【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 稱，還會用到被動語態(tài)的句子。寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文，其次考生可根據(jù)表格中的要點提示去寫作。文章必須包括要點中所給的信息，但不要逐句翻譯，并補充兩條個人的觀點。在寫作過程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡，必要時可適當(dāng)運用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后，要仔細(xì)檢查有無單詞拼寫錯誤、標(biāo)點符號誤用等，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。8．（天津中考模擬）請你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示,為學(xué)校廣播站英語專欄寫一篇短文,介紹發(fā)生在你好朋友王強Wang Qiang身上的一件事。 Qiang騎車回家,在十字路口,看到一位老太太正要過馬路。,所有車輛都一個接一個通過十字路口。,不敢獨自穿過十字路口。,主動上前攔住了車輛領(lǐng)著老人安全過了路口。......要求: 。,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。:80100。開頭部分已給出,不計入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯:十字路口 crossroads 在……猶豫不決 hesitate inLast Monday Wang Qiang rode his bike back 【答案】Last Monday Wang Qiang rode his bike back home. On his way home, at a crossroads he saw an old lady going across the road. Because the traffic lights didn’t work at that time, all the traffic crossed the road without stopping one by one. The lady hesitated in whether she should cross it, but she was afraid to do that When Wang Qiang saw that, he offered to stop the traffic with his bike in order to lead her to cross the road safely.In my opinion, Wang Qiang is such a good example that we should learn from him. At the same time we also suggest that all the drivers should let people cross first and then traffic when this situation happens.【解析】【分析】這是一篇給材料作文，介紹發(fā)生在我的好朋友王強身上的一件事?！驹斀狻拷Y(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時，人稱為第三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：The lady hesitated……，but she was afraid……，he offered to……，Wang Qiang is…..等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。【點睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了王強騎車回家的路上看見一位老太太不敢過馬路，接下來介紹他主動上前攔住了車輛領(lǐng)著老人安全過了路口，最后我就這件事談?wù)勎业南敕?。此處on one’s way, see sb doing sth, at that time, without doing sth, offer to do sth, learn from等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。9．（北京中考模擬）“書山有路勤為徑, 學(xué)海無涯苦作舟”, 成功不會從天而降, 美好的未來需要靠不斷努力來創(chuàng)造?某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“天道酬勤” 為主題的征文活動?假如你是李華, 請用英文寫一篇短文投稿, 講述你通過勤奮, 取得進(jìn)步甚至成功的經(jīng)歷, 并談?wù)勀愕母惺?提示詞語: diligence （勤奮）, make progress, effort, proud提示問題: ? What did you achieve by working hard?? What did you do to make it?? How did you feel about it?【答案】Diligence is a must for us to reach our goals. I never realized it until I tried every effort to win the English speech petition last year. It was quite a big challenge for me because I was not that confident about my oral English and I was shy to speak in public. To give a better performance, I made full use of my spare time to prepare for it. I recorded my lines and asked my foreign teacher to correct my pronunciation. Then I kept practising day and night. Besides, I seized every chance to speak in front of my family or friends. The more I practised, the more confident I became. In the end, I won the petition and got a prize. It was so great that all my efforts paid off. I felt so proud of myself.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇話題作文，根據(jù)材料中的相關(guān)信息介紹一下你通過勤奮, 取得進(jìn)步甚至成功的經(jīng)歷。所提供的材料中列舉了“書山有路勤為徑, 學(xué)海無涯苦作舟”, 成功不會從天而降, 美好的未來需要靠不斷努力來創(chuàng)造。主要從：你努力工作取得了什么成績？?你是怎么做到的？?你覺得怎么樣？這幾個方面去介紹。