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uch,be supposed to do;be thankful to,so much,share with,what’s more,say thanks to,in my opinion,be polite to,try our best,in trouble,in the future,and so on 等。而固定句型it’s time for us to learn to express thanks to think it is their parents’ duty to provide a happy life for them,/ It’s our parents who take good care of us and love us very much./ we should try our best to help others when they are in ,豐富了短文內(nèi)容,使表達多樣化,是本文的亮點。在學習中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當引用,使文章表達更有邏輯性,也更富有條理。【點睛】書面表達題既不是漢譯英,也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維,考查運用所學英語知識準確表達意思的能力。所以,考生不能遺漏要點,要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式,盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分數(shù)。8.(山東初三)你知道 年最受歡迎、最新潮的健身方式是什么嗎?“Plogging”,一邊撿垃圾,一邊慢跑, 正逐漸走進我們的生活。拾荒(clean up trash)、慢跑 (jog),不僅促進環(huán)境衛(wèi)生,而且有益身體健康,可謂一舉兩得。請結(jié)合自己的日常生活經(jīng)歷,用英語寫一篇 100 詞左右的短文。內(nèi)容包括:身體力行,保護環(huán)境的事例;堅持鍛煉,增強體質(zhì)的事例。結(jié)合事例,談?wù)勀銓δ壳白瞽h(huán)保的運動方式 (plogging) 的認識,以及怎樣從身邊小事做起,做生態(tài)中國,健康中國的踐行者。注意:可以圍繞主題,根據(jù)要求,進行適當?shù)陌l(fā)揮。短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。 【答案】Everyone has his or her favorite outdoor activities. I enjoy running so much because it makes me keep fit and have an excellent figure. Now, plogging is spreading all over the world. What’s plogging? Put simply, plogging is the act of cleaning up trash while running. Every Sunday I wear plastic gloves and carry a garbage bag when I run along the river. I can easily clean up trash such as plastic bottles, cans and so on . . I feel even better after returning from a run when I can do something that’s good for myself and my munity. Plogging shows how we are making the world a better place with a simple task. Everyone should be an environmental protection guard and take action to keep our home clean . To protect the earth is to protect ourselves.【解析】【分析】本篇是材料作文,要求結(jié)合自己的日常生活經(jīng)歷,談?wù)勀銓δ壳白瞽h(huán)保的運動方式 (plogging) 的認識以及怎樣從身邊小事做起,做生態(tài)中國,健康中國的踐行者?!驹斀狻浚罕酒牧献魑囊笠缘谝蝗朔Q,談?wù)勛约簩δ壳白瞽h(huán)保的運動方式 (plogging) 的認識以及結(jié)合自己的日常生活經(jīng)歷,談?wù)勗鯓訌纳磉呅∈伦銎?,做生態(tài)中國,健康中國的踐行者;陳述現(xiàn)階段的事情用一般現(xiàn)在時。書寫時要注意題干所給的提示材料,成文時要文句通順,內(nèi)容完整。:本例文結(jié)構(gòu)嚴謹,層次分明。開篇緊扣主題,介紹自己最喜歡的運動是跑步;正文部分順理成章的介紹plogging這種運動方式以及自己如何身體力行地做到鍛煉、環(huán)保兩不誤;結(jié)尾以. Everyone should be an environmental protection guard and take action to keep our home clean . To protect the earth is to protect ,總結(jié)全文。文章布局合理,內(nèi)容完整連貫。:高分短語: so much ; all over the world; run along; take action to; keep ……clean .高分句型: enjoy running so much because it makes me keep fit and have an excellent figure. is the act of cleaning up trash while running . Sunday I wear plastic gloves and carry a garbage bag when I run along the river; protect the earth is to protect ourselves.【點睛】本篇材料作文書寫前要認真審題,確定人稱(第一人稱)和時態(tài)(一般現(xiàn)在時);關(guān)注題材的格式(記敘文),注意文章的篇章結(jié)構(gòu);書寫時要緊扣主題,做到中心突出,內(nèi)容完整、連貫;成文后要檢查人稱、時態(tài)是否一致、單詞的拼寫是否正確、短語和句式的使用是否得當。9.(北京中考模擬)“書山有路勤為徑, 學海無涯苦作舟”, 成功不會從天而降, 美好的未來需要靠不斷努力來創(chuàng)造?某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“天道酬勤” 為主題的征文活動?假如你是李華, 請用英文寫一篇短文投稿, 講述你通過勤奮, 取得進步甚至成功的經(jīng)歷, 并談?wù)勀愕母惺?提示詞語: diligence (勤奮), make progress, effort, proud提示問題: ? What did you achieve by working hard?? What did you do to make it?? How did you feel about it?【答案】Diligence is a must for us to reach our goals. I never realized it until I tried every effort to win the English speech petition last year. It was quite a big challenge for me because I was not that confident about my oral English and I was shy to speak in public. To give a better performance, I made full use of my spare time to prepare for it. I recorded my lines and asked my foreign teacher to correct my pronunciation. Then I kept practising day and night. Besides, I seized every chance to speak in front of my family or friends. The more I practised, the more confident I became. In the end, I won the petition and got a prize. It was so great that all my efforts paid off. I felt so proud of myself.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇話題作文,根據(jù)材料中的相關(guān)信息介紹一下你通過勤奮, 取得進步甚至成功的經(jīng)歷。所提供的材料中列舉了“書山有路勤為徑, 學海無涯苦作舟”, 成功不會從天而降, 美好的未來需要靠不斷努力來創(chuàng)造。主要從:你努力工作取得了什么成績??你是怎么做到的??你覺得怎么樣?這幾個方面去介紹。時態(tài)為一般過去時,人稱為第一人稱。注意作文中必須包含材料和提示詞的所有信息,并適當發(fā)揮。寫作時,避免使用漢語式的英語,盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語。語法要正確,表達要符合英語習慣,注意時態(tài)、時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當使用連詞,注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密,符合邏輯關(guān)系,表達具有條理性?!靖叻志湫鸵弧縄t was quite a big challenge for me because I was not that confident about my oral English and I was shy to speak in public. 這對我來說是一個很大的挑戰(zhàn),因為我對自己的英語口語沒有那么自信,在公共場合說話也很害羞。句子because I was not that confident about my oral English and I was shy to speak in ?!靖叻志湫投縏he more I practised, the more confident I became. 我練習得越多,就越自信。這句話用到了“the+比較級,the+比較級”結(jié)構(gòu)。表示“越……,就越……”的意思。10.(江蘇中考模擬)書面表達假設(shè)你是某英文報紙“Teenagers”欄目的編輯Betty,日前收到了Lucy的來信。她在信中訴說了她的煩惱,請你根據(jù)Lucy的來信,用英語寫一封90詞左右的回信。要求內(nèi)容合理,信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計入總詞數(shù)。Dear Lucy,I’m sorry to know that you aren’t allowed to read eBooks._______________________________________All the best!Betty【答案】Dear Lucy,I’m sorry to know that you aren’t allowed to read eBooks.In recent years, electronic books, as a product of information technology, have gained more and more popularity. It is no doubt electronic books bring many benefits. For one thing, they are so convenient that we can read them anywhere and anytime. For another, their appearance will make paperwaste less.However, as every coin has two sides, electronic books also have some disadvantages. For example, long time of reading ebooks does harm to our eyes. And there are more radiation which is harmful to people39。s body.In my opinion, Ebook cannot take the place of traditional book, but it39。s an useful p