【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 y illness. Moreover, we should take exercise every day. We can walk to school instead of taking a bus. Doing sports for an hour every day is also a way to keep us strong. Last but not least, we’d better go to bed early and get up early. The body needs enough sleep to work well. Children at our age should have at least eight hours’ sleep every night.As long as we have good healthy habits, it will be easy for us to keep healthy and enjoy the health.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，闡述你認為健康的生活習(xí)慣是什么樣的。根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如as we know, develop healthy habit, keep a balanced diet, instead of, had better do, at least, as long as, it is adj for sb to do, first of all, moreover以及l(fā)ast but not least。增強邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫?！军c睛】寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：認真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達的關(guān)鍵。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。通常書面表達給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀觥⒚鞔_的關(guān)鍵。初寫短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤色。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。8．（海南中考模擬）假如你是Tom, 你的父親工作很忙，經(jīng)常熬夜，吸煙，很少吃早餐，也沒有時間鍛煉，所以身體不太好。6月17日是父親節(jié)，請你根據(jù)你父親的情況，給他寫一封信，談?wù)勀愕目捶ú⒔o他提一些具體的建議。要求:1. 意思連貫，語言流暢，語法正確，書寫規(guī)范。2. 文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱等信息。3. 詞數(shù):80詞左右，開頭和結(jié)尾部分已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。Dear Dad,This letter is a gift for the Father’s Day.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Happy Father’s Day, Dad!Yours,Tom【答案】Dear Dad,This letter is a gift for the Father’s Day. June 17 is Father39。s Day, and I sincerely wish you good health. I know that you are busy working all day and often stay up late to work. The next day you often go to work without having breakfast. You smoke a lot to relieve the pressure of work, but it’s really bad for your health. Long hours of work and little exercise make you unhealthy, I am worried about your body.Health is more important to you. I hope you can take care of your body and don’t stay up late at night. Smoking is harmful to health, so give up smoking as soon as possible. I hope you can exercise in your spare time. I wish you have a strong and healthy body. Happy Father’s Day, Dad!Yours,Tom【解析】【詳解】考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)。通讀材料可知，這是一篇向父親表達情感的寫作。因為是寫給父親的一封書信，因此人稱為第二人稱。時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。要根據(jù)短文提示，把父親身體不好的原因?qū)懬宄?，并提出中肯的建議，表達出對父親的體貼與關(guān)愛，同時應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。要求語句通順、意思連貫。文章結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊、行文連貫、表達清楚。9．（湖南中考模擬）書面表達假如你是李華，馬上將要中學(xué)畢業(yè)，一路上肯定有很多人幫助或者鼓勵過你。某英文雜志社正向九年級畢業(yè)生征文，請用英語寫一篇題為“Thank you, My ________”的短文，將你對你的父母、老師、朋友或同學(xué)的感謝表達出來。要求：（1）將標(biāo)題補充完整，80詞左右；（2） 可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；（3） 文章中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實姓名、學(xué)校名和地名。Thank you, My_______________【答案】Thank you, my teacher! I39。d like to say thanks to my English teacher, Miss Wang, because she39。s helped me a lot. Once, I failed my English exam. When she found I was very worried, she encouraged me to study harder and promised to help me. After that, I turned to her for help every time I had questions. She was always patient to make me understand every single question. With her help, I39。ve had enough courage to face difficulties and made much progress in English.Thank you, my dear teacher! The love and support from you will be with me forever.【解析】【分析】這是一篇話題作文，以“Thank you, My teacher ”為題，寫一篇短文，感謝我的老師?！驹斀狻拷Y(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：I39。d like to……，When she found……，She was always patient to……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系?！军c睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了我要感謝我的老師王小姐，接下來介紹她對我的幫助，最后表示從老師那里得到的愛和支持將永遠和我在一起。此處would like to, encourage sb to do sth, promise to do sth, turn to sb for help, make progress等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。10．（江蘇中考模擬）書面表達假設(shè)你是某英文報紙“Teenagers”欄目的編輯Betty，日前收到了Lucy的來信。她在信中訴說了她的煩惱，請你根據(jù)Lucy的來信，用英語寫一封90詞左右的回信。要求內(nèi)容合理,信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。Dear Lucy,I’m sorry to know that you aren’t allowed to read eBooks._______________________________________All the best!Betty【答案】Dear Lucy,I’m sorry to know that you aren’t allowed to read eBooks.In recent years, electronic books, as a product of information technology, have gained more and more popularity. It is no doubt electronic books bring many benefits. For one thing, they are so convenient that we can read them anywhere and anytime. For another, their appearance will make paperwaste less.However, as every coin has two sides, electronic books also have some disadvantages. For example, long time of reading ebooks does harm to our eyes. And there are more radiation which is harmful to people39。s body.In my opinion, Ebook cannot take the place of traditional book, but it39。s an useful product. I think that ebooks are beneficial if we read correctly and properly instead of reading over.All the best!Betty【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如in recent years，as a product of，live in，more and more，so…that，for example，do harm to，be harmful to，in my opinion，take the place of，instead of等。同時For one thing, / For another,/ However,等使短文的敘述很有條理，而It is no doubt electronic books bring many benefits./ they are so convenient that we can read them anywhere and anytime. / And there are more radiation which is harmful to people39。s body./ I think that ebooks are beneficial if we read correctly and properly instead of reading ，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達多樣化，是本文的最大亮點。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達更有邏輯性，也更富有條理?！军c睛】書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學(xué)英語知識準(zhǔn)確表達意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分數(shù)。11．（山東中考模擬） 書面表達 你的的筆友Tom居住在北京，請根據(jù)表格中提供的信息，介紹一下他的情況。（80詞左右）時間來到中國已經(jīng)兩年了，在北京工作。旅游曾經(jīng)去過長城，故宮等名勝。喜好過去喜歡看科幻小說，現(xiàn)在對中國古典書籍很感興趣，已經(jīng)讀完了2本名著。工作情況早晨8點起床，乘坐地鐵去上班，空余時間練習(xí)漢語。夢想去很多不同的地方，了解中國文化，品嘗中國美食。I hav