時態(tài)為一般過去時，人稱為第一人稱。注意作文中必須包含材料和提示詞的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作時，避免使用漢語式的英語，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語。語法要正確，表達(dá)要符合英語習(xí)慣，注意時態(tài)、時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達(dá)具有條理性?！靖叻志湫鸵弧縄t was quite a big challenge for me because I was not that confident about my oral English and I was shy to speak in public. 這對我來說是一個很大的挑戰(zhàn)，因為我對自己的英語口語沒有那么自信，在公共場合說話也很害羞。句子because I was not that confident about my oral English and I was shy to speak in 。【高分句型二】The more I practised, the more confident I became. 我練習(xí)得越多，就越自信。這句話用到了“the+比較級，the+比較級”結(jié)構(gòu)。表示“越……，就越……”的意思。10．（重慶一中中考模擬）書面表達(dá)?！伴_心的是暑假如期而至；盼望的是我們獨自旅行；煩惱的是父母不予支持。我們，可以獨自出游么？”這是本月我校英語“煩惱墻”上最令人關(guān)注的內(nèi)容，并引發(fā)了大家的熱烈討論。同為青少年的你覺得在沒有父母的陪伴下出游可行嗎？請你按要求寫一篇英語作文。參考要點：1. 解讀“煩惱墻”內(nèi)容； 2. 陳述你的觀點及理由；3. 提出合理的相關(guān)建議。要求：1. 詞數(shù)80120詞，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；2. 文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的真實姓名和所在學(xué)校名稱。Can Teenagers Take a Trip Alone?Nowadays, there is a message on the Trouble Wall attracting most of the students’ attention.______________________________________________________________________________【答案】Can Teenagers Take a Trip Alone?Nowadays, there is a message on the Trouble Wall attracting most of the students’ attention. The summer vacation is ing, and we hope to take a trip alone, but our parents don’t allowed us to do that, what should we do then? I like to travel to different places with my friends, so in my opinion, teenagers should be allowed to travel by ourselves. Here are my reasons.Firstly, we can see the beautiful scenery and get to know the different cultures. Secondly, our parents are too busy, so it’s difficult for them to acpany us all the time, we have to learn to look after ourselves. Traveling is a good way to train our selfcare capacity. But we need to get ready to deal with something unusual that may happen during the trip. But considering the safety, we must make plans in advance. Take notes of some important selfhelp knowledge. All in all, traveling alone is good.【解析】【分析】這是一篇話題議論文?！驹斀狻坑⒄Z作文一般分為三部分：第一部分：闡明論點。解讀“煩惱墻”內(nèi)容并陳述自己的觀點——青少年應(yīng)該被允許獨自旅行。第二部分：主體部分。分條逐一闡明理由并提出合理的相關(guān)建議。第三部分：再次重申論點。11．（陜西師大附中中考模擬）書面表達(dá)假設(shè)不久前你們學(xué)校為貧困地區(qū)的孩子們籌款舉辦了一次慈善行活動。請以“Walk for children in poor areas”為題，為某中學(xué)生英文報寫一篇報道，內(nèi)容要點如下：1. 目的：為貧困地區(qū)的孩子們籌款2. 時間：10月23日，星期六3. 路徑： 學(xué)?！兄行?. 簡況：學(xué)生把自己分成四人一組，出發(fā)前計劃好了一切，步行很艱辛，但活動過程中大家互相幫助，互相支持。最終在許多人的幫助下，籌的善款5萬多元。5. 感受：每個人都很累，但都很高興，因為….注意：1. 報道必須把包括所給內(nèi)容要點，要求語句通順，意思連貫；2. 第5要點的內(nèi)容須用至少2句話展開合理想象，作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3. 詞數(shù)80個左右。（開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）Walk for children in poor areasNot long ago, our school organized a charity walk to raise money for children in poor ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】It was on Saturday, 23rd October. We walked from the school to the centre of the city. Before the walk, we grouped ourselves into a team of four and planned everything well. It was a hard （tough） work. But during the walk, we supported and helped each other. With the help of many people, we raised over （more than） 50,000 yuan in the end. We all felt tired, but we were very happy. Because it was a meaningful exper