【文章內容簡介】 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours,Li Ming【答案】Dear Jack,I’m glad to receive your letter, and thank you for your caring for the weather and my health. Now I’d like to tell you something about the haze.The hazy weather has occurred a lot of times in my hometown since last year. It was bad for our daily life. More and more people have to go to see the doctor due to the serious diseases caused by the haze. A great number of people have to stay at home .People all over the country are taking measures to reduce the hazy weather now. The government suggests that people go to work or school by public transport, such as the bus and the subway.As for me, I will go to school by bike or on foot. In addition, I will tell the people I meet to protect the environment. Would you like to tell me some good ideas? I’m looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Ming【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以李明的身份給自己的英國筆友寫信，告訴他關于家鄉(xiāng)霧霾的情況。題目中列出了三個要點，我們應根據這些要點提示，來組織語言，充實內容。首先介紹去年家鄉(xiāng)的霧霾情況嚴重；然后介紹為減少霧霾人們采取了一些措施；最后介紹一下你自己在日常生活中應該怎么做。因此文章應主要分成三段，一個內容一段。文章內容中敘述的情況不一，時態(tài)不能統(tǒng)一，根據表達的需要使用正確的時態(tài)，注意謂語動詞的正確形式。寫作時，應注意英語句式表達習慣和漢語是不同的，不能逐詞翻譯，應從句子的整體考慮，寫完整的句子，利用簡單句的基本句型，使用恰當的詞匯和短語。為提升文章檔次，可以穿插使用并列句和復合句；語句之間使用恰當的連接成分，使文意連貫，表達流暢。【點睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文中作者根據題目要求介紹了自己家鄉(xiāng)治理霧霾的情況，并結合自身的實際情況，講述了自己日常生活中是如何做的。首先短文內容完整，包含了題目中要求的所有信息，沒有遺漏要點；且文章結構清晰，分成了三段，每一段的中心明確，意思表達清楚、明了。其次短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，作者根據表達需要使用了一般過去時、一般將來時態(tài)和一般將來時態(tài)，動詞形式變化準確，語法規(guī)范。短文中語言得體，句式表達符合英語的習慣。句子結構以簡單句為主，也使用了一些并列句和復合句，長短句結合，使文章富有節(jié)奏。短文中較好的句式有More and more people have to go to see the doctor due to the serious diseases caused by the haze、People all over the country are taking measures to reduce the hazy weather now. 、The government suggests that people go to work or school by public transport, such as the bus and the subway、In addition, I will tell the people I meet to protect the 。6． 書面表達共享單車（shared bikes）在蘇州投入使用以來，給人們帶來了諸多便利，受到人們的追捧，改變了人們的出行方式，但同時也遇到了一些挑戰(zhàn)，是國民素質的‘“照妖鏡”，請你根據表格中信息的提示，給《21世紀英文報》寫一篇關于共享單車看法的稿件。社會現狀自從出現，飽受贊譽。諸多優(yōu)勢，出行方便，減少污染 ，負擔得起存在問題 你的觀點我認為……（考生自擬，至少2點）注意事項：，要求語句通順，意思連貫。“你的觀點”一欄用2―3句話展開合理想象。作適當發(fā)揮。，文章的開頭部分已給出，不計入總詞數。Shared bikes are being more and more popular in our daily life. 【答案】Shared bikes are being more and more popular in our daily life. They have won high praise since they appeared.Shared bikes have brought us many advantages. They can be seen everywhere so that it39。s easy for us to get around on shared bikes. Also, riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. What39。s more, using shared bikes costs so little that we can afford it.But there are some problems too. Some people can39。t return shared bikes in time. Sometimes shared bikes take up too much of the road, so they are in our way.I think we should encourage more people to use shared bikes properly. After all, it39。s a way of living a green life.【解析】這篇作文要求我們給《21世紀英文報》投稿，談一談自己對共享單車的看法。題目中利用表格的形式給我們列舉了短文的主要內容，包括：共享單車的優(yōu)勢；存在的問題以及你自己對這件事情的看法。前兩個內容我們需要根據表格的提示用正確的英語表達，而自己的觀點則需要學生們自己發(fā)揮想象力，組織語言，并表達出來，要求至少兩點。通過審題可知，這篇短文應主要使用一般現在時態(tài)，第三人稱來敘述，短文可以分成兩段或者三段，一個內容一段或前兩個內容合到一段。寫作時，應注意英語表達習慣和漢語的不同，不能逐詞翻譯，而應從句子的整體考慮，簡單句、并列句和復合句交叉使用，改變文章句式節(jié)奏，使用不同的句式，避免單調。語句之間注意使用恰當的連接成分，使整篇文章意思連