【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 ily had to move to another city because of my father’s work. I was sent to a new and strange school. I was not an outgoing girl, so it was not easy for me to make new friends. When I felt lonely and sad, a little girl in a red dress came to me. She asked me if I needed any help in a soft and beautiful voice. I was surprised but happy. We became good friends and our friendship has lasted till now. The time I spent with her was the best hours in my life. I believe she will be my friend throughout my life.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，描述一位給你留下深刻印象的人物。根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定并準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當增加內(nèi)容。亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達符合英語習慣，準確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別適用一些亮點詞句，如because of，be sent to, it is adj for sb to do sth, make friends, in a red dress, last, till now以及spend with等。增強邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準確，句子通順，行文連貫?！军c睛】寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：認真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達的關(guān)鍵。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。通常書面表達給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫短文。一切都準備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時還要注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤色。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。9．（廣州市天河中學中考模擬）書面表達請根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，以My lowcarbon life為題寫一篇英語短文，談?wù)勀愕摹暗吞忌睢?，以及你對“低碳生活”的認識。提示：1. 出行方式2. 不浪費紙、水、電等3. 其他低碳生活的方式（補充一點）4. 低碳生活的作用注意：1．詞數(shù)80左右，開頭已經(jīng)寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)；2．回復(fù)須包括所有要點，可適當發(fā)揮，使全文連貫、通順；3．文中不得提及真實的人名等相關(guān)信息。My lowcarbon lifeLowcarbon life is a kind of lifestyle. It’s a habit to save all the sources of energy around us. It’s important to protect our environment. ________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】My lowcarbon lifeLowcarbon life is a kind of lifestyle. It’s a habit to save all the sources of energy around us. It’s important to protect our environment. First, I always go to school on foot and tell my parents to walk to work instead of driving the car. Second, I save water and electricity by turning off the taps , fans。 TV sets and lights in time when I don39。t need them. What39。s more, water is reused by us in my family all the time. Third, I use the both sides of the paper. I think it is good to make full use of paper. By doing this, we can save many trees. At last, I would go shopping with basket rather than plastic bags. I believe our life will bee better and better if we can do these things. Lower carbon, happier life. Let39。s take actions.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇話題作文。請根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，以My lowcarbon life為題寫一篇英語短文，談?wù)勀愕摹暗吞忌睢保约澳銓Α暗吞忌睢钡恼J識。本文時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時。人稱主要為第一人稱。認真閱讀所給提示要點，確定主題，根據(jù)要點列出提綱，所寫內(nèi)容必須包括所有要點，可適當發(fā)揮，語句通順，意思連貫，書寫規(guī)范。寫完以后，注意再讀一遍，看看有無單詞拼寫、標點、語法錯誤（時態(tài)、主謂一致等）。本文提綱：我的低碳生活低碳生活是一種生活方式。節(jié)約我們周圍所有的能源是一種習慣。保護我們的環(huán)境很重要。首先，我總是步行去上學，告訴父母步行去上班，而不要開車。其次，當我不需要的時候，我會及時關(guān)掉水龍頭、風扇、電視機和電燈，以節(jié)約用水和用電。更重要的是，我們家里的水一直都在重復(fù)利用。第三，我使用紙張的兩面。我認為充分利用紙張是件好事。通過這樣做，我們可以拯救許多樹木。最后，我會帶著籃子購物而不使用塑料袋。我相信如果我們能做這些事情，我們的生活會越來越好。低碳，快樂生活。我們采取行動吧?！军c睛】書面表達要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學英語知識準確表達意思的能力。語言要規(guī)范，時態(tài)運用要正確，敘述清楚條里，學習中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當引用。注意書寫的規(guī)范：大小寫、標點符號等的正確運用。注意檢查：單詞拼寫、語法、動詞時態(tài)、語序、主謂一致等。寫作六步法：：文體，時態(tài)，人稱。：要點是否齊全，適當補充。：通過增加狀語，定語，連詞，使句子意思飽滿充實。，合理使用連詞。：拼寫是否錯誤，語法時態(tài)是否正確，連詞是否恰當?shù)取＃鹤⒁鈺鴮懝ふ烙^整潔。10．（海南中考模擬）假如你是Tom, 你的父親工作很忙，經(jīng)常熬夜，吸煙，很少吃早餐，也沒有時間鍛煉，所以身體不太好。6月17日是父親節(jié)，請你根據(jù)你父親的情況，給他寫一封信，談?wù)勀愕目捶ú⒔o他提一些具體的建議。要求:1. 意思連貫，語言流暢，語法正確，書寫規(guī)范。2. 文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學校名稱等信息。3. 詞數(shù):80詞左右，開頭和結(jié)尾部分已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。Dear Dad,This letter is a gift for the Father’s Day.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Happy Father’s Day, Dad!Yours,Tom【答案】Dear Dad,This letter is a gift for the Father’s Day. June 17 is Father39。s Day, and I sincerely wish you good health. I know that you are busy working all day and often stay up late to work. The next day you often go to work without having breakfast. You smoke a lot to relieve the pressure of work, but it’s really bad for your health. Long hours of work and little exercise make you unhealthy, I am worried about your body.Health is more important to you. I hope you can take care of your body and don’t stay up late at night. Smoking is harmful to health, so give up smoking as soon as possible. I hope you can exercise in your spare time. I wish you have a strong and healthy body. Happy Father’s Day, Dad!Yours,Tom【解析】【詳解】考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)。通讀材料可知，這是一篇向父親表達情感的寫作。因為是寫給父親的一封書信，因此人稱為第二人稱。時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。要根據(jù)短文提示，把父親身體不好的原因?qū)懬宄?，并提出中肯的建議，表達出對父親的體貼與關(guān)愛，同時應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。要求語句通順、意思連貫。文章結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊、行文連貫、表達清楚。11．（江蘇中考模擬）書面表達。為了創(chuàng)建文明城市，共建美好泰州，泰州市團委正在開展“學雷鋒、講文明、樹新風”的活動，作為一名中學生，我們平時應(yīng)該從以下幾個方面來規(guī)范自己的言行舉止。請根據(jù)下列提示，寫一篇短文。倡導(dǎo)低碳騎自行車或步行上學，注意節(jié)約……保護環(huán)境愛護花草，不亂扔垃圾…… 禮貌待人常說“謝謝”、“ 對不起”、“ 請”等禮貌語言……幫助他人助人為樂，積極參加志愿者活動……要求： 。，自由發(fā)揮的內(nèi)容必須圍繞主題。、校名、地名等相關(guān)信息。In order to build a civilized city, we students are supposed to behave well in our daily life.First, we should choose to live a lowcarbon life. ______________________________. Second,________________________________________________________________.Third,_________________________________________________________________.Finally,________________________________________________________________.We should try our best to make our city more and more beautiful!【答案】In order to build a civilized city, we students are supposed to behave well in our daily life. should choose to live a lowcarbon life. We’d better go to school by bike or on foot. When we are shopping. we can use baskets or cloth bags instead of plastic bags. We should also pay attention to saving. We must say NO to waste. We shouldn’t buy anything we don’t need.Second，it’s our duty to protect the environment. We mustn’t throw litter or rubbish about and we should take care of trees and flowers.Third，it’s necessary for us to show good manners to others/ be polite t