【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 because of the heavy schoolwork, many students are stressed. Moreover, more attention is paid to students’ language ability, so it is difficult for students to get high marks. As a result, some students are likely to lose heart. As to the problems, my classmates offer the following suggestions. First, we should not only work hard but also improve our learning methods. Second, we should plan our time carefully so that we can achieve a balance between schoolwork and hobbies. In my opinion, we should develop a healthy body by eating healthily and exercising more. Furthermore, we’d better share the worries with our teachers and friends.【解析】【分析】這是一篇給材料作文，以“How to Face Senior High School Entrance Examination”為題，用英語(yǔ)簡(jiǎn)要描述如何面對(duì)中考，并適當(dāng)表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)?！驹斀狻拷Y(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱(chēng)為第一，三人稱(chēng)，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，比如：many students are…...，so it is difficult for students to……，we should……，we’d better……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫(xiě)作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系?！军c(diǎn)睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開(kāi)頭介紹了我們面對(duì)中考會(huì)感到擔(dān)心，接下來(lái)介紹學(xué)生的現(xiàn)狀以及同學(xué)們給出的建議，最后表達(dá)我的觀點(diǎn)。此處from time to time, pay attention to, lose heart, so that, in one’s opinion, share..with…等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。9．（揚(yáng)州市翠崗中學(xué)中考模擬）揚(yáng)州市“五個(gè)一百工程” 英語(yǔ)經(jīng)典文學(xué)（English classics）閱讀正在全市各地各校全面而深入地推進(jìn)，這提高了揚(yáng)州學(xué)子的人文科學(xué)素養(yǎng)，并促進(jìn)了他們的終身發(fā)展。某校正在開(kāi)展中學(xué)生是否有必要閱讀英文經(jīng)典文學(xué)的大討論，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下問(wèn)題和要求用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇文章參與討論。1. Do you think reading English classics is necessary? Why? （Give 3 reasons）2. How do you usually take part in the activity of reading English classics? （Give 3 examples, . take part in the Reading Club, take notes while reading…… ）3. What’s your advice for the students who are weak in English? （Give 12 opinions）要求 1）表達(dá)清楚，語(yǔ)法正確，上下文連貫； 2）必須包括問(wèn)題中所有的相關(guān)信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮； 3）詞數(shù)：100詞左右（開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）； 4）不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名等。With the development of the Five Onehundred Project in Yangzhou, our school has had a discussion about whether it is necessary for middle school students to read English classics. 【答案】With the development of the Five Onehundred Project in Yangzhou, our school has had a discussion about whether it is necessary for middle school students to read English classics. I think reading English classics is not only necessary but also important. First, we can learn a lot about Western history and culture by reading. Second, by reading classics we can enlarge our vocabulary and improve our writing. Finally, it can help us with our lifelong learning. So I often spend my free time reading English classics. I am in the Reading Club. And I often take notes while reading. What’s more, I sometimes ask the teacher for help if I have difficulty reading books. If some students are weak in English, they can read the short and easy English stories at the very beginning. Well begun is half done. Next, they should keep reading and never give up. Then their English will be improved little by little.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇要求關(guān)于某校正在開(kāi)展中學(xué)生是否有必要閱讀英文經(jīng)典文學(xué)的大討論，請(qǐng)根據(jù)問(wèn)題和要求用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇文章參與討論。動(dòng)筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料，然后用正確的英語(yǔ)句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用第一人稱(chēng)，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫(xiě)等問(wèn)題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語(yǔ)意連貫。10．（安徽中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)假如你是華,你的英國(guó)筆友對(duì)中國(guó)文化很感興趣,想到中國(guó)旅行感受中國(guó)文化。你想請(qǐng)他來(lái)你的家鄉(xiāng)一安徴一游,請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示用英文給他寫(xiě)一封電子郵件。