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suggestions.First, you should listen to the teacher and take notes carefully in class. Second, it39。s a good idea to talk with your classmates in Chinese. And don39。t be afraid of making mistakes. Third, you39。d better read Chinese magazines or newspapers after class. You can also watch Chinese programmes on the Internet. I think it can help you to improve your pronunciation. Lastly, you can write s to me or other Chinese friends in Chinese.In a word, if you have good ways of learning Chinese, you will learn it well.Yours,Daming【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以大明的身份給Sam寫一封信,告訴他如何學(xué)好漢語,題目中從四個方面提出了建議。通過審題可知,這是要求寫一封建議信,內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括以下幾個方面:首先應(yīng)和Sam先做一個交流,然后引出寫信的目的;接下來給出具體的建議,依據(jù)題目中給出的這四條,用正確的英語表達(dá)出來,還應(yīng)注意補(bǔ)充一些內(nèi)容,使文章更加充實(shí);最后寫一個適當(dāng)?shù)慕Y(jié)尾,如希望建議對你有幫助等。文章應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時,根據(jù)表達(dá)需要使用恰當(dāng)?shù)娜朔Q。寫作時應(yīng)注意英語表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語的不同,不能按照漢語的思維逐詞翻譯,寫漢語式的英語。應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)考慮,寫完整的句子。如可以較常見的主謂賓結(jié)構(gòu)或主系表結(jié)構(gòu)為主,簡單句的句型可以使文章敘述清楚、簡潔。為提升文章檔次,可以穿插使用并列句或復(fù)合句以及其他一些復(fù)雜句式。語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分,使文章意思連貫,表達(dá)流暢?!军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文,短文作者根據(jù)題目要求給Sam寫了一封信,對他的漢語學(xué)習(xí)提出了一些好的建議。首先短文內(nèi)容完整,包括了題目中要求的所有信息。文章主要分成三個部分:第一段是與Sam之間的問候以及引出Sam學(xué)習(xí)漢語這一話題,并介紹寫信的目的;第二段中是提出的具體的建議,這是這篇文章的主體,所在篇幅最大。這一段中使用了First,Second,Third,lastly等詞,敘述條理、有層次;最后一段用一句話對整篇文章做了總結(jié)。其次短文使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱,句式結(jié)構(gòu)符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。語法規(guī)范、準(zhǔn)確,用詞得體。文章中的語句以簡單句結(jié)構(gòu)為主,也使用了并列句和復(fù)合句,調(diào)整了文章的結(jié)構(gòu)。文章中使用了較為豐富的短語和句型,如First, you should listen to the teacher and take notes carefully in class.、Second, it39。s a good idea to talk with your classmates in Chinese、I think it can help you to improve your pronunciation、In a word, if you have good ways of learning Chinese, you will learn it 。5.環(huán)保話題是人們最關(guān)心的話題之一,請以Change for a better China為主題,結(jié)合自己家鄉(xiāng)的變化寫一篇英語短文。注意事項(xiàng):,條理清楚,作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。,詞數(shù)不少于80。 狀況水污染,大氣污染...... 應(yīng)對措施立即阻止此類活動,治理環(huán)境(至少兩條)...... 感想建議環(huán)境能夠變得更好......Change for a better China________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】We all know it is being more and more important to protect our environment well. But some people don’t care about it .They throw litter into the river and even worse factories also put waste into the river, the river is full of rubbish. The air is badly polluted because there are more cars on the road these days. Factories that burn coal also pollute the air with a lot of black smoke. We hardly ever see blue skies anymore.I think everyone in our hometown should play a part in cleaning it up. We should write to the government ,they should close down the factories. Trees are very helpful and important for the environment .We can plant more trees and more trees in order to live better and more healthy .Now, Our hometown has started to face the problem, I believe we can make our country a better place if we keep trying.【解析】【詳解】環(huán)保話題是人們最關(guān)心的話題之一,請以Change for a better China為主題,結(jié)合自己家鄉(xiāng)的變化寫一篇英語短文。要求中已經(jīng)給出了部分提示,動筆先應(yīng)先認(rèn)真閱讀提示,確定寫作內(nèi)容。寫作中注意表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)時的常用句式,注意在表達(dá)不同觀點(diǎn)時,連詞的使用。內(nèi)容上應(yīng)注意描述的全面性;語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu),造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣?!军c(diǎn)睛】本文緊扣要求對家鄉(xiāng)做了簡單介紹,內(nèi)容完整,用了表格中的信息。2.句式豐富。表述靈活。銜接自然,順暢。文中用到了一些好的句型:The air is badly polluted because there are more cars on the road these days.;We can plant more trees and more trees in order to live better and more 。6.4月23日是“世界讀書日”,你校英語俱樂部正在開展主題為“多讀書,讀好書”的活動。假如你是李華,請你寫一封倡議書,向全體同學(xué)發(fā)出號召。內(nèi)容包括:應(yīng)該讀什么樣的書,以及讀書的意義。提示詞語:story, novel, knowledge, improve, important提示問題:● What kind of books should we read? ● Why do we read?Dear students, the World Reading Day is ing.