【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 所表達(dá)的要點(diǎn)，這樣，既可以提醒自己不要漏寫了要點(diǎn)，又能防止過分發(fā)揮。接著就可以將內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)譯成英文詞語或句子，以便下一步組織語言，形成短文。要注意使用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞或過渡性語句，以使上下文更為連貫，過渡自然。5. 詳細(xì)得當(dāng)對一些細(xì)節(jié)方面的內(nèi)容，如果是文章必不可少的細(xì)節(jié)，在寫作時不可將這些細(xì)節(jié)忽略。如果是可有可無的細(xì)節(jié)，則可視具體情況進(jìn)行增刪。因此，我們在審圖時，一定要注意各圖中的一些細(xì)節(jié)內(nèi)容，看其是否影響文章的內(nèi)容。6. 仔細(xì)檢查、修改文章寫完后，應(yīng)進(jìn)行必要的檢查、修改，力求全文內(nèi)容表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確、完整，并最大限度減少錯誤。6．（浙江中考模擬）書面表達(dá)，英語俱樂部就“是否愿意為別人投票選舉”這一話題展開來討論。請你根據(jù)提示，以“ I ____ （am/am not） willing to vote for others” 為題寫一篇短文，向?？陡?，選擇你認(rèn)同的一種觀點(diǎn)，并闡述自己的理由。Be willing to vote for othersBe not willing to vote for others投票方式有趣，方便，免費(fèi)可以用朋友圈（circle of friends）支持自己喜歡的人……投票方式不公平浪費(fèi)時間，無聊……注意：1. 根據(jù)你認(rèn)同的方式，將標(biāo)題補(bǔ)充完整，短文包括表格中所提供的相應(yīng)內(nèi)容，省略號內(nèi)容必須補(bǔ)充完整2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)人名和校名，詞數(shù)：801003. 短文首句僅供參考，不計入總詞數(shù)。I _____ willing to vote for othersWould you like to vote for the ones you like on WeChat? Different people havedifferent ideas. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】I am willing to vote for othersWould you like to vote for the ones you like on We chat? Different people have different ideas. As for me, I am willing to vote for others on we chat.Voting for others on We chat is not only interesting but also free. It is convenient to do that as long as we have a mobile phone. Besides, if we use We chat, we can use the circle of friends to support people we love. What’s more, it’s a good way to let more people to get to know the people we love.In a word, I think it’s a good idea to vote for others on We chat and I would like to do that.【解析】【詳解】本篇是一篇議論文，首先要要題目補(bǔ)充完整，說明自己的觀點(diǎn)是贊成還是反對。文章分為三步走：第一段擺出自己的觀點(diǎn)；接下來第二段陳述自己的觀點(diǎn)，即說明自己的理由；最后一段對自己的觀點(diǎn)進(jìn)行總結(jié)。本篇文章觀點(diǎn)明確，在陳述自己觀點(diǎn)時，用到Besides…What’s more….等使文章很條理性和連貫性。最后In a word, I think….對自己觀點(diǎn)進(jìn)行最后總結(jié)。非常好的一篇文章。7．（廣東中考模擬）書面表達(dá)假如你是李明，你的英國筆友Jack來信詢問你的家鄉(xiāng)是否有霧霾天氣，情況如何。請你按照以下提示給他回一封。內(nèi)容如下：1. 由于大氣污染程度十分嚴(yán)重，去年已發(fā)生數(shù)次霧霾天氣；2. 人們已經(jīng)意識到霧霾天氣的危害，正在采取各種措施減少其發(fā)生；3. 你在日常生活中打算為此做些什么。參考詞匯：霧霾haze注意：1. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；2. 語言通順，句子連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范；3. 詞數(shù)80左右，信件的開頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。Dear Jack,I’m glad to receive your letter, and thank you for your caring for the weather and my health. Now I’d like to tell you something about the haze. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours,Li Ming【答案】Dear Jack,I’m glad to receive your letter, and thank you for your caring for the weather and my health. Now I’d like to tell you something about the haze.The hazy weather has occurred a lot of times in my hometown since last year. It was bad for our daily life. More and more people have to go to see the doctor due to the serious diseases caused by the haze. A great number of people have to stay at home .People all over the country are taking measures to reduce the hazy weather now. The government suggests that people go to work or school by public transport, such as the bus and the subway.As for me, I will go to school by bike or on foot. In addition, I will tell the people I meet to protect the environment. Would you like to tell me some good ideas? I’m looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Ming【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以李明的身份給自己的英國筆友寫信，告訴他關(guān)于家鄉(xiāng)霧霾的情況。