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組的運用也讓文章增色不少。8.(江蘇中考模擬)書面表達你即將升入高中,面臨寄宿(a boarding school)和走讀(a day school)兩類學(xué)校的選擇。請你以“A boarding school or a day school”為題。寫一篇短文,內(nèi)容須包括:讀寄宿學(xué)校的利和弊;讀走讀學(xué)校的利和弊;你的選擇和理由(不得與上述兩點內(nèi)容重復(fù))。注意:1. 詞數(shù)。100詞左右(文章開頭結(jié)尾已給出,不計入總詞數(shù));2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名、校名等信息;3. 文章必須包含提示中的所有信息,并按要求適當發(fā)揮。A hoarding school or a day schoolWe are going to graduate from our middle school, __________________________________【答案】We are going to graduate from our middle schools, and we will make a choice to enter a boarding school or a day school. Both kinds of school have their advantages and disadvantages.If we choose a boarding school, we will save time to study. However, we may have less time to stay with our family. If we choose a day school, parents can know more about our studies. At the same time puter games and TV plays may make a bad influence on us. As for me, I prefer a boarding school. We should pay attention to our studies to get good grades in the high school.【解析】【分析】整體分析:這是一篇給材料作文??梢苑秩螌?。第一段要寫總體交代你即將升入高中,面臨寄宿(a boarding school)和走讀(a day school)兩類學(xué)校的選擇。第二段要寫詳細敘述讀寄宿學(xué)校的利弊;讀走讀學(xué)校的利弊。第三段要表述作者自己的選擇和理由。【詳解】,看看有哪些要求?哪些時態(tài)?人稱?,記敘文?說明文?議論文?看圖?還是應(yīng)用文?,單一還是混合。、短語、句型。,并運用適當?shù)木湫秃瓦^渡詞銜接。寫完后反復(fù)閱讀修改推敲潤色,人稱、時態(tài)、單復(fù)數(shù)一致等。運用自然過渡法和自然銜接法來是文章更為地道、通順、純正。用的短語、句型:both kinds of、If we choose a boarding school、At the same time、As for me, I prefer a boarding school、pay attention to、來增加了文章的亮點?!军c睛】這類作文的寫作方法要注意認真審題,注意過渡性語言的使用。做到:要點要全,表達要清晰明確,使用短語,句型要準確,注意避免拼寫和語法錯誤。9.(北京中考模擬)從下面兩個題目中任選一題,根據(jù)中文和英文提示,完成一篇不少于50詞的文段寫作。文中已給出內(nèi)容不計人總詞數(shù)。所給提示詞語僅供選用。請不要寫出你的校名和姓名。題目①假如你是李華,明天下午2:00你要去參加“傳統(tǒng)文化才藝展示”活動,因此不能上英語課。請用英文給你們的外教John寫一張請假條,告訴他你要去干什么,為什么要參加這個活動以及你保證按時完成作業(yè)。提示詞語:traditional talent show, Chinese culture, ask, help提示問題:.What will you do tomorrow afternoon?Why will you take this activity?How will you finish your homework?Dear John, I39。m sorry to ask for absence from your English ______________________________________________________________Your loring student Li lHua題目②一位好老師,勝過萬卷書。在你的初中生活中,一定會有一位老師給你留下了深刻印象。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“Thank you, my teacher”為主題的征文活動。假如你是李華,請用英語寫一篇短文投稿,讓更多的人認識你的老師,同時表達你對他/她的感激之情。主要內(nèi)容包括: 哪位老師給你留下了深刻印象,發(fā)生了什么事使你印象深刻以及你想對他/她說些什么。提示詞語:kind, helpful,talk with,make progress提示問題:Which teacher impressed you most?What happened to make you impressed?What do you want to say to him/her?Thank you,my teacher____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】題目一:Dear John, I39。m sorry to ask for absence fom your English lesson. I39。