1位置:中國(guó)東部,安做省南部: :春暖花開(kāi),秋季涼爽:山和古村落: :茶、黃梅戲提示詞:黃梅戲 Huangmei Opera注意:,使行文連貫。,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)Dear DaveI know that you are interested in Chinese culture and Im glad you are planning a trip to China. Why not e to Anhui, my home town, to have fun?【答案】Dear Dave，I know you are interested in Chinese culture and I’m glad you are planning a trip to China. Why not e to Anhui, my hometown, to have some fun.Anhui Province lies in the east of China. The best time to e here is in autumn, because it’s really cool and you can just take some light coats. There are many famous places to see. For example, Mt. Huangshan, where you will see wonderful plants and special rocks. Besides, Anhui is also famous for ancient villages such as Xidi, Hongcun and so on. As a fan of Chinese culture, don’t forget to try green tea in Anhui which smells good and tastes better. What’s more, e and watch Huangmei Opera. It’s easy to understand and won’t let you down!Wele to Anhui! I’m looking forward to seeing you here!Yours, Li Hua【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以李華的身份給自己的筆友Dave寫(xiě)信，邀請(qǐng)他來(lái)你的家鄉(xiāng)—安徽一游，題目中列出了文章的提綱，審題可知，短文應(yīng)從以下幾個(gè)內(nèi)容敘述：首先介紹家鄉(xiāng)的位置；然后介紹來(lái)這里最好的時(shí)候；接下來(lái)是介紹家鄉(xiāng)的景點(diǎn)和文化，并給出建議。短文應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，注意謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的正確形式。寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)合理安排幾個(gè)內(nèi)容，分清主次，并注意上下文的連貫。另外，英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)是不同的，因此寫(xiě)作時(shí)不能按照漢語(yǔ)思維逐詞翻譯，應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)出發(fā)，寫(xiě)完整的句子。如可以使用簡(jiǎn)單句結(jié)構(gòu)，易于掌握，不容易出錯(cuò)。但為提升文章檔次，也應(yīng)穿插一些并列句結(jié)構(gòu)或復(fù)合句，以及使用一些復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)，如非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞、被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)等?！军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求邀請(qǐng)Dave來(lái)自己的家鄉(xiāng)旅游，并介紹了家鄉(xiāng)的景點(diǎn)和文化。短文有如下幾個(gè)特點(diǎn)：首先文章內(nèi)容完整，包含了題目中要求的所有內(nèi)容，并對(duì)細(xì)節(jié)進(jìn)行補(bǔ)充和修飾，使內(nèi)容更加充實(shí)、豐富。短文先對(duì)Dave發(fā)出邀請(qǐng)，然后具體介紹了家鄉(xiāng)的位置、景點(diǎn)、文化等，并提出了建議。全文敘述清晰，層次清楚，主次分明。第二，短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱(chēng)，語(yǔ)法規(guī)范，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句式結(jié)構(gòu)完整，符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。短文以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)來(lái)敘述，注意了謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞第三人稱(chēng)單數(shù)形式的變化。句式結(jié)構(gòu)以簡(jiǎn)單句為主，也使用了并列句、賓語(yǔ)從句、狀語(yǔ)從句等復(fù)合句，還有一些好的句型，如The best time to e here is in autumn, because it’s really cool and you can just take some light coats、Besides, Anhui is also famous for ancient villages such as Xidi, Hongcun and so on.、What’s more, e and watch Huangmei Opera. It’s easy to understand and won’t let you down!、I’m looking forward to seeing you here!等。11．（山東中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)在學(xué)習(xí)中, 不良的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣導(dǎo)致學(xué)習(xí)效率不高。以 How to improve learning efficiency 為題，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文。內(nèi)容如下：1. 說(shuō)明是否存在學(xué)習(xí)效率不高的現(xiàn)象；2. 分析自己或他人效率不高的原因，并舉例說(shuō)明；3. 根據(jù)你所列出的原因，提出相應(yīng)的建議。參考詞匯：效率 efficiency注意：1. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)；2. 語(yǔ)言通順，句子連貫，條理清楚，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范；3. 詞數(shù)80左右，文章的開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。How to improve learning efficiencyIn my class, _______________________________________________________________【答案】How to improve learning efficiencyIn my class, some of my classmates have asked me how to study better. They often say, “why aren’t my grades improving even after I study harder?” In my opinion, it has to do with learning efficiency.First, some students spend a lot of time on other things, including puter games and TV programs. Although they always finish their homework on time, they don’t do it carefully. Second, some students stay up late studying. They might only have five hours left for sleeping. B