題目中列出了三個要點(diǎn)，我們應(yīng)根據(jù)這些要點(diǎn)提示，來組織語言，充實(shí)內(nèi)容。首先介紹去年家鄉(xiāng)的霧霾情況嚴(yán)重；然后介紹為減少霧霾人們采取了一些措施；最后介紹一下你自己在日常生活中應(yīng)該怎么做。因此文章應(yīng)主要分成三段，一個內(nèi)容一段。文章內(nèi)容中敘述的情況不一，時態(tài)不能統(tǒng)一，根據(jù)表達(dá)的需要使用正確的時態(tài)，注意謂語動詞的正確形式。寫作時，應(yīng)注意英語句式表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語是不同的，不能逐詞翻譯，應(yīng)從句子的整體考慮，寫完整的句子，利用簡單句的基本句型，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯和短語。為提升文章檔次，可以穿插使用并列句和復(fù)合句；語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫，表達(dá)流暢?！军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文中作者根據(jù)題目要求介紹了自己家鄉(xiāng)治理霧霾的情況，并結(jié)合自身的實(shí)際情況，講述了自己日常生活中是如何做的。首先短文內(nèi)容完整，包含了題目中要求的所有信息，沒有遺漏要點(diǎn)；且文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，分成了三段，每一段的中心明確，意思表達(dá)清楚、明了。其次短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，作者根據(jù)表達(dá)需要使用了一般過去時、一般將來時態(tài)和一般將來時態(tài)，動詞形式變化準(zhǔn)確，語法規(guī)范。短文中語言得體，句式表達(dá)符合英語的習(xí)慣。句子結(jié)構(gòu)以簡單句為主，也使用了一些并列句和復(fù)合句，長短句結(jié)合，使文章富有節(jié)奏。短文中較好的句式有More and more people have to go to see the doctor due to the serious diseases caused by the haze、People all over the country are taking measures to reduce the hazy weather now. 、The government suggests that people go to work or school by public transport, such as the bus and the subway、In addition, I will tell the people I meet to protect the 。8．（山東中考模擬）每一次變化都伴隨著我們的成長，作為初中生的你，你感覺自已比起小時候有了哪些變化?請寫一篇文章描述一下你認(rèn)為最明顯的變化。要點(diǎn)包括: 1. 變化是什么?2. 變化是如何發(fā)生的?3. 變化后有什么感受?___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】The biggest personal change I’ve ever made is falling in love with rending.When I was a child, I didn’t enjoy reading books at all. Later, my mother always read stories for me and bought me a lot of books. Gradually I began to love reading. While reading, I feel like I am talking with a wise man. Reading is also a fantastic way to pass my free time.Books are my friends. They will continue to benefit me even more.【解析】【分析】這是一篇給材料作文，介紹我比起小時候有了哪些變化。【詳解】結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：When I was……，my mother always read……，Gradually I began to……，Books are……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系?！军c(diǎn)睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了我最大的個人變化是喜歡上讀書，接下來介紹我小時候不喜歡讀書，最后指出現(xiàn)在書籍是我的朋友。此處fall in love in, at all, buy sb sth, begin to do sth, love doing sth, feel like, talk with, continue to do sth等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。9．（江蘇中考模擬）書面表達(dá)我的英語學(xué)習(xí)初中即將畢業(yè)，你在英語學(xué)習(xí)方面積累了較多的經(jīng)驗(yàn)與方法，請你向你的表弟介紹你的做法，根據(jù)下面表格中的內(nèi)容，按要求用英語寫一篇短文，多聽聽收音機(jī)，聽音樂等，可以放松......多說運(yùn)用英語，增強(qiáng)能力與信心......多讀書開闊視野，了解英語文化......語法規(guī)則更好地理解與運(yùn)用......寫作寫寫日常生活......其他......要求：1．語句通順，意思連貫，語法正確，書寫規(guī)范；2．必須