【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Father’s Day is ing and you must be thinking of giving a present to your father. Different people like different kinds of gifts.If you have enough pocket money, you can buy a useful but not expensive thing, like a tie. I think your father will like it. But if you don’t have enough pocket money, you can do something that you can do, for example, you can prepare a cup of tea. When your father es back from work, he can drink it.No matter what you do, the most important thing is to make your father happy on Father’s Day. Don’t you think so?【解析】【詳解】這是一篇命題作文。要求以“Warm Father39。s Day”為題，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文，談?wù)勀銓⑷绾闻c父親一起度過(guò)“父親節(jié)”這個(gè)特別的日子。首先我們要認(rèn)真審題，看清題意，確定文章的中心思想、主題。在寫(xiě)作時(shí)，注意緊扣主題，連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性。同時(shí)要注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)和人稱(chēng)，語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫(xiě)太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句；另外，可以用上一些句型、短語(yǔ)，較高級(jí)的語(yǔ)言，這樣會(huì)使文章更出色。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無(wú)誤。要求：；；9．（安徽中考模擬）假如你是李華，你的美國(guó)朋友Jack熱愛(ài)中國(guó)的唐詩(shī)宋詞。最近他對(duì)母親節(jié)你在博客里發(fā)的《游子吟》（Song of the parting son）很感興趣，給你寫(xiě)信想了解該詩(shī)，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示給他回信：：孟郊：唐朝：母親為兒子做衣服：母愛(ài)的偉大注意：；，意思連貫，條理清楚，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范；: 80100詞左右，信件的開(kāi)頭與結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dear Jack,I’m glad to hear from you. I know you are interested in this poem Song of the parting son.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,【答案】Dear Jack,I’m glad to hear from you. I know you are interested in this poem Song of the parting son. Now I’m writing to tell you something about it.Song of the parting son is one of the most popular Chinese poems. It was written by Meng Jiao, a famous poet in Tang Dynasty. It describes a mon matter in daily life—a mother making clothes for her son, which is familiar to most of us. It mainly shows how great a mother’s love can be. In a word, this short poem has touched many people’s hearts. If you have any other questions about this poem, please tell me.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】這是一篇材料作文?！驹斀狻扛鶕?jù)內(nèi)容可知，這是一篇書(shū)信類(lèi)文章。時(shí)態(tài)是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。人稱(chēng)是第一人稱(chēng)和第三人稱(chēng)。英語(yǔ)作文一般分為三個(gè)部分：第一部分：交代寫(xiě)信目的——朋友Jack熱愛(ài)中國(guó)的唐詩(shī)宋詞。我將給你介紹《游子吟》（Song of the parting son）這首詩(shī)。第二部分：文章主體部分——具體介紹《游子吟》（Song of the parting son）這首詩(shī)。：孟郊：唐朝：母親為兒子做衣服：母愛(ài)的偉大第三部分：信的結(jié)語(yǔ)——如果對(duì)方有任何問(wèn)題，可以繼續(xù)問(wèn)自己，并期待收到對(duì)方的來(lái)信。10．（廣東中考模擬）近年來(lái)，我國(guó)校園欺凌事件屢有發(fā)生，而遭受校園欺凌的學(xué)生容易情緒抑郁、焦慮，不 敢去學(xué)校，甚至?xí)霈F(xiàn)心理問(wèn)題等嚴(yán)重后果。 請(qǐng)以 “My opinions about school bullying” 為題， 寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文，談?wù)勀愕目捶?。提示?. What do you think of school bullying?2. What will you do if you are bullied or you see somebody else being bullied?要求：1. 所給提示信息應(yīng)全部包括，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以 使行文連貫；2. 80詞以上。參考詞匯：心理問(wèn)題mental health problems . My opinions about school bullying________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】My opinions about school bullyingSchool bullying is a big problem that has got more and more attention in society. Being bullied can make students feel scared or upset. Some students are afraid of going to school. School bullying can even lead to more serious mental health problems. So how should we stop school bullying?If I see somebody being bullied or I am bullied, I will tell the teachers or my parents at once. It is not a good idea to do any bad things to the bullies on my own.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，談?wù)勀銓?duì)校園欺凌的看法。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如make sb do, be afraid of, lead to, mental health problem, at once, on one’s own, it is not a good idea to do any bad things to the bullies on my own中it作形式主語(yǔ)以及“比較級(jí)and比較級(jí)”。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫?！军c(diǎn)睛】寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫(xiě)好書(shū)面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫(xiě)作材料。通常書(shū)面表達(dá)給出的話題是開(kāi)放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫(xiě)短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作了，在寫(xiě)作的過(guò)程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡(jiǎn)潔性。使用的詞語(yǔ)、短語(yǔ)及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤(rùn)色。修改潤(rùn)色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫(xiě)是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。11．（陜西師大附中中考模擬）隨著中考的臨近，初三同學(xué)感到壓力很大， 有些人由于學(xué)習(xí)方法不當(dāng)，盲目刷題或連 續(xù)熬夜，導(dǎo)致上課時(shí)精力不足，考試成績(jī)?cè)桨l(fā)不理想。結(jié)合上述情況，請(qǐng)以 How to improve our study 為題寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)演講稿，向同學(xué)們提出建議。寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：，課堂認(rèn)真聽(tīng)講，做好筆記，課后按時(shí)完成作業(yè)。，合理安排時(shí)間。3. …… 寫(xiě)作要求：，意思連貫，語(yǔ)法正確，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范；，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。，校名等； 70 詞，開(kāi)頭給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。