貫。6．Life is just like a mirror, you smile at it, and it smiles at you, too. 請你以“Learn to Smile”為題，根據(jù)下表所列的要點寫一篇100詞左右的文章（文章開頭已給出）。學會對自己微笑面對困難與煩惱學會微笑（考試失利、被別人誤解等）。使你自信，擊敗你的人有時就是你自己。有益于身心健康。學會對他人微笑便于與他人之間的交流。給別人帶來快樂,自己也快樂。微笑是一種語言人人都能懂，傳遞友誼，拉近距離。參考詞匯： 對某人微笑 smile at sb. 誤解 misunderstand短文必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點，不要逐字翻譯，可適當發(fā)揮，使短文連貫通順。 Learn to SmileI remember a song by Westlife, the first sentence of it is “Just a smile and the rain is gone.” Do you like smiling? I think you should learn to smile ._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Learn to SmileI remember a song by Westlife, the first sentence of it is “Just a smile and the rain is gone.”Do you like smiling? I think you should learn to smile .First, learn to smile at yourself when something unpleasant happens in your life. If you fail an exam or you are misunderstood by your friends, don’t be sad. Just smile at yourself . Smiling at yourself brings back your confidence . Sometimes the one who beats you is not others, but yourself. And smile can also keep you healthy. Second, learn to smile at others. It will make you municate better with people. Smiling at others makes yourself happy as well. In a word, smile is a ki