m going to aend a traditional talent show at 2:00 tomorrow aftermoon.In order to let the foreign students in our school know more about Chinese culture, our school holds this talent show. I will introduce Chinese painting in English.I will ask my classmates to help me with my English. And I promise to finish my homework on time.Your loring student Li Hua題目二:Among all my teachers, my English teacher impressed me most. She is always kind and helpful.last year, I did badly in a big test and I found English too hard. As soon as she found out this, she talked with me and gave me some helpful advice. With her encouragement, I have made great progress.I really want to sayThank you for helping me. I love you! to my English teacher.【解析】【詳解】、題目①本文是一篇應(yīng)用文,作文要求寫一張請假條,因此格式要遵循假條的格式。假條的內(nèi)容——時間和事由均給出,結(jié)合提示問題可知假條主要從三個方面寫,這三個方面需要作者自由發(fā)揮一部分內(nèi)容。本例文是一篇應(yīng)用文,人稱為第一人稱,時態(tài)是以一般將來時為主。例文分成三段,根據(jù)提示問題,每段成一行,這種寫法條理清晰,分段明確。高分亮點:ask for;absence from;一般將來時;in order to;help sb with sth;promise to do;on time。題目②題目二是一篇話題作文,根據(jù)話題可知這是一篇感謝老師的文章。人稱應(yīng)該為第一人稱。注意給出的提示問題,文章要包含這三部分的內(nèi)容。本例文以第一人稱書寫,時態(tài)主要是一般過去時和一般現(xiàn)在時。文章第一段介紹“我”要感謝的老師,第二段用一般過去時介紹為什么“我”要感謝老師,第三段表達 “我”的感謝。分段明確,語句簡潔不啰嗦,時態(tài)運用合理。高分亮點:Among all my teachers;did badly in;As soon as;found out;talked with;現(xiàn)在完成時;want to do sth。10.(山東中考模擬)書面表達下圖描述了李明和家人去年五一假期(May Day Holiday)外出旅游的經(jīng)歷。請根據(jù)圖片提示,用英語寫一篇100詞左右的短文。要求:1. 完整敘述圖片內(nèi)容,可適當發(fā)揮;2. 結(jié)合自己的實際情況陳述個人觀點或給出建議。【答案】Last May Day holiday, Li Ming and his family went to Qingdao seaside. They paid a visit to Qingdao by bus. There are many places of interest in Qingdao. They went to the beach, visited the Museum. But there were many people on the beach. What you see at the seaside is not the scenery, but the numerous shaking heads. At the seaside, people don39。t pay attention to hygiene. There39。s rubbish everywhere. In my opinion, when traveling, people should not only pay attention to safety, but also pay attention to hygiene and not throw rubbish everywhere. We should avoid the rush hour and choose some unknown places.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇看圖作文,根據(jù)圖片的內(nèi)容介紹一下李明和家人去年五一假期(May Day Holiday)外出旅游的經(jīng)歷。主要是要完整敘述圖片內(nèi)容、結(jié)合自己的實際情況陳述個人觀點或給出建議。時態(tài)為一般過去時,人稱為第三人稱。在陳述個人觀點或給出建議時用一般現(xiàn)在時來寫。注意作文中必須包含圖片上的所有信息,并適當發(fā)揮。寫作時,避免使用漢語式的英語,盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語。語法要正確,表達要符合英語習(xí)慣,注意時態(tài)、時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當使用連詞,注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密,符合邏輯關(guān)系,表達具有條理性?!靖叻志湫鸵弧縒hat you see at the seaside is not the scenery, but the numerous shaking heads. 你在海邊看到的不是風(fēng)景,而是無數(shù)晃動的頭。句子What you see at the seaside做主語。【高分句型二】In my opinion, when traveling, people should not only pay attention to safety, but also pay attention to hygiene and not throw rubbish everywhere. 在我看來,旅行時,人們不僅要注意安全,還要注意衛(wèi)生,不要到處亂扔垃圾。該句話運用了not only…but also…。11.(河南中考模擬)書面表達我們的國家日益強大,人民也變得富足因而有實力在國內(nèi)外旅游。但是近來一些中國人在國內(nèi)外的不文明行為屢屢發(fā)生并被曝光。我們的社會在呼喚文明的回歸,但是做到文明必須縣有禮貌。請以It’s Important to Be Polite 為題寫一篇80詞左右的短文,談?wù)勀愕目捶?。要求?.語言表達準確,短文連貫通順;2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱;3.80詞左右。It’s Important to Be Polite